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Truly truly truly awesome

Wonderful story with nice plot.
You maintained the mystery of Kushi's past so well and what an angst filled past it was. Because of selfishness of one person so many of them suffered in thier own way losing a husband, losing a father, losing a mother, losing a sister, losing a friend in the process that person never felt that she lost her daughter and she lost a family.
Kushi is real strong and level headed, I liked her how she started in AR and how you started revealing about her after thier first trip to Mumbai.
ASR being ASR was bit difficult in the initial stage with kushi till he explored his own feelings to Kush.
You must be very fond of music, the songs you added once we came to know about Kush felt so right for that place. I don't know you made the situations to fit the song or song situated itself in the advancement of the story, it just felt right. And you are The Rockstar!

Story with good twists and mystires plot.

Just done with reading the whole story
An awesome story :)
Very wel written
Thanx

Such an awesome story...
Read it in a go...
Thoroughly enjoyed it...
Such a mystery...
I was like woww...
U wrote it beautifully dear...
So much mystery..
Khushi was so hurt...
Her father has been killed...
She with her family live a life of mysery...
Her life was such a cruel one just due to devyani's ego & obseesion...
Her one mistake cost so much destruction not only in khushi but her own daughter life too...
Still she never bend or think what she ever did was wrong...
Glad atlast she realise...
Arnav too suffered alot not as much as khushi but still...
An awesome story by u...
😊

omg the mystery was eating me up had to finish it one day!

Read this story in one day. Was amazing, the passion, the angst.

just read this ff and it was awesome

Hi Moumita ,

Wow Awesome story.. Don't know how I missed it all this while. Thanks to my friends who referred this story to me. I lovved the Khushi in here. She is strong.. very strong actually. I always like when Khushi is strong and sensible. who knows what she is doing very well.

This story was epic. Its surprising that a story like this didn't garner all the deserved applause!
It's one of the best ff of arshi I read so far. For someone who's a first timer in the mystery genre u were awesome.
Arnav was just awesome in this story. N khushi was well... She left me speechless. Never came across a rockstar khushi u c. Ur song choice was amazing. It's so different n refreshing. Another plus point was that u updated regularly which is amazing. Thank u.
Can't wait from reading more from u.

P.s. The epilogue was hilarious. Asr the lion fainting in the O.T. Wish smthing like that had actually happened in ipkknd.