*Completed* Th# 1 ArHi SS: Revenge - Page 8

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binimoti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
What the zee made descision to write a new story and I am so late damn my love for you is interrupted.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Wow a brand new story nd dat too wit dis unique concpt..!

I just opened my inbox nd got to see ur PM nd i hurriedly read d update nd i am like OMG zee di is back nd dat too wit such a mindblowing story line nd d start,haye mashallah i must say i was totally into it lost in d world of ARSHI..!

Starting of d chappy,ahhh indeed hot ☺️

khushi nd arnav making love nd khushi enjoying it thoroughly nd arnav whispering sweet nothings into her ear making her smile amidst of their passionate session was enough of to make me think dat they r happily married nd much in love but soon as i reached d last part i was shocked to read dat khushi singh raizada is not at all in love wit her husband rather she is all set to take revenge from him as sumhow he is rsponsible for her snatching away everythng dat she sumwhere cherished..!

I loved it how u have written down d transformation of khushi..!

At d tym of making love she is nly khushi singh raizada who alwaz is ready to submit herslf to her hubby who alwaz pleasures her wit his immense love nd they cannot get enough of each other nd i loved it how khushi forgetting abt every damn thing made love to her hubby for some momnts of some hours at d tym of their passionate session..!

I loved it how arnav said ''I LOVE YOU" nd khushi just flashed him a dazzling smile making him feel dat he is indeed blessed to have her in his life nd he did not need anythng more from her but dat smile as words from her mouth will not b as soothing as her smile..!

Nd i loved it how she got up from d bed nd went to take shower nd pinched herslf hard to get out of her desires for her husband as its tym for her to take d rvenge nd to destroy d man who is sleeping peacefully on d bed outside nd i loved it how she was looking at d love bites given to her by her husband but which caught my attention is her thoughts where she was looking at d marks which were not given by her husband nly,wat does this mean,oho this is indeed mysterious..!

She is taking birth control pills on a regular basis knwing dat it will harm her physically,oho wat is she upto nd why she is hell bent to destroy dat man who loves her more dan his life..!

Revenge is indeed never satisfying nd wen there is love its gets all d more messy..!

Zee di i am all set to take a roller coaster ride wit u again wit dis story as i can clearly feel it dat this story is again going to b one hell beautiful one nd truth is i am already in love wit it nd i cant wait to read d nxt part now ❤️

beautiful start,ahh enough to make d readers hook up to it nd i am still thinking why d hell is khushi all set to take dis revenge from d man who loves her wit his everything..! 😳
Edited by ara_000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Lovely and new .
Happy New Year to u too.
Do PM me Plz😊

Thnx in Advance...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
What the! Ok this involuntarily escaped my mouth. Did you really write this or you are some ghost? Damn hot 1st chapter, khushi is dangerous but I think Arnav is too..
Waiting for next update now...

Happy New year, this was best gift from you,,,,
Edited by binimoti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
OMG! That is someting that i was not expectinh from u ...
Writing an FF with Khushi as a villan in it
this sounds awesome to me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
luking fwd to it... bt pls pls pls say tht it wudnt b a sad end ... pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
DOUBLE L ...I WISH YOU N YOUR FAMILY A VERY HAPPY N

PEACEFUL YEAR

N ALSO TO YOURS N MINE EXTENDED FAMILY HERE

''REVENGE'' IS SWEET THEY SAY BUT IT SURE ACTS LIKE POISON

REVENGE BRINGS RESTLESSNESS

LOW SELF ESTEEM

SADNESS

GUILT

N IT SELDOM GIVES YOU THE PEACE THAT YOU ARE CRAVING

FOR

IT DESTROYS THE REVENGE SEEKER MORE THAN THE ONE

BEING SUBJECTED TO IT


THIS ONE IS TOTALLY A NEW STYLE FROM MY DOUBLE L

YOU KNOW BEST WHAT TO WRITE

HOPE THIS WILL NOT DESTROY THE DESTROYER TO THE POINT

OF NO RETURN

WAITING FOR THE NEXT




KKKA
Edited by KKKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
WOW, a new story.. great Di
so I was little confused at first & I was like it supposed to be a revenge story na, love making ( which was really sexy ;) ) kaha se aya?? & the husband - wife thing baffled me more.. but I loved the mystery .. waiting for the next chap
p.s : I haven't commented on LI yet .. I'll, pretty soon .. promise
Edited by farha_ipkknd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
wow that first chapter was pretty intense, but I"m excited to see what this is going to be about! All your stories are such a pleasure to read, so I'm sure this will be amazing as well! Thanks for the e-mail!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Wow superb concept
khushi taking revenge ?
happy new year :)

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