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Posted: 11 years ago
wohoo finally you update .. Haye much i have wait ..
New twist wow amazing yarr ..
so khushi love him thats great ..
Arnav so insecure because of his past he is not ready to trust any body just like that , He ask her to kiss him :O i am dying to read next part yarr ,.
do Update soon i Can't get enough of your stories i simply loved it ..
P.S , Please update can't let Go soon i can't wait for next part Either .. :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah!!!! Awesome update as evr!!!!
Starting with khushi...poor lovestruck innocent being always bear arnav's brunt...she's trying hard to balance btw friendShip n love..thankfully n fortunately she handles his anger,jealousy n blunt behavior in much mature way
As 4 Arnav... He's still carrying baggage of his past...we can't expect him to change suddenly...khushi's truly essential 4 his sane existence!!!
As 4 raichand...never mind...completely expected reaction...all d best...
Waiting 4 next...kiss or more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry my 'like' button is not working... I don't know if what is wrong with it 😡

I wish I could give hundred likes to this chapter. ... I so loved it.. superbly written and presented.👏


Arnav is returning back from Agra and he missed his wife so much that he decided to pick her up; to surprise her ... so sweet 😊 ... That is a different thing that he himself got surprised.😲


Khushi has joined back her office and Rishabh is back... still not over her. He is trying to ignore her is a good thing. But Khushi being Khushi have a problem with that and she will never think of her benefit. It is a nice characteristic but will always be a drawback for her.


Rishabh in his first attempt to talk to Khushi created problems for her. Although it was involuntary.


Arnav us so shakki types. He will have to learn trusting Khushi. She is his wife.


I loved the bold side of Khushi. The way she explained things to him with so much confidence was amazing. She is fire.


What is Arnav trying to prove? After doing all this to her, he has the guts to come and ask her to kiss to prove her loyalty !


If in any other situation, he would have asked her to kiss, I would have appreciated and would be very happy too :) but I didn't like it here.


Now waiting to see what will be Khushi's reaction to it?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update...
Eagerly waiting ffor next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohkayyy...*phew* God only knows how much out of breadth I'm right now... Throughout the update I was holding my breadth and the cliff hanger's not helping too.. And that's something rare with your stories... I prefer it without cliff hangers...And definitely not at a time like this..☺️

"Prove it"

"How?"

"Kiss me"

@Bold- these three simple lines took my breadth away... Like literally..!! ☺️

And I love you for not dragging this MU.. Ohh wait! I love you nonetheless...😳 But thanks anyways..:) :) It wouldn't have helped our fragile heart, you know??

Ohh God, I'm in love with MKM II... ahh I know, I've told you the same many times earlier too..😃 Kya karu?? Can never stop myself from saying so...;) ;)

How do you manage to write it so brilliantly?? Raaz kya hai?? Bolo? Bolo? :D :D

Ohhkay now coming to the update,

I'm not going to blame anyone here.. Arnav has his own insecurities and as we all know he has a reason for that.. It wasn't his fault when he reacted like this.. In fact it would have looked rather unconvincing for him to accept the fact easily that Khushi thinks of Rishabh only as a friend.. It still would take some time to not let those insecurities affect him.. He just need to trust Khushi.. And that too will happen in time..:) :)

Didn't expect anything less than this from Khushi though, after she realized that she Loves Arnav.. I knew she would try and try hard to make it work and make Arnav feel loved.. But I'd be lying if I said that I wasn't scared when that MU happened.. Like I said earlier I was holding my breadth throughout..:D :D

Ohh, and I feel bad for Rohan though.. You know, it isn't very flattering to be rejected by your love... It heart breaking.. Still, I wouldn't hate him until and unless he tries to come in between Arnav and Khushi.. It would be good for everyone if he tries to not to. And as selfish as it may sound I hope he would stop thinking about Khushi in that way.. I hope to see it happening one day when he sees that Khushi is indeed very happy with Arnav and vice-versa..:) :)

Baaki toh all good..;) ;)

The only question is... What's going to happen next?? I'm sure this much of curiosity is not good good for my health..:D :D I'm going to die out of curiosity one day.. pakka.. :D :D

Totally and absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED this update...❤️❤️

Update soonish...;)


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Posted: 11 years ago
That was amazing. Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳 Wow! What a proof of love! What a demand!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply awesome...

I just dont know how you explore such complicated yet real emotions...

Arnav is such a lost soul..so desperate to keep Khushi..his happiness in his life..my heart cried out for the little boy that still resides him who was deprived of the love of his parents..his anger, his crudeness clearly shows the pain, the hurt that he still beholds in his heart...

Khushi is indeed an innocent soul ..I loved the way she instantly understood the reason behind Arnav anger and was ready to do anything for hi..Arna dont worry dear there is someone who has started to love you unconditionally...it is hard for him to trust, to let go of the stone wall but Khushi is that light which can help him to come out of any darkness...

Fantastic chapter...

Only one request after such a ending statement plz dont torture us for long and update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome awesome awsome update yaar really loved it...plzzz plzzz plzzz update fast i cant wait to read next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love you! Khushi is so desperate to show him how much she loves him. I hope Arnav believes her. Thank you for this surprise update. I feel now things will progress much faster for these two! Update again soon.

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