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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Your's story and updates i just...

aww thats so sweet of you..
hey shubh can you plz help me in how did you added that I LOVE IT avatar...
i have tried a lot but still didn't get...

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya
Hey kriti, 😛 thanks 4 pm me yr story
Its really very different, liked it too much
Liked all the characters photos
Viha love track is also very nice
Taani n ruhi bond is also amazing 😛 😛
Antra n rey bond looks nice
Rey mesmerized by taani beauty 😳
Yes because she is our taani toh jaadu to hona hi tha
Hmmm sirf dekhna per aisa
Jb taani se intro hoga n baate hogi toh 😆
Nice dear very nice n different setup
No college no fights
Yes I tried to send buddy req but it not going maybe some error
Try againp plz pm me when u update next I will wait 😛

Thank you sooo much for all of the sweet words you have for this ff! I am truly humbled and speechless by all the amazing feedback I have gotten!

N yeah mee too like all the characters of broken path..dey are my favs apart afrom taarey..
TAANI ka jaadu rey par toh chalna hi tha...
I will surely pm you and yeah i have sent you buddyy reqst too..
stay tuned

Edited by kirti.virman - 11 years ago

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD
awesome ff
read it in one go
all chapters r superb!!
enjoyed reading them
ruhi is too cute
and taani concern towards her
liked the hospital scene
i must say u really good in giving interesting end to every chapter👍🏼
curious to read further
eagerly waiting for nxt part
updt soon

Thank u sona...
and m glad that you you found my endings (of each updates) intersting..
next update on sunday..
wil surely PM you...stay tuned

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: khyati2000
hey...
thanks a lot for the pm... 😃

your concept is totally awesome ... ⭐️
thanks again yaar... if u wouldn't pm me then i would never get to know about such an interesting story...
thnx again 🤗

Pleasure is all mine khyati...
n happy that you like my FF
stay tuned😊

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Mon_tr
jst cmplte all 6 chapters.ur story concept is jst mindblowing.luvd it.want to knw taani past.egarly waiting 4 nxt part.thanx alot 4 ur pm

REALLY...
well thanks...
for taani's past stay tuned to broken path...
next update wud be on sunday..
will surely pm you...

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey
Hey dear 😊
Read all of it 😊
Couldn't control 😆
Anyway Lovely concept 👍🏼
Awww Ruhii 😳
Lovely yaar 👏
Want to know Taani's past 🤔
Well do pm me when you update 😊
Love: Ale_TaaRey ❤️

Thank you so much...
taani's past wud be revealed very soon
stay tuned..
will surely pm you whenever i update...

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: tareyforever333
Awesome concept!!!
Love rey attitude!!
Pehli nazaar mein was lovely song and fit the situatiom perfectly!!!
Love taani and ruhi bond!!
I hope ms.tripathi's story is the truth!
Can't wait till rey finds out taani is the airport vaali girl!!!
Eagerly waiting for sunday!!!!!

Thanks a lot..
very soon rey will find that that taani is same girl..

for that stay tuned to broken path...

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Naaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

wen will u updt??
updt sn n pm me
waiting...

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Firstly I am Really very sorry for not updating yesterday as i had promised you guyz...😭😭😭
actually morning me colg n then my coaching...i thought i wud update at night but some unwanted relatives hijacked my house and their annoying kids took my laptop...
Again SORRY..😭😭
😭So i am posting it now..

PS: yes, i do have my colg on sundays...😆

Guyz mujhe mera birthday gift toh milega na..😆😆 that is your comments..eagerly waiting for them
so now enjoy your chapter...😊

BROKEN PATH-
WILL THEY EVER MEET??

CHAPTER 7

"So... everything is perfect??" taani asked to the light man who earlier requested her to help him.

"Yes Ma'm...thanku ma'm"
"Mention not." Taani replied politely.

Rey, who was lost in her beauty got back to reality when antara hit him from backside.
"Rey!!!!!!!! Where the hell you were from the morning?"

"Di.. voh I went to Vic's house..to invite him for the party."
"So..is he coming.??"
"yeah Di... accha listen do you know who is that girl.?"

Before rey completes his sentence Antara's phone buzzed.

"hello... hiii" anatra answered the call.
"Hi..sweetheart.." Raghav replied lovingly.
"So... missing me haan.." antara shot back.
"Well this is what I always do.. MISSING YOU.. antara I am just waiting for the day jub tum humesha humesha k liye sirf meri ho jaogi.."

Blush crept on Antara face which made her already pinkish cheeks into tomato red colour. Rey noticed the changing expression of her sister. "oohhooo toh RAGHAV ziz ka phone hai.."
Antara hit him on his shoulder and left for her room so that her naughty brother again doesn't get chance to tease her.

