An ArHi SS: Shaadi *Completed, Moved to Open blog*

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

that was a hilarious update. a shrewd business man arnav..

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

amazing update .loved their chemistry and intereaction .khushi is so practical here and arnav is open .both are attracted to each other and no hate .good going

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Always loved your FFs
and this one is no exception ... loved it :D
cant wait for the next parts 😛

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Oh im loving it

Loved the updates

Its fab

Khushi is awesome

And Arnav is hillarious

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Oh! It took me a long time to read, but I'm glad that you have written long updates even the prolgue is longer than what I expected!

I'm happy that you've started this story. The contract differs a lot from the one of the show, but I like this more. The title shows that they're committed to marriage even if it were just a contract. Shaadi! I lie the name it has, but why not marriage with full respect to Hindi and the Indian characters? But I think you've given it a thought. Maybe I'm just blabbering.

The sitting is in Delhi so far, but it will move to California. Interesting. They are going to have their own life privately. But we expect Anjali's presence throughout the updates, right? The story is narrated by Khushi which is interesting as we can go inside her mind and get to know what she thinks and feels towards something. I don't like the fact that it's an SS!

So far, I love 'Seduction' more than this, but the dialogues here are written more beautifully; they are strong beacuse of the sharp minds of our hero and heroine. I like their fast replies especially in their first meeting.

Khushi is character is portrayed incredibly. She has done a lot for her family that she has never considered own her wedding and married life before! She praises her sister not herself, how can she be selfish? I like her relationship with her mother; they seem to have a strong, warm bond that helped them to face the struggles. I really can't comment a lot on Payal. I know she wants love for her sister too...

Arnav Singh Raizaada. I really can never hate this man, ever! What I like about him the most is his honesty with Khushi which is why he told her about Lucknow, his family, his struggles, the conditions of the contract so clearlt, telling her that he's attracted to her, and finally asking the questio that he's curious to know its answer, but he could read her face expressions so well. I like the fact that he's going to respect her as his wife and not hide anything from her.

Anjali is so good as always being the sweet Di. Garima is such a good mother for her daughters. Shyaam and Akaash are just introduced through other characters. I'm sure that Devyani and Anjali dream of seeing Arnav's kids.

So, you've done a wonderful job with this story which is why I'm all hooked up by now.

PS: Writing this comment reminded me of my Elizabethan Literature exam!

Regards,

Shaimaa

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Their conversation is a war of words. .both in a calm,serene state is capable of playing ths verbal game in such an interesting manner, I jus wonder hw that will be if there was a play of emotions. .arshi do wonders.

arnavs character has that aura jus captures mind n heart. .honesty the first thing evry girl wants in her man . .he has everything

1yr contract marriage with pros and cons and the situatn of accepting the initial sum while declining the prenuptial sum, with the same root situation v hav a film in tamil. .(only tat part)

bt I do look way too forward to read the story cos. .you write it ,from al your stories I have read there is an underlying promise kept that is, it wil b worth reading and arshi has their own way like you dont they. . .

I already started loving the story. .
gosh cant wait for the next part. .

thanx fo d pm

Edited by divyaarnavsr - 11 years ago