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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely love the way your write!
Both chapters were amazing!
Can't wait until the next one!
Enjoy your trip to India 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah!
Even without cliffhangers your story is amazing! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's just so beautiful and intriguing at the same time...long updates...are you kidding me? I love long updates 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi there, this is the first time i am reading your story, and i must say your writing skills are awesome and you have good story lined up. I like both kushi and arnavs character, and although we are seeing kushis pov, we almost know exactly what arnavs thinking from the way you have phrased his questions.
So he knows he has chosen well, and is confident in his judgement. I like that he is not going to sleep around in the 12 month contract period. Its interesting how he wanted to change the terms of the contract and it was funny when he said he will leave the next day cause it would be to hard. I cant believe he asked her about her previous sex life and also came up with his own conclusions.

I cant wait till the next update, and do please keep it long, as every chapter was enjoyable.
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Posted: 11 years ago
VEry well written .. waiting to see their journey together .. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
juhi,what a chapter lovely...i simply love it
hey does arnav fell in love with khuhsi ..he behaves in a flirty way with her
really fell bad for khushi when payal told her she is selfish ...u will give soul but u will never satisfy by it..waiting for chap 2
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😃 late again ... 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too long, eh...?? as if v r going to complain...
but the story line is unique as is the challenge for you, but its a full package...
just awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
woaaahhh arnav even knock me out along wid khushi...like her even i was thinking something dramatic like a dying dadi or hold on business shares as reasons...i actually thought these particular two!!!🤪

but serious pyal shud break up wid dat good for nothing akash if he cnt even stand for her...how he is gona protect her in future!!😡

ehm ehm..😳..in the last...my god...arnav actually asked dat to khushi!! how she is going to survive the nyt after this embarrassing chat..!! again arnav leaving for states for that reason.!!! ☺️

this arnav surprise me in every steps...

superb...job juhi...👏

nd btw i m relief to that arnav gona be faithful to her in this relationship... but as khushi already shut him off so...will he ablr to keep his promise???🤔


egearly waiting for the nxt part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
I simply enjoyed reading the parts..soo lovin it<3
Feel sorry fr khushi's helplessness. .bt dats wats tying her to our hero ;)

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