"Kahan gayi vo?? Abhi toh yahin thi??" Rey remembered about the Spot-light Girl and wondered where did she went.. "koi nahi.. I'll find you soon Miss SPOTLIGHT." And rey marched towards his room humming the same song..

"pahli nazar me kaisa zaadu kar diya..tera bann baitha hai mera jiya..."

"Ma'm.. all the arrangements have done. Food too has arrived And as you have directed the dance floor has also been set in the lawn area." Taani informed Janki about all the things.
"Good work taani...I really like it.." janki praised taani.
"Ma'm.. sara kaam ho gya hai... can I leave now??"

"kyu taani.. won't you attend the party??"
"Mam' vo actually..."
"No taani.. it's not fair... you were doing all the arrangements from morning and abb tum hi party attend nahi karogi.. this is not done taani." Janki replied sadly.
"WHAT!!!!!!!!!!! Taani tum party kyu nahi attend karogi ..arre raghav too coming.. mai raghav ko tumse milvana chahti thi..NAHI...you have to stay back.. aisa kese kar sakti ho tum.." Antara stopped in between to catch her breath.. "taani agar tum gayi toh me tumse kabhi baat nahi krungi... Or me..haan me naraz bhi ho jaungi.. taani phir dekhlena..."
"Diii... I'll stay."

"yeehheee..."Antara shouted like 5 years old kid.
"But di.. mujhe ek baar toh ghar jana pdega na..to change my clothes.. me kuch lekar nahi aayi thi apne sath."
"Chill Taani..mera kuch pehen lena.. and c'mon I am not that fat ki meri dress tumhe fit na ho."
"Di but how can I..."
"Taani abb koi or natak kiya toh I am going to slap you.." antara faked anger.
"FINE..."
"Chalo... I'll show you my clothes."

"I think this shirt would be perfect..and this jacket...YEAH!!!!!! Dude your looking HOT... Killer dude... KILLER...killer toh uski SMILE thi.. Miss spotlight.. Ho kon tum??? You were just perfectly BEAUTIFUL.. charming face..killer smile..perfect figure.. cuteness personified... JUST A PERFECT GIRL.." and rey again started daydreaming of his MISS SPOTLIGHT.

"Rey... are you ready beta..guest aana shuru ho gye hai??" janki went to Rey's room and saw his son lost somewhere.. "Rey..kya kar rhe ho..abhi tak ready hue tum??"
"Yeah mom!! Just give me five minutes.."
"Jaldi aana.." janki left from there.

"Di.. Don't you think ki ye dress kuch jyada short hai.. I mean..i have never worn such kind of dress.."
"SHUT UP taani.. it's not short at all...it's perfect just like you.. C'mon quickly wear it.. I am waiting for you outside."
"okay..."

REY was going down to party hall. While crossing in front on Antara's room he stopped in his track.
The door of antara's room was half opened. Rey's heart urged him to look into the room and he himself doesn't know the reason. He couldn't resist the voice of his heart and made his way to antara's room and peeped inside.
REY's heart skipped beat when he saw his MISS SPOTLIGHT standing in front of mirror and struggling with the back zip of her dress. "BEAUTIFUL" it's the only word which came out of his mouth. Suddenly light went off.

"shit..abb ye light ko kya ho gya..ek toh pahle hi itni late ho rahi hu and secondly this stupid zip and abb upar se ye light.. kahin kuch fault toh nahi ho gya.. I should go and check..but how can I go out like this.."
taani sensed someone's presense there ... "Antara di...thank god ap aa gayi..di plz help me with this stupid Zip.. I guess ye atak gayi hai... or upar se ye light... di plz jaldi isse thik kardo, so that I can do down and sort the fault." Taani assumed that it was antara.

Rey was confused.. "me kese help kar skata hu.. I should go and call DI here."
"Di plz come help me.."
Rey stopped in his track. Don't know why but he couldn't stop himself from going near to her.
"di plz fix it quickly" taani turned his back towards rey's side assuming him to be Antara.

Rey stared at her bare back.Again he was lost in her angelic beauty. Slowly he traced his fingers on the bare back of taani.

His electrifying touch jerked taani.
Taani turned with a jerk and saw someone standing in front of her who was not antara for sure..

"Kon hai yahan par..." taani shouted and then light too went on.
"taani kya hua.. why are you shouting??" antara came to her room running as soon as she heard taani's voice.

"TAANI !!!!!!!!!!!!!" rey was shocked.

Edited by kirti.virman - 11 years ago