i first of all will say you really have added amazing songs and some where really heart touching and some grt floor rockers.
initially i was feeling a bit weird of Khushi's role but as i read just some chapters i was in love with her character.. you really have created a woah woah fantastic creature of Khushi here.
Arnav ..he was just outstanding.
and all family members were just damn good.. much much better than what i can expect.
Khushi was really here a mysterious girl.
i will say it as my first story where i have read so much of secrets.. hats off that you thought so much and penned it with such a grt excellence..
lol in last i was laughing loudly reading poor Arnav was on floor with unconsciousness..lol
i read here a diff. Arnav who was protected greatly bt his shield Khushi..it was totally the other way what i have read till date and i really like it what you have thought of the characters.
you are brilliant.
this was really a great fiction with amazing plot and great sense of humor.
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