Arhi OS:Raga Series (Complete) - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read !!! and really enjoyed reading all of them ...
each raga with a beautiful piece of music ...

9th ... the raga had Lavanya acting the fairy Godmother for our damsel ...
bowling Arnav Singh Raizada with her beauty ...

10th ... this raga saw the whole family involved including the babies 😳
and not to miss the politician too ...

Thanks mkalam ... very different and interesting ... educative too ... šŸ˜†
Hope to get something from you again ... soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
An apt ending to the raga series where you brought them all together. I really like Mr. Iyer - he played cupid in one of stories right?
Look forward to reading more from you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Marvellous stories!
Loved them and the songs that went with them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
res .. after I finish comment will be here :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing set of stories.

What a great writer you are. It's been my absolute pleasure to read your work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OK I am officially back!
Comment on Malhar! -- I love this Raga as its related to rain...This OS I loved more than Bhairavi..There was a cuteness and silly romance in it which caused swelling due to unknown happiness in my hear! he he...

"Dr. Gupta felt cherished. Then she felt trussed around like a turkey as she was prodded and poked. When ASR checked in an hour later, Dr. Gupta was fuming."---- Your sense of humor is wonderful! Nice framing of emotions/sentence/reactions. Beautiful, you had me laughing here.

Also M&M brief was simply wonderful, could imagine both of them having one of their routines...that was an awesome combination in the serial which was not much exploited.

Also Gupta and Raizada both being doctors added a charm! Also the way Khushi fell in love was sweet wink!:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raga- Kalyaani!
Amazing story. You presented the raga with a wonderful theme - astrology and planet crashing. It was truly hilarious and highly entertaining. Payal's inception as Arnav's sister was good change. Iyer uncle is so sweet. You took a dig at people being obstinate with age..lol! that's true..Also I loved the Rahu-Kethu clash with Khushi's progestrone-estrogen clash. But didn't understood why Shashi's phonecall was brought in. Was there any significance for it?
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Raga 4

Mklam- I wasn't aware of the significance of this raga even though I have heard songs of this theme. Its new information for me.

He made the impossible seem possible. But that was Arnav Singh Raizada's USP. ASR, the trendsetter with the attire and the attitude and the one who had fine-tuned the art of smirking and swearing -OMG! You have said it all...and I am head over heals in love with him!! Lol! Even a year after the show ended Arnav Singh Raizada still rules my heart! Sigh! And when you write like this I cant help fall in love with him again and again..

"Even his what the f--k sounds so melodious"---Exactly! Like Lavanya me too sighed dreamily

Despite the untiring efforts by the queen bee, she never got a taste of the honey she longed for. --- Wow, that was a sexy way of writing the emotion! You excel in expressing people's desires, longing with a fine perfection!

It was whispered around the corridors that when ASR walked it was like poetry in motion. A strange metallic music started to play in the background. --- Oh I miss this music!!! You are making me nostalgic to the hilt.

Wasn't it Rumi who said, Silence is the language of God, all else is translation'. ---My god Mklam that was simply awesome, you have artistically painted Arnav's feelings and connected a beautiful quote of Rumi's into it so perfectly! I love this quote and how you presented it...Sigh! Girl, where were you until now? Am feeling lucky that I met you and you send me the link of Love and Marriage.

Here is a song that reminds me of young love against a campus backdrop - Radha teri chunri from Student of the Year --- this is one of my fav songs and I am a big fan of romance.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Raga 5

Such is the power of music and the love of a good woman.--- Something about this statement made me smile and left me positive and glowing! You start an OS about a Raga which spreads positivity and exuberance in a befitting manner

What he didn't realize was that whenever he tended to smile with his head touching his neck, his many chins would jostle and compete with one another. ----Ouch! That's some sight!

Mklam, your subtle humour - like hygiene test, caaality are really funny.

Looking at the white florets of cauliflower, the juicy red tomatoes, the colourful squashes and the fragrance of mint wafting in the air, Khushi closed her eyes for a moment to savour the sights and smells. She was in her home turf. She then moved around touching, feeling and smelling everything. ----That was a pretty picture you painted..Could visualise the scene in mind.

Arnav Singh Raizada stood there in a three piece black suit looking like a fish out of water. --- He definitely would...when has he ever felt comfortable in such places...

The sight of a pretty girl with her eyes closed and smelling what looked like an orange caught his eye"fight sight love! Cool & how sweet!! I admire your vocabulary since I learn lot of new words from your stories.

But love happens at the most unlikeliest of time and places.--- he he, that's true I guess...

The vegetable vendors who were witness to the most exciting event in their lives (beyond the soaring price of onions) clapped their hands in glee. ---that dig at onion price was cute...

Khushi was obsessed with food. Arnav was obsessed with sex. --- Ha ha! That's right! Any suggestions? How about golgappa?

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(Raga #6)

Family does not mean only those bound by DNA. Sometimes those ties bound by love alone surpasses all others."that's so true and a story based on such a theme is always my favorite. Even though I am not easily forgiving like Khushi, I loved it.. And Arnav truly needed that accident to get rid of his migraine and to get his head straight The little girl stole the show. Anjali coming between husband and wife was apt because she was always between them in their story..

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