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hey whe r u going to update next... Actually i am waiting to read it...🤔😃
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

hey whe r u going to update next... Actually i am waiting to read it...🤔😃


I am going to try and finish writing it today, hopefully sometime today, if not early tomorrow. Sorry for the long wait!
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This was super cute.. Its beyond awesome.. Can't wait for part 3


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~My Secret Admirer~
An AsYa TS | Chapter 3



Hey guys! How are you all doing? 😃😃 Back with last chapter! Enjoy! 😳


Zoya's vision was blurring, she was seeing dark and soon she lost consciousness. Asad was getting extremely worried for Zoya. He was getting second thoughts on their relationship.

Does she not love me? He thought.

No, no! She does, she loved her prince charming!

But she doesn't know it was you, now does she? What if she hates you when she finds out it was you all along?

"No!" Asad screamed out loud, after having a long fight with his heart and brain. He did not even notice Zoya lying in his arms unconscious.

It was after a while he came back to her senses, and noticed Zoya lying in his arms.

"Zoya? Zoya!" Asad said, tapping her cheeks.

Zoya did not respond and Asad started to panic. Is she okay? Asad picked Zoya up, and carried her in his arms.

He placed her down in his black Audi, and drove as fast as he could to the nearest hospital.

oOo

It has been around one and a half hour and Asad was sitting outside the emergency room and was eagerly waiting for the doctor to come out and let him know whether Zoya was fine or not.

The doctor came out momentarily and was handing some files to the ward nurse. Asad ran up to him to find out about Zoya.

"Excuse me, doctor?" Asad spoke.

"Yes, how can I help you Mr. Khan?"

"A patient named Zoya Farooqui came here a while ago, she had fainted. I just wanted to inquire about her health," Asad replied calmly.

"Ah Zoya Farooqui! Your girlfriend! She's perfectly fine, and she fainted due to shock. She is alright, and will regain consciousness in a few minutes. The nurses are taking care of her now, and she needs to be taken care of at home when she is discharged, I can rely on you Mr. Khan. Am I right?"

Asad sighed with relief and was happy Zoya was okay. He didn't mind to correct the doctor and was actually happy that the doctor thought Zoya was his girlfriend.

"Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan," Asad mumbled to himself. He thought is sounded perfect.

"Uh, sir, Ms. Zoya is asking for you!" the ward nurse came and said.

"Ji. Let's go," Asad spoke and followed the nurse towards the emergency room.

"Here you go, Ms. Zoya. He is here." The nurse said and left the couple alone.

Asad went up to Zoya and saw her looking straight, expressionless, not noticing his presence. Asad fake coughed and Zoya broke out of her trance. She saw Asad standing there in an awkward position, looking down.

"Oh, it's you, come sit!" Zoya said.

Even in a condition like this, she still looked like the most beautiful girl to Asad. He still admired her in this state.

He nodded and brought a chair and sat next to her. They shared an awkward moment together, with no one saying a word.

After a while Asad fakely coughed again, gaining Zoya's attention.

"So...You okay?" Asad mumbled with concern in his tone.

"Yeah..." Zoya whispered.

Once again the room filled with silence. Asad and Zoya stole glances at each other, but nobody spoke, just stared.

Asad closed his eyes in frustration. What are you doing? Talk to her, dammit! Asad thought to himself. He opened his eyes and saw her staring straight, into absolutely nothing, once again. As if she expected something from him.

"I love you." Asad said softly, looking at the ground with his eyes closed.

Zoya widened her eyes in shock and turned her face to face towards him. So he did love me? Then why was he ignoring me?

Asad faced towards Zoya and saw her slightly smiling, which later turned into a wide smile. Asad felt relief when he saw her smiling. Maybe she does love me back.

"Really?" Zoya whispered.

"Really." He said, assuring her.

Zoya smiled even more, but then later frowned. If he was sending her notes all this time, why did he ignore her everyday? He never spoke to her. There were a million questions in Zoya's head and she wanted them to be answered, today.

"Why didn't you tell me before?" She said a bit louder than before.

"Because...I thought you didn't love me back," Asad replied, looking at the ground.

