Beautiful lie!!!A Rantara Reincarnation FF; updated part 21 in page 46

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Capucine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Jyo, two superb updates

The poor Raghuveer is in a such turmoil, my gosh ! And Antara who feels that something changed in Sameer / Raghu.

Please update ASAP

😊

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Jyooo that was great! I loved the pics they matched the situation so well!

I swear this story is very intriguing and you know exactly what I mean! Uff I can't wait to read more and more 😳 ❤️

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divzz29

@divzz29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Wow so beautifully written loved it and the pictures r perfect according to the situation

antara got her prince charming great :D plss update soon cnt wait nw and thanks for the pm

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gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Omg!!! These were d best updates till now...

I just cant tell how beautifully u hav expressed their feelings n

specially photos did wonders...they were apt!

Lovely update dear...plzzz continue soon n thanks for pm... :) :)

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Deeps

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

I loved it...superb dear...👏👍🏼

The prince she is talking about is actually raghu right?😊

She can feel his presence and changes in him..i think this will the main point for her to realize between who is sameer & raghu😃

Beautiful song...

Why there is no Precap?

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Haya Khan

@hayakhan5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Hayaii...
What perfect romantic update,..
Amazing tha..
Raghu made her feel the rain.
He dreamched for him...
Very nice...
Loved it..,
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me..

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

First of all a bi g hugg n thanks fr d pics..

Of raghu n antara..loved🤗 dem yar...

Then back to update...11 chapter was soo emotional

Frm both raghu n antus pov...

N 12 part was grt as raghu got to jbw antara n sameers

Relation n made hin happy..

Dis ff isreally grt one..

Loved it..waiting fr nxt part..

N big thanks fr d update

Happy writingg.. 😉

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Rachna

@richurachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

wow I love the picture part.

antara got her prince charming great

this story getting day by day intersting

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pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

omg Jyo... it was beautiful ...beyond beautiful ...loved it so so much ... n the pictures that u hv inserted in between r all so perfect that it gave ur writeup an extra vigor... it was an extra treat ...loved Raghu's staring at her n everytime she sensed it ... i wished i can read ur story whole day n night without stopping ... ohhh it was such a mind calming journey ...

n Raghu's eyes ufff the picture is sooo good ...Ayaz is so so ...#$%#$#@#@ ...have no words to describe him ...😳

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nbw16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

The undying spirit of conveying shades of love n pain on paper dwells in u Jyo... 👏
You r one of most special writers i came across... 😳
You have the power to bring so much of transformation in every frame of story..! 👏
u r killing me into pieces ... Raghu's helplessness is so evident n heart wrenching... This is too much to handle...!
I m trying to settle because I know it will be fine ... 😊

Sorry I didn't replied to ur question few days back...
My instinct: Why do I feel that Antara knows everything...? I mean is she testing Raghu...??
or is she trying to win over him or is this about trust she looking for... ? I think Antara's eyesight wil be back n revelation of truth is kind of related .. Oh these questions r scary as hell
Raghu's childhood is a like suspence thriller... its quite unpredictable... connection with rain is such a deep concept... 😕

PS: The update was divine with those short n sweet moments u portrayed with pictures..

Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago