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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Good that Khushi thought of being selfish for a change. I quite liked the change she had made in the contract.

Over all, a sexy update. The banter between the two...that chemistry, the heat and the undercurrents of immense sexual desire... was very palpable in the update and I loved it.

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

thats a mindblowing start...loved the way you have written it. this one's simply rocking and ofcourse don't worry about the length of updates, i'm sure evry1 enjoys your long update 😊👏👍🏼

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angal

@Neha.AS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

nice plz dont do anything wrong in the end

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Loved the chapter Juhi.

Very very interesting.

As expected, a contract marriage was decided between them. The reasons understandable as well. I don't know why, but I feel ASR as really mysterious here. Surely, he isn't smitten by Khushi, is he? To think that the 'arrogant womanizer' has an open clause where they can decide to stay married even after the contract ends is quite heart-warming though 😛

I like him.

Always glad to see an accomplished, ambitious and strong-willed Khushi. Atleast this marriage will help her fulfill her dreams, and her family's too.

This 1 year will be exciting for both of them. They're planning not to get entangled into the 'messy' feeling of love, but it's not necessary that everything will go as planned 😉

Loved it!

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

P.S: The updates are in no way long! I'm ready to read longer ones 😛

P.P.S: Have fun in India! :) xx

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

ur just an awesome writer...this story line it would be easy to make it mundane and common but what u have done is berthed some sort of life into it by the way you write and make ur characters express themselves...was superb

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Really really nice beautiful n blushing update.

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Simply awesome Juhi!..way to go...now I can't wait to read your updates!

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

OMG..this ff is a knockout. I wake up in the middle of the night see your name when looking to find some good ff. and I start reading and now I want to wake my husband up. Jokes apart. I want to say, You are a fantastic writer. Just loving every but if it.

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Juhi superb update

Khushi brought up Payal without knowledge of harsh realities of life because of that she is a brat.

Khushi outbursts Payal about the true facts and describes Arnav Singh Raizada.

Loved Arnav's entry in balcony and bowing to Khushi, introducing himself as "Arrogant Womanizing Jerk". I loved whole conversation of Arnav and Khushi.

Loved how Arnav came to Khushi's home to meet her and said he asked her family members to leave them alone as he wanted to talk to her alone and loved his straight approach of contract marriage and their whole conversation about his life and how he knows about Khushi's life and her dreams.

Loved how Khushi after talking with her mother and she chosen to be selfish for once in life time.

Khushi's acceptance to the contract marriage and her changes in contract and her genuine questions to Arnav and answers to them and vise-versa are justified.

Loved the way Arnav promised Khushi and officially asked her for marriage and Khushi don't know how but she knows he will keep promise and said yes to be his wife.

Loved Arnav teasing Khushi and his boy friend talks

Loved his words "I wish you could see the colour of your cheeks just now. They were as RED as the sheet below you".

How does one block out a force or nature? ...True

Wish you a pleasant stay in India.