{My Secret Admirer. | AsYa/KaBhi TS} |COMPLETED| - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful story!Amazingly written... Loved this TS... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
loved this concept...
continue soon...
plz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woh...asad a secret admirer of zoya!!
interesting concept!!
do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all once again! Posting the update in a few minutes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: arshiasya_101


wat r u planning to do to my asya!! dont seperate them pls 😭


Oh don't worry, I am not going to separate them. But I'm not quite sure if they're going to confess soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: --Radhika--


Oh don't worry, I am not going to separate them. But I'm not quite sure if they're going to confess soon...


awww at least ur not seperating them.. when r u updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~My Secret Admirer~
An AsYa TS | Chapter 2



Hi guys I'm back! I never thought that I would update on a weekday, but there's always a first for everything, right? Anyway, enjoy the update!

P.S- PM's later! 😳



"Zoya! Zoya!" Nazia came screaming.



Zoya hadn't flinched once as she was in too much shock. Nazia snatched the note that Zoya was holding and gasped.



"Asad?"



"Huh?" Zoya said and turned around, only to see Nazia's eyes wide with shock and her hand on her mouth.



"What happened Nazia? Why are you so shocked?"



"W-well. I was coming to you, to hang out. You left all of a sudden and so I just wanted to make sure you're okay. But this? Do you know what this means?!! You found your secret admirer, I'm so happy Zoya!" Nazia said in all one go hugging her best friend.



"Woah there, calm down. I don't know for sure. I need to confirm." Zoya replied.



"How?"



"I don't know, ok. I'll figure out something! Catch ya' later!" Zoya yelled while running towards the chemistry lab as she left her cell phone in the room.



oOo



Zoya went inside the room and saw a girl talking to the teacher, or more like begging.



"Please sir! Put Zoya with someone else. I can't work with anyone other than Asad." she begged.



Can't work with anyone other than Asad? What does that mean? Zoya thought.



"I'm sorry Tanveer. I cannot change the partners, you'll have to deal with Ravi" Mr. Singh said.



Tanveer. How could I not guess?



Tanveer went outside the lab furiously and saw Zoya standing there with a confused look. She glared and stormed off. Zoya went inside the room and grabbed her cell, left the room, still confused about what had just happened.



oOo



It was around lunch time when Asad came looking for Zoya. He was running through the halls, hoping that she didn't leave already.



"Hey!" he screamed across the hall panting for breath.



Zoya turned around and saw Asad waving at her. She blushed a little, thinking about how he is her secret admirer.



No! Don't make it obvious Zoya. He has to confess himself.



She wiped the blush off and waved back. Asad came towards her and smiled. Zoya was so excited hoping he would finally confess.



"Hey!" she said grinning like a fool.



"You okay? I just wanted to ask if we could meet up some time later to work on the project. You know? The one Mr.Singh assigned." Asad said smirking.



"U-uh...yeah," She mumbled, furiously.



"Cool, so after school?" he said.



"Sure.." Zoya replied and then stormed off.



This guy has some nerve! Sends me love notes and then acts like nothing happened. Hmmph! she thought.



"Hey!" Nazia came hugging Zoya.



"So did he confess yet?"



"No. I gotta go." Zoya said and ran off to her next class.



oOo



School was over and everyone was rushing out the door to get home. Zoya was walking out, looking for Asad as they had to work on their project.



"Asad!" she screamed and ran towards him.



"So the project?"



"Uh yeah," he said in a tone just above a whisper.



"The library?" she said, confused at his behavior.



"Yeah sure, I'll meet you there." With that, he left the halls and went towards the library.



Why is he ignoring me? She thought to herself.



Gosh Zoya! Since when did you start thinking about everything so much! Especially him.



No! He can't ignore me!! He's sending me love notes and not speaking to me face to face! It doesn't work like that.



Oh relax Zoya, I'm sure he didn't mean it.



Of course he did! Allah miyaan what's wrong with you!



"Zoya!" Humaira and Sophie snapped at Zoya's face.



"Sorry guys I need to be at the library right now. See you soon!" Zoya screamed.



"Why is she ignoring us today?" Farhaan asked only to receive a smirk from Nazia as she realized who Zoya was going to meet at the library.



