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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Aditiya singganya (RD) got a call from London by his dear friend sooraj shekawat(TD).

RD- Hello who is this?

TD- hello aditiya mehu sooraj...kesa hai tu

Rd (really happy)- me theek hu ..tu bata tu kesa hai or taani vo kesi hai

Td- hum dono theek hai ...umm wo

Rd (wandering)- kya huwa sooraj

Td- wo aditiya hum india arahe hai..lekin (cut off)

Rd- kya tum dono india arehe ho ..thsts grate news...lekin

Td- lekin woe k problem hai ..

Rd- kesi problem

Td- wo jo ghar hai humara India me..waha par renovation chal raha hai ...or princess ke liye bi dangerous hai ..or (cut off)

Rd-are itni si baat ..tumere ghar rahega or taani bi , samja tu (td tried to interrupt him) are mene kaha na so its done.

Td- acha theek hai (they talk about other things)

Rd- lekin tu Mumbai kyu shift hora ha hai

Td- wo kya hai ki abb taani bari (big) hogaye hai or abb wo collage start karne wali hai ...so mene socha ke vaha kyu nahi...

Rd- are yeto bohot achi khabar hai ...sooraj tu ek kaam kar ..tu taani ko st Louis me admission karwade

Td- lekin kyu

Rd- kyuki mera beta rey usihi collage me parta hai... or tuje tension bi nahi leni parege...kyuki mera beta taani ka khyal rakega...

Td- aditiya kahi tuje pehlese hi patata ke me anewala hu... yaar tune mera saara tension door karliya

Rd- abb dost hu tumara ..itna to kar sakta hu

Td- tank you (talk for sometime then hangs up)

Play this - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPzVg-E27g0

After the call he (TD) moves to a room and as he was getting closer to the room, he heard some humming sound coming out of the room then he hears guitar been played, a big smile came on his face. He opens the door and sees his daughter Taani sitting , playing her guitar while singing. She stopped singing when she sees her father standing near the door, smiling, she smiled back at him. Her father went and sat next to her.

Taani(smiling)- pa pa (he smiles more) app waha kyu kareho

Td- wo me tume kuch batana chata hu

Taani- ji papa

Td- wo singanya uncle tumari admission st Louis collage me karahe hai or kya tumne appne packing ki

Taani (really happy)- kya abbme collage ja sakti hu..

Td (sad and worried)- ha

Taani (noticed her dad)- papa app mere liye pareshan mat hojaye... me strong girl ho

Td(smile)- akhir beti kiski ho

Taani (makes a thinking expression)- hmmm sochna hoga papa (sees her papa's face and laughs) officially appki (both hugs)

Here in India its morning

Singganya mansion; at the breakfast table

Mr and Mrs. singganya are sitting at the table doing their breakfast. Suddenly Mr. Singganya noticed that his son Rey wasn't at the breakfast table.

Rd- shuruti (RM) ye rey kaha hai

Rm- wo collage chalaga ya jaldi...uski rehearsal ti

Rd (disappointed)- acha

Rm- kya huwa ji

Rd- wo muje use baat karni thi isliye (after sometime) are me tume batan bool gaya ke...mera dost sooraj..yaad hai ma (RM nodes) wo or uski beti taani India anewale hai

Rm (happy)- kya yeto bohot achi khabar hai

Rd- haa or wo humare sath rahenge

Rm- ye to orr bi achi khabar hai

Rd- or ha taani, rey ke collage me paregee...wo log kal anewale hai..so tum unlogo ki rehne ka bando bas karo...or me collage jata hu (RM gives him confused look) rey ko baata ta hu ke, wo uski dahan rake (a little sad) uski peer ke..(Phone rings) muje jana chahi ye ..see you(and goes)

First he goes collage to meet rey in the rehearsal hall.

R.H everyone were just chitchatting among themselves. RD came in the rehearsal hall surprising the gang.

Rd- good morning youngsters

Gang- good morning sir

Rey- dad app yaha

Rd- ha wo muje tumse (then looks at the gang) actually muje tumsab se baat karne hai

Gang- yes

Rd- wo muje tumsab se help chahiye thi

Gang- help, kesi help

Rd- mera ek dost London se arraha hai appni beti ke sath...or uski beti yaha admission lerahi hai.. to me chata hu ke tumsab use welcome karo or uski help karo ..okay

Gang- ya sure sir

Boys (thinking except reyam)- ragging to banti hai

Girls (thinking except Sharon)- i hope humarri jesi ho pretty and nice

Rey (thinking)- (annoyed) ehh dad itna kyu bolrahe hai "care care care" ehh care my foot

Their thoughts were broken by RD

Rd (looks at rey)- or ha rey wo humare ghar me rehegee so i want you to take extra care of her okay

Rey (annoyed)- dad kya wo choti bachi hai...i think she can take care of herself

Rd (bit angry)- REY

Rey- fine..fine dad i will take care of her

Rd (looks at the gang)- so i will go ..bye.

Gang- bye sir

Rd leaves and here with the gang

Nil- guys new entry means

Gang (except swaron)- RAGGING

Rey (thinking something)- guys is newaly entry ki to kuch karna hoga

Gang- matlab

Rey tells them his plan about how to rag taani.

Gang-cool

Rey (in mind)- yes dad i will take care of her very well (evil smile)

Like this the whole day passed with the gang and here with taani and her dad were in the plane and were waiting for it to land on the ground of India.

------------------------------------------------------------------------- precap gang and taani intro
sharon and taani hug
rey helps taani wear her leg braces
Edited by jallwa_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Yayy...me first...
Amazing update...
TD n RD both care abt taani soo much...
Omg!!! Gang planning to rag taani...
I hope rey n uski plan ke karan taani doesn't get hurt...
Precap is very interesting...
Update soon... :-)
Edited by _PanCake_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
nice update
T's dad is soo caring
gang is planing to rag her
hope T didn't get hurt
precap is intresting
exited for TR meet
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
superb updt
luving taani n her dad's bond
excited 2 taarey meet
hope gang does'nt hurt her by ragging
precap is interesting
rey is helping her aww
updt sn n
pm me or scrap me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awsum update..
really excitd to see taarey first meet..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
superb start

taani's dad is so caring
taani is coming to india n she will stay at rey's home
n study with him at same college
rey is so annoyed on this that he is planing to rag her

precap seems more interesting
update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I like Taarey dad's bonding, their friendship is amazing
Aww TD is so caring, he love her sooo much
Wow!!! Even Rey mom is excited for Tanni and his dad to stay with them
Omg! These boys planning to rag Taani, oh no
And to make it worst Rey is the head leader
I hope they don't hurt Taani
Superb update, amazing start
Awesome recap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Super... First Chapter really interesting
Taani come India and admissions in st Louis awesome nice...
Oh no gang expect Swaron planning to rag Taani... Plz god save taani...
Precap interesting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
T's dad is soo caring and rey's dad too
gang is planing to rag hereven rey is doing so
hope Taani didn't get hurt
precap is intresting
exited for TR meet
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept nd update
Rd nd td r frnds😛
I think Taani nd Sharon r online frnds..
Rey also wants to rag Taani..
Hope he doesn't create prblms 4 her
Continue soon!!!


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