AR's 'Mine Forever.' A Note on pg 76. - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Awesome parts
Loved it
Feeling sad for both of them it is not only armaan fault but also ridhimma fault as well
Cont sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hey Guys,
I am really sorry for leaving the story hanging in the middle. I am not discontinuing it but I will put it on hold till I complete my ff. I am unable to concentrate on both of them together. I hope you'll understand.
Thanks for all the likes & comments, I will surely reply to them.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Nice storyline :)
I love the concept :)
I hope all these misunderstandings get cleared soon and AR get together
When you continue please pm me...I would love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Chapter Two:

The flashback had to be one of the most beautiful memories ever, it was so heartwarming to read. It must've been hard for the two girls to leave their parents but Billy and Ananya were amazing. Anjie and Armaan, best buds instantly- no surprise there. I felt sorry for Riddhima and the beginning but my heart was content reading that she had found another mother in Ananya, and they had found a daughter in Ridzy. Ahhh that was so cute, I was literally aww'ing reading about Ananya's motherly affections towards her. I'm so happy Armaan and Riddhima bonded. She seems like a kid in front of him but so cute the way he helped her with her homework.
It's like a perfect lovestory, they were meant to be. It's cute how attached they got. I was upset when he ignored but then he promised to never hurt yet he hurt her again. I was like crying when she fell down the stairs, and finally they re-united. When you're about to lose someone dear to you, that's when you realise how stupid you have been in ignoring them. Armaan learnt it the hard way. But I was cheering when they made up. That whole flashback was etched beautifully. It had me sighing towards the end.

Question: why was he behaving weirdly with her? Was it because he fell in love with her?

Anyways. The scene where she ran and hugged Billy +Annie was heartwarming. I loved that bit and I could actually feel the emotions in that scene. Tooo beautiful.

Armaan and Riddhima interaction sent goosebumps down my spine. He was described to be gorgeous man he always was, I fell in love with more reading your descriptions. Riddhima's shelled emotions are getting to me now, what happened all those years ago? When they shook their hands, I literally wanted to push them against each other to hug- the tension was unbearable.
I admire Rahul and Riddhima's friendship- on the condition that it stays like that and nothing more. He has been very supportive, and I'm loving him! The group hug at the end reminded me of DMG days.
Where's ATUL? Am I wrong in saying that you haven't mentioned who Anjie is getting married to? Have I missed something? :( Anjie and Armaan's frienship is cute too!

I love love love this chapter. I have so many questions, I love the way the story is progressing. You are a fabulous writer and this story is amazing! I love AR! <3

Chapter three:

Okaaay it's Atul, finally an indication. Sorry about my obsession with him. I love him to bits and was upset that he never got his perfect ending.

Onto the update. This one was upsetting. I loved the group gathering, Abhi and Nikki have a babygirl. It's cute to see that Armaan and Ridzy both fond of her. When Ridzy gave him ice cream out of habit, I died. That took me by suprise and blesss him, he saved her from embarassment.

Their talk in the bedroom. I wanna cry. Whyyy? What has he done, he himself doesn't remember. Omg I felt Armaan's pain, and on top of that her close relationship with Rahul is killing him. They're friends but she isn't treating him like one. Di please unite them, I wanna see them enjoying everything together. Despite everything, his protectiveness of Ridzy, never fails to impress me. The way he covered her back. Sighs.

Please tell me he doesn't think that Sid likes her?

A beautifully written update, I could feel both of their emotions. I love every single character. Fabulous di.

Btw Shashank and Padma are alive. Hurrayyy! Sorry for killing them offf LOOOL! <3

Chapter Four:
I loved the dance too bits. The way he admires her but doesn't look at her when he thinks she is someone else's. LOOOL! What a doofus, after everything he thinks she likes Sid.

How could you do this? OMG! Armaan really said, I bet it was a dare or something. How can he say that? That is not fair, no wonder she can't trust him, OMG poor baby! I would be heartbroken if something like that happened.

And then Armaan tried to explain but she hated him and she thought the worst of him. NOOO! He's not explaining it to her but then again, she's not going to believe anything he says.

Dammit. Armaan left. *cries*

Rahul will help them right?

Ridhima's talks were frustrating me. Her heart and brain need to come together and sort it out. Pfffttt! Rahul and Muskaan are engaged? Am I not concentrating properly? When did that happen? Thought they might fall in love slowly :/ LOOOL. But their conversation was wonderful. Muskaan makes me laugh, love that crazy girl. Armaan Armaan Armaan, I loved the way Riddhima spat her coffeee. He loves you DAMMIT!

Ermm *cries*

I will not comment on the flashback *straightface*


She finally admitted it. She wants her friend back. I just hope he's the same person when she returns.


This chapter was heartbreaking di but I loved it. Riddhima's frustrated state, her dilemma regarding Asad was beautifuly written. I loved it.


So now, when are you giving us the next update? It better be soon or else I'll start spamminggg.

Keep up the amazing work. You are a wodnerful writer, I admire your work. You make me love AR more and more!

P.S. not long comment cus I'm on my phone but I hope you understand that I loved each and everychapter! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
I'm speechless 👏
I wish I had some words to tell you what exactly I feel about this story..😊
You always managed to keep me nailed into reading your writings..

Story line, though a love story, has got something different in it..
Armaan and Riddhima ..oh..how I love them..

All these parts have come out wonderful and I'm looking forward to read what's gonna happen next..
The way you write down the emotional stuffs are just amazing..

So, totally I love this story and continue this as soon as possible.. please..
I'm waiting eagerly..

PS : This one adds up in my favorite FF list..😃

Love..
-Seya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
i guess aab vo FF pura hone wala hai toh iska no bhi ayega na aab... update ye wala FF bhi na yaar aab toh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: seyacandyfloss

I'm speechless 👏
I wish I had some words to tell you what exactly I feel about this story..😊
You always managed to keep me nailed into reading your writings..

Story line, though a love story, has got something different in it..
Armaan and Riddhima ..oh..how I love them..

All these parts have come out wonderful and I'm looking forward to read what's gonna happen next..
The way you write down the emotional stuffs are just amazing..

So, totally I love this story and continue this as soon as possible.. please..
I'm waiting eagerly..

PS : This one adds up in my favorite FF list..😃

Love..
-Seya

Hey Seya,
Thank you so much Dear for going through he story & letting me know. I'm glad you could go through it without sleeping, lol.
Thank you Dear, but honestly I am no where near amazing.. just an amateur writer trying out things.
I'm going to continue this soon.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

i guess aab vo FF pura hone wala hai toh iska no bhi ayega na aab... update ye wala FF bhi na yaar aab toh

Yea I hope to continue it after that one..
Wait for sometime..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Seya,
Thank you so much Dear for going through he story & letting me know. I'm glad you could go through it without sleeping, lol.
Thank you Dear, but honestly I am no where near amazing.. just an amateur writer trying out things.
I'm going to continue this soon.
Love..



You can be much more than amazing if you keep going in this pace..😃
and we, the readers would be the ones having the treat with your stories..😆

Keep writing and I'll keep reading.. this one is a promise from my side..😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: seyacandyfloss



You can be much more than amazing if you keep going in this pace..😃
and we, the readers would be the ones having the treat with your stories..😆

Keep writing and I'll keep reading.. this one is a promise from my side..😃


So sweet of you.. Thank you Dear. ❤️

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