"Oh relax na! It's cool we'll meet with her later!" Nazia said in a chirpy tone.



"I think something is wrong with both of them!" Humaira said.



oOo



Zoya was walking towards the library when she saw a young man walking towards her, with flowers in his hand.



"Hey! Ayaan here, these flowers were sent to you. Don't forget to read the note." Ayaan smiled and left Zoya alone with the flowers.



Ajeeb Larka. She thought as she took out the note from the flower bouquet and unfolded the piece of paper.



Follow the arrows, the first one is on your right.



What the-? Zoya thought, but looked towards her right anyway.



On her right, she saw a white piece of paper with a purple arrow colored in marker pointing straight. Zoya continued walking straight and stopped at a music store where a group of handsome men, came singing to her with another note in their hand.



Man Tum Shudam, Tu Man Shudi

Mera Jag Se Kya Vaasta

Man Tum Shudam, Tu Man Shudi

Mera Jag Se Kya Vaasta...




They came singing all in different tones, which made Zoya's heart warm. She smiled and took the note out of the mans hand and read what it said out loud.



The next arrow is behind you, follow the path.



Zoya silently followed the arrows that led her to the public library. The one she was suppose to meet Asad in.



Allah miyaan what's wrong with this man! I could've just not followed the arrows. That way I could've reached the library faster. Ugh! Stupid anonymous man. She thought to herself.



A man in his late 50's came approaching Zoya with another bouquet of flowers, preferably roses this time. The man was smiling at Zoya, and it seemed like he was trying hard not to be in tears.



"Bless you beta. May allah fulfill all your wishes," he said and left, leaving Zoya stunned.



Her eyes widened in shock. As if I didn't meet enough of weird strangers today. Hmmph! She said and saw another arrow pointing towards the back of the library.



Should I follow the arrow?



Yes!!!



Her butterflies were telling her to follow the arrow. Zoya decided to believe in her heart, and so she went towards the back of the library. Only to be left stunned, at what stood upon her eyes.



She saw a beautiful garden surrounding the whole field, and in the middle was a beautiful, elegant table. With lavender scented candles, and roses spread across the table. The garden had daisies, sunflowers, tulips and roses all adorning the whole scene.



Zoya just stood there admiring the beautiful scene that she saw. Who would do all this for me?



Just then, it struck her that she was supposed to meet Asad at the library.



Could it be him?



No! Of course not, he was ignoring you in the morning. Why would he do all this?



Zoya just stood there in her thoughts, not even noticing Asad coming out of the fence, that he was hiding in the whole time admiring her.



Time to stop admiring her secretly dude. His butterflies told him.



He approached her with slight nervousness, and stood in front of her.



Asad was wearing a white shirt, covered with a black blazer and red tie, matching Zoya's floral dress. He had a red handkerchief in his blazer pocket as well. He looked stunning.



It was after a few minutes, Asad realized Zoya was not responding. He tapped her shoulder and saw her eyes widen, but her body still in the same position, not moving a flinch.



He saw her feeling uncomfortable... Her eyes started to blur and she put a hand on her forehead, to try and stop the dizziness.



Ya allah, is she about to faint? Raj thought to himself.



oOo


PLEASE DO NOT COPY UPDATES TO OTHER SITES, THIS UPDATE IS MEANT EXCLUSIVELY FOR INDIA FORUMS MEMBERS

-DON'T COPY-


Not sure if this is a cliff, but if it is I apologize. I thought is getting a bit too long (I know you may disagree) and I didn't have enough time to continue as I need to start working on my HW now. 😭😭

Don't mind the baakwas before the whole note thinggy. I just wrote whatever came to my mind. NOT PROOF READ.😎😎

Please leave your likes and comments. <33

xoxo

Radhika (:





Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: arshiasya_101


awww at least ur not seperating them.. when r u updating


Just did. (: Yup, no confession yet! :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update!!!! Asad planning all this for Zoya!!
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I love himm!!!!!

Zoya fainted! 😲

Kyu???

Please update soon!!!
Edited by -Pyaar- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: --Radhika--


Just did. (: Yup, no confession yet! :P


asad planned a dinner for her omg omg omg 😆😆
im freaking out!
so romantic...awh no confession poor zoya bb

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