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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Oh I love this!!

But no matter how much I try I still expect a cliff hanger at the end of an update..Old habits die hard I guess..

Thanks for writing this..

And a special thanks to that person who challenged you to write this..

Must be killing you not to add that cliffhanger😃 and may we hope for the return of your trademark humor in full force??

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PriyaJoshi678

@PriyaJoshi678

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#622

lovely... i m loving it...

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Rupa

@voldemort

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#623

my god!!! ur an amazing story teller...very simple yet intriguing to get the readers hooked...

awesum updates...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#624

loved the update...hmmm that was what led to this contract marriage

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#625

vow
ths was an amazng update

so nw its clear
on what reasons arnav nd khushi entered into a contract marriage

arnav nd khushi's conversation are always intresting to read
no doubt they r attracted to each other

i lyk that part where arnav promised khushi nt to be in any other relationship while he s married to her

s arnav really going to state for d reason mentioned?
well lukng forward to d next part nd luv to enter their lyf soon.

p.s. m ur new reader
just finished reading seduction

nd m really lyking ur stories 😊

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#626

luvly update

arnav n his conditions hehehe...

He doesn't knw wat he enter into

luv dis khushi a lot c is so practical

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Ab Kay bolun😉

Awesome

Dying to read more

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Simply brilliant story telling Juhi! Mind blowing! Love it to bits! Updates are never too long! If given a choice I would love to read it all in one go! Thanks for the pm. Have a safe trip and see you soon!

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#629

Wow Juhi...very impressive concept...loving it 😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#630

Lovely update. When you posted the excerpt for chapter 1, I expected it to play out in a certain way based on the dialogues but when I read the chapter the whole setting was so different, so really you are an awesome writer who can keep your audience completely hooked to your writing.

So finally we know why arnav and khushi got married but I really felt bad for khushi. She needn't have to sacrifice her dream of a happy married life just so she can get her sister married. Everyone deserves a chance at getting married to the person who will hold their hand when they are down and battered so it really felt bad that khushi had to enter this marriage with the possibility of this thing getting over in a year.

Payal was wrong, wrong to force her sister for her happiness.I do hope you will write about payal's realization of her wrongs/her forcing of khushi to get married just so she can marry akash somewhere down in the story. It would be good if payal really figures out how selfish she was. And I would love to see arnav fall in love first but khushi still moving away after the year ends. Arnav needs to know that when you get something precious, you don't mock it and in fact cherish it all your life.

And about the length of the update, hey I am not complaining, I will take even bigger updates as your updates truly are mind blowing.