An ArHi SS: Shaadi *Completed, Moved to Open blog* - Page 100

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Posted: 11 years ago
I just loved the story. and looking forward to the third chapter of their life . please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite interesting just start reading it and I'm loving it ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite interesting just start reading it and I'm loving it ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Chapter 1

Red more than a brilliant hue obviously
It's symbolises for her life in its entirety
A contract, a bond made so knowingly
Two people retaining their individuality

Their backgrounds differ drastically
One simple & one in the lap of luxury
Bound together now in matrimony
Curious I am about their life story

How will proceed now this journey
Turbulent, or be it smooth & easy
Attraction,desire they feel mutually
She treading her path very carefully

Respect he does his wife naturally
Her husband now, her life a reality,
Though missing was the ceremony
And rituals she felt subconsciously

Trust they do each other most surely
Joining them for now atleast legally
Love we hope will follow soon slowly
Red will then for her happiness be ...

The banner made brilliantly
A story is tells us silently
Haritha I applaud you truly
For your amazing creativity ...





masterpiece 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!
I just read the prologue!! Love it!!!

Its very interesting!! 😊😊

So Arshi are legally married now!!

I wonder why they got married and what will happen next 😊

Awesome prologue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 1 part 1:
OMG wow!!! I loved it!!

Arshi meeting was awesome!!!

Their conversation was too cute and funny!!

I love how you are building on this story!!

Loving this SS already!! 😊😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 1 Part 2:
OMG!!! So that's what happened!!!

ROFL Arshi's conversation towards the end!! 😳😳😳

Loving this SS!!

Its very unique and awesome!! 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the prolog and chapter 1. Love the deliciously long updates. Story shaping well love both Arnav and Khushi in this ss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi. Read the three chapters...always enjoy your stories...would love to continue...has d next chapter been updated
Edited by gredwforge - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OK I was in bangalore busy with my final sem project and just now got got around to reading all the updates.. I thought I'll comment after i finish all the chapters in a stretch but I couln't even last till the end of the first chapter... It was absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
at first I was a little doubtful about the narrative style in first person coz i dont generally like first person narrations which focuses a lot on the narrator...but this one is nothing like that...its brilliant...just like every one of your previous stories it just draws me in deeper into the plot which each line I read...and I was like OK this is gonna be different coz it has no suspense and mysteries...but who was I kidding...the way you write itself makes an ordinary story seem like its filled with suspense and gives me goosebumps when i read it...love your portrayal of Arnav's and Khushi's characters ...and I like Khushi's character a little more than I otherwise would have just coz she's a biotechnologist here coz I'm dong my b.tech biotech too.

Gonna continue with the rest of the chapters now...
thanks for the PM

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