::*LaRa FF::Love would always be a Struggle *::(Chapter7-Pg#23) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .RadhaKrishnan.

track going good,👍🏼
i want our raj as good guy



raj neither good nor bad
i just show to the character in that way😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Let there be no sanity among lovers
especially among lovers of such sweetness


She going to leave the room,but she truned a give a fire look,raj still staring her,she said "shit,u don't feel anything shame " ,she leaves there

There is no change in raj , he feels something new,he never experiences like this ,

he feel kind of sweating ,He standing up ,pacing in the room,accidentally he saw his face on the mirror,he find Lata's red lipstick still on his lips👏😳😆 ,he rubbed his lips by thump

he never ever touch a prostitute without her interest ,but how ?how its happen

Turn around then start to think ,first who is she ?why she comes here?

Meanwhile Lata come out from the hotel,her shattered hair make to think whether she is mad?

She feel fresh air on her back ,she remember her blouse knot were untie up by Raj ,😳she frustrated took the bottom of her pallu ,covered her back completely like Nivi style saree ,(she scold him in bad words)"idiot guy

He defiantly not born in good family"

she walk fast ,run...she dont know what she doing

finally She knee down,cried i think my restaurant chapter over

I cant save my restaurant,my dreams all gone ...

In Raj room

Still he roaming around there ,still feel the The ecstasy of the first touch😆

There is something hitting his foot,he look down that's broken pieces of Lata's bangles ,he take that very carefully like 24 cart Gold(Precious isnt it😉) ,he try to put on that mini table ,he saw the file which lata left it there

He open see the document of "Jaipur cafe"(Lata restaurant name)

He slowly remember the the words by varun ,oh she is that Lata thakur

(Raj doing multi business ,predominate three one is telecom ,second Granite business along with construction ,third one hotel Raj inn & groups now Raj remember he took the tender to supply the workers in that metro project),he remember this restaurant also included to build that metro system

Raj ashamed for his behavior , he feel so guilty ,how I did these things to girl who come here seek the help from me ,his mind only things like but his heart feeling are different 😉😆

Now there is a girl enter the room(she is the real call girl who usually fixed by varun 😆)

Raj come to this world ,he gave her some money,n ask her to leave ,

she surprised to get money before any services😆 she turn n see Raj then she go out

[Who know she is the last call girl who enter in that room😆]

Lata reached her home ,she open the door with the key she always have ,in Mumbai accommodation problem so they allowed some servants to sleep their hall,when she enter ,everyone are slept without any noise she reach the room , After raj kissing ,she feel like dipped in a drainage 😆 she took her saree and throw it away, remove her dresses and took a fresh shower,she thought all her sin will washed away by this water ,she ready to sleep

Now the time is 1.30 am,she about close her eyes but suddenly she remember the way raj push her into bed ,and kissing her neck slope,ears,eyes .she wake up ,15 minutes she done meditation ,then goes to sleep but again the nightmare of raj disturbed her 😆 ,she wonder why I cant come out from this raj?even I m not very disrupted after the break up of one year love with Mano"

She thought why that raj staring me like that,his eyes says something but how this guy don't speak anything even after I slapped him,may be I did something wrong

Again she said,shit I m not wrong ,his behavior never forgiven ,he so bad

She thinking in whole night like this

At early morning ,Raj wakes up on the sofa,he see the file and bangles on tbale

He put the broken class bangles pieces into the safety locker ,along with his diamond ring (precious isnt it)

Kept the file on the table,then he took path, he saw his face on mirror while he dressing he find something different

His cheek look very reddish ,suddenly he remember last night slap by Lata(he smiled ),

He thinks ,"till the date I share my bed with many girls but last night incident was something new though the things are not pleasant but whatever happen on last night have high intense "

His forehead shrink ,he ask himself can I love people?"

I don't know who is she ?even I m not sure whether her name is Lata?BUT my heart went with her😆

In Lata home ,lata getting ready to go for restaurant ,rathi ask her to eat something ,she denied

But later she agreed to eat by the completion of Rathi,on tanning call Lata feels something burning on her lips while eating speicy breakfast,she drink water but still feel it, she thinks why?then remember last night raj bite her lips😳😆she throw the plate

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Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i think something unconnected😕
i know raj 's sudden change isn't possible ,but anything possible by our Lata ji😆

its big update second part will be update shortly,meanwhile feedbacks are welcome🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
@upilla. wow this illu illu is moving fast between these two!! 😉
wonder if raj will take revenge?? but have a feeling he will replace the bangles - that also expensive ones.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i think Raj trun good,loved both have severe impact by this kiss
lolz Lata's lipstick on raj lips🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
@upilla. please edit the chapter and page no. in the header 🤗
Edited by Ms.S.K. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^Shobhi i think she have another part to update
so she may change it later
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanushka_Sobti

^^Shobhi i think she have another part to update
so she may change it later


thanks 🤗

where are tapu and sakthi?? they will love this FF
Edited by Ms.S.K. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^thanks shobhi n tanu
continuous of this chapter going to update now :)
shobhi ,will change headline soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

In restaurant lata went to park her scooty ,but she find there is a Skoda car already parked there,she thinning may be its belongs to their customer

She goes inside,she saw someone inquiring about her into their receptionist

She move towards them ,its none other our Raj

That reception girl told,sir mam behind U,he turned ,Lata stunned

Raj move towards her ,his face show he feel guilty inside,she angrily staring him

He start to speak "MsLata I m sorry actually I m...im ...

