Arshi SS Key to your heart..Chapter 15...*COMPLETED*

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Loved d update
Thanks 4 pm

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: aayt
awe that was so sweet

she dressed up for him n she liked stubble just because of him

he shaved for her n what he wished did he wish to have khushi they r falling hard

she soothed his pain n he was so drown by her no need of any medication he is the remedy of all his pain or restlessness

akaash very smart was all observing his behavior Anjali's agent

Anjali all ready to play cupid invited gupt sisters at her place arnav broke her warth not bad n wished her

lovely update

thnx 4 d comment..😊...

well it is believed that if u tell out vat u wished for, then it wont happen..its like u jinx it..

n we would all want Arnav's wish to come true...wouldn't we..😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic update 👏
Its beautiful, so sweet and romantic.
WOW Arnav and khushi have become so comfortable with each other.
She gave him a head massage and he enjoyed it, her hands worked magically that Arnav didn't even felt to take medicines.
His wish has already granted, I think some one before him had already wish for him to give him his soul mate.
Love khushi's saree.
Arnav was destine to break khushi's fast that's why moon wasn't citing in front of her.
Love the whole pool side scene, Arnav getting mesmerize of khushi's beauty, amused on seeing over joy khushi on seeing moon and then he broke her fast like its only his "haq".
He remember khushi's birthday and he is also the first one to wish her and that too in a special way, so lovely.
I am sure Arnav will make khushi's birthday a memorable one.
Waiting for the next update eagerly.

Thank you my dear for this awesome comment...🤗

yes..i am sure Arnav's mom must have wished for the same as well...someone who could be her chotte's better half..

Thank god so far everyone has like khushi's saree...trust me...it was hard..had to browse a lot to find the perfect one..😊

Well..I will be explaining in the next chapter as to how Arnav got to know abt her bday...though its not a big mystery...😉

Aah..you have given me another scenario 2 write abt..thanks..so i vl think of some unique and romantic way to make Khushi's bday memorable..now thats a challenge 4 me..!!!

As I am a first time writer, ideas/plots don't come easy to me...it does take a while..but once i get an idea, I can write the chapter in like 30 mins..the Karva Chauth part was written in super quick time..

Vl update as soon as i can..tc

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Fantastic update 👏 Sweet and romantic

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

absolutely amazing.arnav breaking khushi's fast.want to know wat gift arnav would give khushi

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

beautiful job! loved the update, so magical!

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: imrannc
Awesome update
They r attracted to other I hope fall in love soon
It was cute the way he broke her fast
Thanks for the PM

hi..thank u very much for your comment..happy to know tat you liked the update...

in fact after the last chapter i was struggling a bit to think up romantic situations between arshi...then i saw your comment for chapter 7 and i was..like...ok..there are readers waiting for the next part and itshigh time tat i write the next chapter..

then i got the karva chauth idea and whola..!!...i posted the chapter same night..so thanks to you for giving my thought process a much needed push ven it badly needed one...hugs...tc

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Hetnjig
Just came across this story and read it one go today. I really liked the story and love the Arnav and Khushi's feelings for each other are building up. It was nice to see Arnav not lash out the ASR angry on her and seems like everyone had noticed his happy mood.

Last update was nice, him coming home and finding her near the pool...so sweet. The way he went to break her fast without knowing the meaning of it or does he know?!?!? And what a surprise that he knows her Birthday...looking forward to the next update.

Hi..thanks for reading the story and commenting..😊

This is basically a rom-com FF though the element of comedy has evaded my imagination till now..i hope i will be able to add that aspect as well into this FF..

The poolside does happen to be a wonderful setting for any romantic scenes...😳

Yes..Arnav broke her fast..but as mentioned in the chapter..he does not really care about the rituals of Karva Chauth...as being a bachelor, it remains a festival that only women in his house celebrate...For him the birthday occasion is more important...but for Khushi its the fact that Arnav broke her fast is more prominent...

vl pm u ven i update next..tc