Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 21)

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Aman3010

@Aman3010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Arnav is so broken and the jibes he makes at khushi, ufff!!!

Awesome update and loving the story very very much. Do update soon, it's tough to wait

Thks for pm

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Dat was full of emotions...Arnav loves Khushi immensely nd longs to touch her...missed her n her presence 😊 but Arnav's past is too dark to let go...his feelings for Khushi are soo immense n true..but the past hurt...betrayal...nd neglected memories just occupy his mind whenever he thinks of moving forward or taking a step ahead along with Khushi 😭...his heart is too wounded to trust sumone again...his bitter thoughts always revolve in his mind making him doubt his decision on Khushi...but why always direct towards negative thinking? 😳 maybe bcoz of his past n more importantly because he never had a trustworthy person or relation in his life 😔...but thn where would he stop them?? nd trust her just once...on his part he might be ryt nd his doubts were confirmed according to him when he saw Rishabh n Khushi 😳...Khushi as her usual self was trying to make things ryt between Rishabh n herself...now that she knows she is head over heels in love with her husband...her smile would never faint off..also her slight skip while walking 😳...and her mere thoughts of being with him makes her blush 😳...Rishabh behaving coldly towards Khushi is something i knew would happen..nd her trip to Dubai just steeled the behaviour...its high time he understands that he can't get Khushi as his partner now...but as you mentioned it was his childhood love n roots are deep...but he can try to remove them right?? 😳...his resolve to be in khushi's life was somewhere genuine but still he has to maintain the distance accordingly...but Khushi just did the wrong move...her dazzling smile had already done the trick...nd most importanty being someone's wife ad hugging her one sides lover is a thing which no husband would tolerate...and ultimately this made Arnav's blood boil...and his rage overtook every other sense...seeing Khushi smiling at him made him more angry..thats right n i support Arnav in this issue...and Khushi...living with Arnav was beneficial...it clicked her right away about her "friendly" hug 😆...but truly it was beneficial...otherwise her confusion would have just fuelled Arnav's angry to no end...her appearance wid no bangles..a dress instead of saree nd the sindoor had already taken up his anger to high notches (even im confused at this one..is it that the period of wearing is over?? 😳)...their DISCUSSION was truly a heated one filled with questions..doubts..accuses...n this time Arnav didnt bother to hold himself up...just bluntly spoke up rather accused would be proper...Khushi always explains herself but this time she actually spoke like a wife n not a friend...when he accused her for her character...i thought she would cry...n say something but she had steeled herself for this..atleast her promise to not hug Rishabh again did calm him a bit and gave him slight assurance...n the last part 😳 😳... well i just can't wait to see her proving herself 😉...this tym it would be in her being concious...n if she gathers her courage n finally kisses him he would surely be subconcious due to the after effect 😉...impatiently waiting for the next update...plzz plzz plzzz update soon...would love to see Khushi's action on his demand...i wish it happens finally 😃 😃... love u nd ur stories 🤗...nd do update soon 😉 😉 😊

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Gayathri

@gayugaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

Wow WOW THEY WILL KISS RIGHT

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skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

The person I really feel bad is for Arnav. The guy has suffered far way to much than he deserves and now when he was starting to be happy feeling loved and wanted..BANG all his hopes were shattered. I wouldn't blaim him if he doubted Khushi because in his case that would be the most obvious thing to do. He is insecure that he is not wanted from khushi and she cares and sees him just as a responsibility. I loved how you wrote Arnav's sentiments and thoughts that was beautiful. I felt a pinch in my heart when Arnav "as usual, no one was bothered about him." From inside he is just an innocent child who is deprived of love.

I loved khushi so much in this chapter. After all this time khushi is understanding him and his insecurity. I was so happy when she was openly telling him things she feels because he really needs to be told about feelings and more importantly reassured that he is needed and wanted.

And about last chapter khushi supporting shyam she is kind of right she is insecure about her leg.

And the ending was awesome can't really wait for the next update.

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Amazing updates anon...

Yeah, you are right... with that sword of a tongue he has, vocal Arnav Singh Raizada is way more dangerous than mute Arnavji...

God.. that was too direct... "No time for talking? Hugging kissing is all what you guys do, is it?"... khushi must have felt ground slipped below her feet.. Poor girl..!!

And the thing is that he is justified... with that horrible past nagging and disturbing him all the time, will not allow him trust anyone... But with khushi things are different, he is determine, he won't let her leave him... even after he witness that offending scene between friends, he was damn sure she have to stay faithful to him... "She is not getting to leave him like everyone else.. Period." Loved his determination..!!

And when he has his mind set to get the whole deal he'll definitely seal it come what may...

Brilliant Arnav... he has his way whether the situation is in his favour or otherwise...

He had his call, 'Kiss me'... now let's see what khushi has to say... That was hot..!!

Khushi was actually very very good in dealing the weird situation she end up in this time, taking into account her inexperience to damage control.. she did a splendid job to convince him... Loved her answer to his "Do you still ..love him?"... Straight and confident.

Good, things didn't stretch and got cleared almost..

About Raichand guy... I am really feeling sorry for him, it must be very difficult for him to face her all the time and stay aloof... he really loves her the concern he has for her says it... and he definitely don't trust a cold, arrogant man a bit with his khush... I only hope he doesn't take this, friend in need to save sunshine from haughty man too serious... Rest is okay.

Update was pretty soon anon loved it..!!

Thanks..😊

Edited by ashw99 - 11 years ago