ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM #6 COMPLETED - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love your portrayl of emotions⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
a totally different story with a different yet a delicate subject. u have done a good job in depicting each and every character's pain and love. no one is to be blamed except for the parents of the respective protagonists. arnav's parents's first mistake was to get divorced. no relationship can survive unless one sacrifices for the other. this does not mean that they have to be dormant. it means that they are helping themselves. the words husband and wife come in a single word couple. they both had failed. that was the first step for the destruction. second one was arthi's plead or to say correctly, her selfishness that made arnav and kushi to come to this state. third was kushi's parents who did not even an ounce behave like parents. they forced her which led her to this stage where she is broken to an extent that she is wallowing in her own grief. the final nail in the coffin was by shyam and his illegal affair with anjali which has completed destroyed her trust in male species and human lives. she has started despising every moment in her life that she has become weak physically and emotionally. apart from all these, arnav's words were not words but swords to her already dead heart which had a small ray of hope that someday someone will accept her . i accept that arnav was emotional but that does not justify his actions. when he took kushi to his appartment saying that he will take care of her, he forgot his anger. but when kushi said something in the spur of a weak moment, he had bursted and that too at an innocent one who took his wrath just because she was unable to retort. agreed that he was in an illusion that kushi did not love him. but cant he see in her eyes and know? he was a fool. i think he was too immature at the age of 20. accepted. but what now? he is 28 and even now he does not understand her. there can be love without trust but trust comes with understanding. so technically he did not understand her, leading to not trusting her but he loved her. he is complicated. he first needs to sort out his feelings and start understanding her so that he can trust her and make her trust him which will ultimately lead to never ending love. finally about lavanya. she is a darling!! i literally cried for her. she needs applauds for her courageous act. hope u have given a good end to her and nikhil. he too is sweet and he was the first person who understood kushi like no one did. both lavanya and nikhil deserve to be happy. they sacrificed for their lovers knowing that their hearts will break. but they were strong and took the right decision unlike arthi raizada. i despise such women. in a certain part she commented about this generation. many people in real world think that we new generation are incapable to take a stable decision. they are wrong. some may be taking wrong decision in their life. but not all. we are more broad minded than others and it always depends on our upbringing.

pheww!! sry for such a long comment. i read all in one go and have commented for every chapter in this one thread. hope u dont get bored. will wait for ur reply.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziville

Thanks for including the quote , credit goes to Shakespeare though 😉
No I don't think it was right for him to wait .. there was no reason to wait also .. Even Khushi moved on , had Shyam not cheated her , she would have lived with him , started family and accepted her new life ! But according to me the place where Arnav went wrong was his behaviour towards Khushi after she again came in his life ... Aggression is a part of Arnav so if he got angry and used harsh words it was probably a part of him , you don;t fall in love with some traits of a person , it's a complete package and you ahve to deal with all aspects of his personality ! But it was respect he never gave her , neither in his words nor his actions .. And neither did he learn from his mistakes .. Love and respect go hand in hand in a relation .. I believe in respecting your partner , it is just as important as trusting him :)


he became aggressive bcoz he thought Khushi left him for Shyam, a cheater. He was changed from a happy go lucky adorable guy to heart broken selfish one becoz he considered himself as ditched in love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Everything between Arshi will be fine now..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dieforasr


he became aggressive bcoz he thought Khushi left him for Shyam, a cheater. He was changed from a happy go lucky adorable guy to heart broken selfish one becoz he considered himself as ditched in love


So since he knows the entire truth now , will he change back?? Along with Khushi's, his wounds too need healing, which ofcourse cannot happen overnight. Time alone has to heal both of their wounds.
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Posted: 11 years ago
song and update was superb.
loved it.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally !! Arnav came to know abt d dark phase of his doll's life !! 😭
he kissed her ! 😳
can't wait 4 d next one ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
what the you end it there😔
update soon yaar waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally she confessed her love her pain n her remorseful past...i feel vry proud of khushi dt after happening so much with her she z still facing n living d life with courage n determination...Asr tym z to heal his doll nrespect n love her to d core dt she forgets all her pain now atleast he will understand her ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful updates...
Finally he knows all of it... his mom to shyam to lavanya...
if she suffered he was equally hurt for everything...
Waiting to read happily ever after for them...
Thanks 😊

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