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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

I heart this story , K :)) :D
Wl comment on 27th.
All the best Saiyyu fr u xams. Hope m nt late in wishing u..
Merry Christmas dear K! :))

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Khushi's n Arnav's nature is so much etched into my mind that now whenever I read either her or Arnavz thoughts abt so called deceiving him , me immediately samajh jaati huin ki there definetely ws a purpose fr Khushi to hv done that n my dear Arnav hs misunderstood her cuz his shatir dimag always wins ovr his heart!

Im sure Lavanya must nt hv hurt much cuz she seemed to me a understanding gal..

loved the setting of the story ... m beginning to like the stories being narrated in the flashback a lot!

Shyam cudnt get much worse n cheap than this ... that Bl**dy A**h**e... n everyone were trying to salvage the situation in their own way...

they acted according to their inherent nature...

khushi always puts forth the ones she loves , the selfless creature that she is... For Arnav , the protective bro instincts rises 1st even if it means doubting the love of his life? Devyaani ji , like the head of the family , looked for everyone out there with absolutely perfect sense of right n wrong...

its been fantastic to read something written by u after a ling time , K! :D

love ur DP! i was instantly reminded of "naa jooda honge hum , kabhi khushi , kabhi gam n atoot rishtey! "

Edited by kooldewdrop - 11 years ago

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

loved it..
it was amazing..
i loved the way things happened!!
n loved ur version of arnav n khushi ..
merry christmas!!
😊

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Great os kalyaani😊

In a one shot, you were able to get through so much of a story, the backdrop of it, and also the characterizations of all the key characters, great job doing that!

Arnav was downright cruel when he thought khushi betrayed him, and it takes a woman madly in love to be able to forgive him like that. If only she had cleared the misunderstanding at the very beginning but I guess we can't live with thinking along "if only." Unfortunately both had two much pride and ego to clear the misunderstanding but at least dadi was able to do it for them in the end.

Thanks for the one shot, hope we will get more of your writing soon!

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

In just a One Shot u managed to write d character sketch, d plot and d climax along wid sum awsumm arnav khushi scenes :)!!
Dis is one of d best one shot i've ever read and i know i cant xpect anything less dan dis from such a distinguished writer!I love d way u always write khushi as a sophisticated business woman, one of d reason I love ur stories(pursuit of love) being my favourite.
Even here d party scene was really brilliant, wid both Khushi and Arnav not backing down.

Amazing one shot :)

PS- I was hoping I would get access to d blog from soo long bt unfortunately couldn't have ur trust. Plz do consider my request. Sincere Plea.

Edited by Sj236 - 11 years ago

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

whoa...was this an OS??? didn't feel like it thou... it felt like a complete FF with amazing scenes... showing the past of the characters and details of their emotions...

You are an exceptional writer 👏 loved this OS to bits 😃

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Lovely and beautiful OS...Very well written...It is a real pleasure to read about Khushi in your stories...she has always been a strong personality...Lovely choice of song...please Kalyaani write more...we are missing your stories a lot...😛

All the very best Saiyu.

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

This OS is one of a kind!! And I absolutely loved Khushi's character here-so wise, calm and strong! Thanks for this Christmas treat!!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

A beautiful story of how love triumphs in the end ...

Arnav is so quick to mistrust and misjudge his Khushi ...

this characterisation is so typical of him ... 😆

and then burns in hell for days ... torturing himself in the bargain ...

Khushi is so righteous ... will go to any lengths to help someone out of a situation ...

even if it puts her in a precarious position ... so typical of being Khushi ...

Just loved the story ... K ... hope this is a start to many many many more from you ...

Sorry for the late comment ... I blame it on AD and bad internet connection

Wish you all the best for your exams Saiyyu ... ⭐️

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

A beautiful story of how love triumphs in the end ...

Arnav is so quick to mistrust and misjudge his Khushi ...

this characterisation is so typical of him ... 😆

and then burns in hell for days ... torturing himself in the bargain ...

Khushi is so righteous ... will go to any lengths to help someone out of a situation ...

even if it puts her in a precarious position ... so typical of being Khushi ...

Just loved the story ... K ... hope this is a start to many many many more from you ...

Sorry for the late comment ... I blame it on AD and bad internet connection

Yeh kya hua ??? Double post kaise aa gaya ...

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

thank you so much for the PM Kalyaani..it was really good to read this one-shot..I simply loved it..it was very well written..really nice...simply brilliant...awesome..keep it up..beautiful penned and portrayed...😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 11 years ago