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Okieee, get ready for a massive comment since i just finished catching up with all the updates😃
First of all, hope you had a great New Years! Hope 2014 is amaazing for you🤗
So i have been reading and commenting in a notepad file at the same time, so this might feel like a live commentary lol😆
Chapter 2 was amazinggg, but read it quite a while ago (when i was holidaying - raha nahi gaya hehehe) hence no live commentary sorrryyy
Chapter 3
awww, loved the conversation when she confronted him about his decision to marry her..he loves her he loves her 😳
eeek i could imagine the sound of her payal when she was approaching him at the mandap and then you wrote those famous SRK lines ❤️ - i died hayee
Chapter 4
awww the suhaag raat *dreamy eyes*
veer zaara ka gaaanaaa *thud*
ooh...truth? what truth? i have a feeeling he was talking about her on the phone...hmmm
Chapter 5&6
their convo almost broke my heart 🥺 he loves her so much and she has no idea :(
i can see though, that she has started falling for Arjun..
so much of dard and misunderstandings 🥺
so many SRK songs *thud*😳😳😳
loved the conversation of sakshi and her mother - so well written! i wonder where rohit is...hmmm
Chapter 7
omg omg omg KKHH songgg ...maar hi daalaaa😳
aaahhh he wanted to tell her he loved her..why dont you listen girl!😳 and she has started to fall for him..but she still doesnt realise he loves her too
and you killed me with yet another fav song of mine - suraj hua madham!
ahh the next scene is so beautifully written, especially the last line:
But for now, he'd just keep her in his arms, and tightened his hold on her and rested his chin on her head.
Chapter 8
omg i love you for the song from chalte chalte😳🤗
and the arakshi scene 😳😳 hayee
you are such a beautiful writer Tina! 👏👏👏
Chapter 8 was so beautifully written..ahhh the sweet feeling of falling in love😳
OH.
MY.
GOD.
rohit is back ?? 😲😲😲
whaaat!
Chapter 9
oh no... i have a feeling Arjun's heart is going to be broken..
*GASP* WHAAAT? Arjun forced him to leave her? 😲😲 but then there must have been a reason!!!
i think rohit is lying..i dont like him already😡
oh no oh no...i could literally feel Arjun's anger!
he asked her to leave his house 🥺
Chapter 10
OMG. how much i hate rohit now.. 😡
and he was cheating on her?!!!!! ARRRGHHH what a jerk!😡
"But Arjun, what about that call? The girl you loved?" Sakshi asked.
the girl still doesnt realise he loves her and it had been her all along..lol😆
aaand she finally realises when he tells her🤔
that scene was amaaazing!😳😳😳
what a nice ending Tinaa 😃
yaaayyy an epilogue! please do do write one 😃
End of live commentary lol..hope i didnt bore you with one massive comment!
You write so amazingly👏👏👏
Waiting eagerly for the epilogue!
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