Lata interrupt "MR.u just throw sorry into that dustbin ,I don't want any explanation from U 😡"

She turned to move ,raj try to stop her ,he touch her hip inserted of her arms 😲

She got angry she helpless due to the atmosphere ,(raj scold himself, fool why always do mistakes😆) then he told "sorry its just happen not by intention", now hold her arms make her to sit on a chair

He too sit with her ,she feel very uncomfortable with especially whenever raj touch her,but the situation helpless ,cant blast him in public place

Somebody thrilled to see Raj there coz he is the india's 9th rich person by forbes magazine list now he is in a ordinary restaurant😛 .

Raj, can have a cup of coffee?'

Lata ask the waiter to bring coffee,she saw Raj"Mr.drink coffee and u can go,now I have lot of work don't disrupt me again'

She about to get up ,raj hold her shoulder to make her to sit,Lata throw a angry look towards him ,he look down Lata face especially her lips (he remember the last night)🤣,he did a naughty smile😉 ,then he turn his head on other side coz he don't want make her more angry😆Now Lata look raj face ,she saw his reddish cheek (she remember the last night slap)🤣🤣she laugh inside.

Waiter bring coffee,Raj sip coffee and explaining the mistake what he did it in last nigh & he promised he never behave to a woman like this 😆,he further explain how much he still worried ,some have Lata touched by this but she still shows her angry.

He further add ,"u know I m the contractor to build metro system in this city,(she bit shocked)Then he said but I really love to help U all,I wish u all soon arrange a association meeting between all shop owners"

she stops him n gets up "we don't want ur help ,we will face our fate,thanks for ur concern'

She walks out from there ,raj follow her ,she understand he coming behind her,she go inside of dressing room(that's where their servant used to change their dress into uniform,even there is two bed to take rest for them ,)

raj also went inside &door closed.in day time the room always free,

she said in rude voice,"see Mr.Raj if u want ,u can start the construction work,but don't give any crocodile tears for poor people like Us,we know how to survive in this dangerous world"😊

Raj once again attract by her braveness,but he wants to troll her said," u scared of me that's why u step back to protest against the govt?"

She said No, I never feared of anything,now what u want ?today i will arrange the the association meeting ,now u can go😡

She try to crossed him but unfortunately her heels slipped by a cloth ,its make her to fall over Raj,he unable to balance her ,both fall into the bed,this time she top of him😆😆

She didn't kiss him but accidentally her lips pressed his lips she embarrassed ,she up her head ,Both sharing a beautiful eyelock ,Lata screaming said sorry I m extremely sorry ,[he mesmerized by her innocent eyes,he never see such innocentness from any of his girls,he thinks may be this why his heart run behind this girl ]she try to get up but her chain pinned on Raj brooch ,she try to take off her chain ,she tries in hurry ,Raj said don't worry I will try,he gently remove her hand,slowly take her chain from his brooch,she smiled about to get up,they hear a voice"Are u guys romancing?"

They shocked ,they trun and see that's Rathi standing there,they get's up😆😆

Rathi thoughts Raj as Mano(Lata didn't expose their friction between she and mano) ,she said "didi Jija so handsome"(Raj laughed😉)

Lata shout Rathi beta stop it' he is not

Rathi told didi don't lie to me ,I know all details ,Jiju and u look amazing together,(she start to praising them much)

Lata irritated ,Raj seems enjoying but he hide it for Lata😆

Lata interrupt her ask he why she came here?

Rathi said she plan to go movie ,so wants money ,Lata said now she don't have any money so go and get it from the restaurant cashier , she will give them later,Raj stop her took the money from his wallet and try to give,Lata stops him,"who are u man ?"Raj ignore her ,hold rathi chin and beta isnt I m ur jiju ?rathi said innocently "yeah" ,"then u have full right to take my money"rathi agreed with him ,"didi u cant stop me,"she turn Raj side Jiju you so sweet"she pinch his cheek and get money from said bye to both before leave the room Rathi turn said to Raj"Jiju before left this room plz wipe ur lips and chin coz diti's lipstick is there" she laughed and left.😆😆😆😆Lata tensed even more,in angry she bite her teeth ,

Raj known this ,he give fake fear turn his head other side

[Raj thinks ,first time I act like this ,don't know why i m doing like this ,but its quite enjoyable]

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(to be continue)

Edited by Upilla_Grover - 11 years ago

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