Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 21) - Page 87

What an Awesome update.. I loved it to the core.. U described Arnavs feelings very beautifully.. How do u manage to gve such an amazing update everytime.. :) :) :) I love to read ur updates.. :)

Hve to say, those last 2 words KISS ME awww it Killed me.. Cant wait fr d next update.. I am restless already :)

No matter what..., the best part is that she did talk it out with him and he too spoke his mind and everything was out in the open. Arnav poor thing is so shit scared of her leaving and cheating that i so want to hug him 😊. Khushi being Khushi has to be herself, hugging a friend. Rishab poor guy i feel sad for him

thank you for the pm dear 😊. But I have already read the update and commented also.

Felt very bad for kushi
Cud feel Arnav's insecurity and he reacted in the only way he better know to express t
Oh , this s not certainly I was expecting after the last update :(
Obviously kushi can prove it , but will Arnav bear the guilt of misunderstanding her love
Please update soon :)

Hey A ji!!! That was one heart rocking update... I was expecting the misunderstanding to crop up when he decided to pick her up n when Rishab came into picture... But what came as a surprise was the conversation that followed between the couple later on... I was left 😲 like really... You don't stop to amaze me ever... N did u have to end it there... Like right there???? Not fair at all...The way you had described how they missed each other just made me miss them more...

It is not easy to bring in a third character between the lead couple and even more difficult it is to make that character equally endearing... But again you have pulled it off so easily... One can't help but feel sorry for Rishab... The way he thought about her as the only sunshine who's friendship might heal his broken heart was very well written...

Khushi is absolutely adorable... I dint expect her to take it up with him heads on but she did exactly that n with lot of confidence... It just got established that she is not the one to give up... She might be a softie but the level of maturity that this girl shows is no match with any other character in this story... Not sure if I can call it as maturity as I m sure the girl just speaks her heart here with out thinking anything beyond but the maturity comes from the purity of this soul...

Arnav's insecurities are too deep and trust is a very far word to even think as of now... Her words howsoever true it might be has not earned her his trust... It might act more as a temporary mask to hide his insecurities...

Your writing is pure magical... With every update you just make me fall more in love with this story and I am sure this is going to be one of the story that I m going to carry along with me when I go to grave... MKM has got stuck in my mind forever n it is going to stay there forever... Thank you A!!!!

Please show us some mercy for leaving us hanging there n do give us an early update... Please please please @puppy eyes@...

OMG...what a superb update...LOVED IT...Arnav was acting like such a baby who's candy someone stole...he jumped the gun so quickly seeing khushi hug rishab...I felt for khushi...but I did wanted khushi to blurt out "I LOVE YOU" to Arnav in her rage for him doubting her...all I can say for Arnav was totally a baby in this update but a cute jealous baby...who loves his khushi but can't expresses to her n his past insecurities getting the best of him...but this baby at the end clearly stated what he wanted not for khushi to prove she is his but to express his feelings for her...he is a total fool when it comes to expressing his feelings n he better learn quick because he can't keep hurting khushi...ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS UPDATE!!! :)

Every update we get a glimpse of how d drastic past has influenced d behaviour or has made up what he is now...he is stubborn, possessive, manipulative yet so child like at heart who requires constant assurances from his beloved ones of their love ...it was heartbreaking to see arnav watch khushi embracing rishabh... i'm proud of khushi for d way she handled d whole situation so maturely...please please please update d next one soon...u left us on a cliffhanger...terrific update. Thanks.

it was so awsum
greedy arnav wants d complete deal
khush huggd rishab n bechari
waiting fr d kiss if it happns

wow such an awesome update!!

superb update, but the ending was like edge on seat kind. Please have mercy and update soon.