virman ss || JUST ONE WORD ~ LOVE : chap 5 pg 17 (15 April) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry i don't know how i forget 2 comment on it i m really sorrry sorryyy feeling 2 bad n angry on myself 4 2 much late 😡😡😡😡😡😡 u can giv me a punishment 4 dis nainaaa
First i liked d title very much " JUST 1 WORD LUV " so d story will make 1 person 2 realise d difference btw 2 words MONEY n LUV dat wht place it held on every 1 life hmmm seems interesting 😃😃😃😃😃
Ch 1 : Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ u hav described virat's emotions very nicely 👏👏👏👏👏 he hav every thing in his life he wanted people 2 know him , praise him n applaud 4 him 4 his good work , he is a successful man 4 d world but in reality he is all alone , he is not satisfied with his life with his achievements n he wants maanvi back in his life , he is craving 4 her luv he wants her beside him now his success doesn't matter 2 him wht matter 2 him d most is his maanvi n her luv ( luv is d most pure , strong n beautifull emotion in d world n d person who hav luv in dere life is d most luckiest person in d world if he/she hav luv in dere dey can share all dere dreams , thought , achievements n happy moments with each other , dey can make u face all ur prblms with smile n always b dere 4 u whn u needed dem d most dey will never leave u alone 2 face all d prblms alone dey will became ur strength n motivate u 4 ur gud work , dey will make u d happiest person on d earth without dem u can't consider ur life n d person who don't hav luv in his/her luv dey r d most unluckiest person on earth dere will b no 1 4 dem 2 cherish dere life , no 1 will b dere 2 make dem strong in dere toughest situation dey hav 2 deal with dere own ) , but wht had happened dat she left him n he is regretting so much ( wht he had done with her ❓❓ ) n kamya was a nice choice as his sis 😊😊
Ch 2 : Awsum update 👏👏👏👏👏👏 virat's emotions were again portrayed very nicely 👏👏👏👏👏👏 he had always been craving 4 luv n attention 4rm childhood but never get dat person like him always do mistake like dis feeling bad 4 him ( neglection of parents led children 2 d path which dey had never thought , whn dere child need dem d most dey will never b dere 4 dem just 2 fulfil dere own all unnecessary wishes n fake fame but in all dis dey forget 2 gav dem d most needed thing luv , care n tym n whn dere chid get dat luv 4rm sum 1 else it doesn't matter 2 child after so long dat luv doesn't exist 4 dem 😔😔 ) , fb was really nice 😊😊 so virat had a contract marriage ( is marriage is a game y people do dis i don't understand dis ) 2 established his business ( maanvi is pregnant 😲😲😲😲😲 poor grl ) n kamya was really like a person who only thinks about status n society she doesn't bother 2 understands her bro turmoil wht he felt n wht he is going through she knows every thing but still behaving like nothing had happened ( ek tu contract marriage ka idea daiti hai phir ghlt ghlt b bolti hai 😡😡😡😡😡 ) every thing was written brilliantly ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ sorry again 4 2 late

Edited by kateyes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Wooow amazing updates nainu..
Loved every bit of it..
Plz update asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Aenna

Wooow amazing updates nainu..
Loved every bit of it..
Plz update asap..



Thank u aenna... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: pink1

both the part is nice he done
with her as a contract marriage because
of his beeji and elder sister and know
he want her in his life because he stated
love her update soon



Thank u 😊
Stay tuned... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: hangok

thank you thank you
for the pm

this is great oww i loved the beginning,so this was a contract marriage for virat, but was it the same with manvi???

oww im soo excited about this ..

great work as usual naina



Aww ur most welcome bennu... 😊
For knowing rest of the things, u got to stay tuned... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
so he wanted to do a contract marriage
and manvi is pregnant
but y did she leave?
continue soon
thanks for the pm



Thank u niki...
To knw more... Stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

wah naina another one tu itna sab kuch likhti kaise hai😲
virat yu deserve it for listening to ur kamini sis ab bhugto ...par manvi hai kahan ??
update next part soon ok



God knows 😳 anyways thank u n stay tuned... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Lovely update..

Pleasee update soon..

And thanks for the PM...



Thank u chandinie 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Just awsm Naina...frst hatts off dear for ur writing skill...
Hw u managed all this stuff dear? ???
But really u r amezing writer...everything every part seems real...
Very easily imagine virat' s pain ..virat' s hurt...loved it..
Want more and more dear..
Egrly waiting for next update..
Thanks dear for pm...
Keep rocking.



Thanks a ton... 😃 means a lot...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loveed...this update...👏⭐️
continue soon plzzz😊
thanx for the PM...😉

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