"So you were sending me the notes?" Zoya spoke, changing the topic.

Asad frowned. He thought she loved him, but by the way she was acting, it seemed as if she didn't love him back. His heart shattered into pieces at the thought of having Zoya not love him back. The thought of losing her.

This didn't go unnoticed by Zoya. She was watching his every move, and noticed his uneasiness when she changed the topic. She felt bad at not telling him the truth. That she loved him too. But she wanted to get her answers first.

"Why were you ignoring me all this time?" She mumbled.

"Because, I didn't want you to know it was me sending the notes. We weren't even friends, and if you found out, I was afraid you might not love me back, so I decided to ignore you till I was sure! And I didn't want to hurt you." Asad replied, tired of her questions.

Zoya tried hard to hide her smile, he cared about her so much. How could she not notice?

"And today?"

"Sorry?" he said.

"Today. Where you were ignoring me in the halls, and didn't even glance at me." Zoya said, with hurt in her tone.

"It was all part of a plan..."

What plan? She thought to herself and then told him to continue.

"I made a plan, that I would confess today, behind the library. And I thought, that if I was ignoring you, you wouldn't think the boy who was sending flowers and singing men was me. I wanted to surprise you!" Asad replied.

"Well I think it was really sweet of you..." Zoya said in a tone just above a whisper.

Asad smiled and then looked at her with hope in his eyes. He was getting restless. Is she planning to confess anytime soon!? He thought as he was sure she loved him now.

"So...U-"

He was interrupted as he was pulled closer by Zoya. She threw her arms around him and kissed him softly, nibbling at his lips.

The soft kiss slowly became to be a passionate one, throwing all of their emotions in that kiss. Asad didn't respond to the kiss. He was in a state of shock. She...kissed...him?!

Zoya slowly, started to realize that Asad was not responding to the kiss. She was about to pull back, but was pulled closer by Asad who had now responded to the kiss.

He grabbed her by the waist, pulling her closer, if that was even possible. They stayed in that position for a while, and were interrupted only by the nurse.

"Ms. Z-" The nurse quickly turned around and closed her eyes.

Both smiled and parted, Asad smiling at a blushing Zoya.

"You can come in now," said an embarrassed Zoya.

"Maam your discharge papers are ready, we just need a few signatures from sir..." the nurse spoke, feeling awkward.

"Okay. Give me the papers," Asad replied calmly.

He signed the papers and the ward nurse rushed out of the room. She was extremely uncomfortable in the position she was put in. Asad looked towards Zoya and saw her looking down, blushing. Her cheeks were light pink, and Asad was admiring her even more. She looks so cute while blushing! He thought to himself.

Zoya looked up and saw Asad's intense gaze on her. She motioned him to come closer, which he did immediately. Asad came closer, and closer until he felt Zoya's warm breath on his right cheek.

Zoya came towards his ear and whispered something so beautiful, that made Asad go on cloud nine.

"I love you too!" She whispered softly in his ear.

Asad turned around shocked, and saw her nod at him smiling. He felt his eyes moisten and saw hers were moistening as well. He pulled her in for a bone crushing hug and hugged her tightly. Today was the best day of his life, what could be better than finding out that your crush loves you too? Wait...not crush...his love.

After a while Zoya was able to leave and they both held hands and went towards Asad's car, staring at each other, smiling.

Finally, Asad was reunited with his love, and Zoya found her secret admirer.

--The End--



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Tomatoes and shoes are welcome, (size 9)! I'm sorry for all the baakwas you had to read, wasting your precious time.

NOT PROOF READ. So how was it guys? Please leave your feedback! Barely anyone is commenting nowadays. 😭😭 I tried making this update extra-long and sweet. So another story I finished! I'm so happy, I really enjoyed writing this story. And I hope you guys enjoyed reading it! Till next time! 😃😃😃

xoxo

Radhika (:
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Thank you!
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awesome and cute update
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what a cute and sweet ending
loved all of it 😊
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This was such a sweet ending..
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SOOO adorable! :D


Why did it have to end? 😒
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awesome update
i wanted to read more ...it ended so soon 😭
vaise ending was superb 👏

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