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arshisarunfan11

@arshisarunfan11

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

It's refreshing to read something from you after a long time. Loved how conveyed everything in the OS - their friendship, their love, their misunderstanding and finally their reconciliation. All's well that ends well, right?

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Amazing os.

It had everything in single update and I loved reading it 😊

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Here I was waiting to read ur works eagerly and just now I came to know u have posted something.. Silly silly late latif me..🤪

will edit now after reading😃

I was reading the os with a intrigued mind and thinking khushi seemed such an awesome and strong girl wht went wrong whn the line khushi was a woman of few words struck me..Somehow imagining khushi and few words in the same word is always a surprising element.. and here it was certainly a pleasant one👍🏼 On the other hand seeing a MU between arshi didn't please me much.. and there was this trademark ASR... Getting engaged to someone else preferably La because u loved khushi which u couldn't accept to even yourself😕

A love that doubts easily and accuses liberally, may not be love in the first place. Love does not stands alone, Arnav; It stands with trust and faith👏

khushi taking the initiatives to confess or rather show her love (with a tattoo while she's at it) and thn again make a remark whn arnav was kissing her lovingly..She surely is a ⭐️😃

Quite the narcissist you are Arnav, to kiss your name that lovingly😆😳😃

shyam kahika..😡😡 but he brought out the ASR side of arnav, the very person who was acting very much like he didn't care about khushi sprang up 😃 apparently only he has the rights to insult His Khushi😆 and thn devyani slapping shyam just made it more awesome..

and thn the truth came out..wht suspense and turn of events.. devyani and khushi together to reveal shyam's evil deeds and more over ASR actually using ASRish brains and knowing abt shyam..👏

I do know a few people who are vying for your blood😆, all I have to do is make one call and you would be nothing more than a body on a funeral pyre. this was just too good. My ASR😳😃

Throughout reading the OS i was thinking this would be an OS where khushi would be the star but the regretting arnav who went all out to apologize.. hayeee he was just perfect

The name and the last line of the os.. was perfecto..👏

PS. Sorry I tend to write very long and boring comments.😕

@saiyu.. all the very best for the upcoming xms..🤗

Edited by simi58 - 11 years ago

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Lovely to have you back.🤗

This was one pleasant read.

Thank you😃

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

That was a beautiful chapter.

Thanks for the PM.

Hope you will post more Arshi OS, SS in IF .

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

that was a very well written OS .. yu are the right person to participate the OS movie contst if yu are willing to , by the way :-D

i liked the story ... khushi s dress ..n ..diamond earings ;-) ..
shayam as usual was a villian :'( ..

khushi s tatto-ed neck ... and ... arnav being a narrcissist reminded me of two sweet sisters on IF ..
haha...

one thing wch made me 😕 was raizada s were very calm .. knowing that their son in law was a fraud .. n that divyani .. was aaram sy sitting in study room wth family ..n ..drinking water ..n discussing the matter... ( dnt take it wrng sense plz ..i m nt bashing yu or anythng ...maybe its very unlike me as in ... foran impulsive person like me to grasp it ) 😆

i loved the arshi scenes... <3 ...

aditiya kashyup ... reminded me of jab we met ...lol..

got the os link from ..mints n aashi 12 s posts :-D ..so thnx to thm...

and last but not least ...

saiyu ... achy sy paper dyna .. :-)
good luck

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 11 years ago

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Oh man!!!!! Kalyani again...really I did double check who send me this pm...so strongly built characters n amazingly written OS...

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Happy new year to you too dear...

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

It was such a beautful OS...thoroughly enjoyed reading it...I just felt like beating Arnav up for his accusations...Upon revealation of truth i was like '' One man n such a tangled web''..he had all of them behind him...It was good that he reached where he belonged..Jail..
Lovely OS...thumbs up to u...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Beautiful as always K. He could not trust her but was lucky she loves him enough to take him back. What is it with men and jumping to conclusion before verifying their facts? I love how this whole story takes place over the course of the night with the flashbacks in between. Love the song that you have broken up as the story progress. Well played Devyani! Putting the ball in his court and forcing him to decide on the spot. Kushi must be pissed though that he decided for her when he was the one who did not believe in their love enough .. . Hope she makes him stay in the dog house for a bit.