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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi !!!!!!!!!!!
chapter- part 1
Arnav & khushi's first meeting without fireworks impossible... it was fun reading their conversation...Payal is very mean , she should atleast consider what her sister wants...
i m happy their is no nagging Anjali & nani ...
part2
Arnav & marriage deal is unbreakable equation... but khushi is a practical women here that will save heart break... ASR proved himself the best deal maker by convincing khushi for one year marriage... no boyfriend for khushi explains it all ... waitng for the next update eagerly...
did u ask ur update is lengthy , u must be kidding right...
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats for completing the thread...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving how the story has shaped up so far and the innuendos you are thrown in between 😆
Nice to see Khushi as a professional and on par with ASR. The reasons for the contract marriage was strong and believable from both parties, Khushi getting pressurized by Payal, Arnav wanting to do something anything for his family. But why contract/1 year and all that, why not work it towards making it real? Is it because Khushi didn't have a favourable opinion on him when she met him?

The way Arnav confessed his attraction for her on their first night and now the reasons he is leavin for US early are *blushworthy* ☺️

Very enjoyable story Expel and I wouldn't expect anything less 😉 Thread bein over in just two updates is a testament 👏

Cheers
K
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Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic dear.. 😊

Great start... so looking forward to read ur next update..
interesting as ever...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.
loved it.
superb.
fantastic and fabulous.
Please do PM me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well where do I start with.? Firstly sorry for commenting so late. Secondly I am not going to give a long, detailed & elaborative comment like I usually do, coz I am not sure what I'd say & what I'd miss. So sorry for that as well.

Coming to the chapter, the first part constantly reminded me of 'Pride & Prejudice'. The party, the manner of convo between Arhi. I've read P&P so many times, I still do, somdtimes all & sometimes skipping to certain parts. I just can't get enough of it. I can see myself doing the same here.

Won't say much of Payal, just that one sentencen of her showed the person in love that she is,
"It's only him for me, no matter
what his faults are. That's
what...that's what love is." Everyone has their set of flaws. And we love them with that. Aakash has his, so will Arnav.

Two things, Arnav didn't exactly blackmail Khushi in marrying him. That was done by Payal, indirectly. And the reason wasn't exactly financial either. It was more about her dreams. Arnav chose her coz he thinks she is practical & won't get entangled in messy feelings & emotions. And he himself finds love immaterial & unrealistic & marriage a foolish institution. Its going to be interesting to see things change. Well not to forget he even asks if she would marry him just to make it official.

Arnav is going to US before time to avoid sleeping in the same room as her and he tells her that. He even asks if she has ever had sex! And we still don't know how he knew her surname? Seems he was attuned her beforehand.

Arnav is honest, blunt, despite the namesake marriage says will be faithful to her, believes to have no secrecy between them, tell her of his past calmly without flinching or being ashamed, and is utterly devoted to his family. Not to forget proud, arrogant and audacious.

Khushi on the other hand is of sacrifising nature, even now when she thinks she is being selfish, she is not. She is proud of her achievments, is practical when she asks of initial money arrangement, and later on holds onto her self-respect & honour denying the alimony. And she is like any normal girl at the end when she almost wishes for a real marriage with love and care.

Its going to be an intresting journey.

About the excerpt, what can I say? I never though myself complimenting such convo, even if I want to. But here I am compelled by you, saying I am loving it. Arnav is a pro at it and Khushi, well, how do I put it, she has that sharpness, unpredictableness & unexpectedness of a new one.

Despite saying I would give a short comment, I end up here and I am still not sure what I missed mentioning. I really loved & enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
EXPEL US ...YOU HAVE THE ABILITY TO HIT ME IN THE GUT

EVERY TIME YOU WRITE A SPLENDID NEW CONCEPT

I AM ALWAYS BOWLED OVER WITH YOUR EXCELLENCE IN CHOICE
OF WORDS N NEW IDEAS

I AM AN N WILL ALWAYS BE AN ARDENT FAN N FOLLOWER OF

YOUR WRITING SKILLS

THIS IS AN OUT N OUT TALE OF TWO OPPOSITES THAT ARE

NOT READY TO GET ATTRACTED TO EACH OTHER SO EASILY

N YET ARE GOING TO BE JOINED TOGETHER IN HOLY

MATRIMONY MAGNATE OF CHOICE

THANKS FOR WRITING N CONTINUING DOING SO


WAITING FOR THE NEXT



KKKA


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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously..just an amaizing update:)
Totally awsome:)
Arnav is soo shameless:)
Thanks alot for PM:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update soon ... it's awesome story. U know that u hv a unique way of writing. ... please bega update beku ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it so much.
Plz pm me

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