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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part coming in a few mins 😊
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thanks for writing another fan-fic!! i love it a lot!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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poor kripa her mommy died anyways great part
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sorry guys but i was going to conitnue last night but my computer went down.....next part comeing in a few sec 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is a long part but its not that fun to read but you will have to read this in order to under stand the story and every thing if you are confused by any thing in this part please tell me

part 2

officer one-sir why did your face become all shocked when the girl said the fathers name

officer-because you might not know this, the girl kripa might not know this but i know that James P williams is the richest guy in the world

officer one-how do you know

officer-i saw him on the news just yesterday...he was anounced as the world richest man just yesterday....i want you to find james p williams contact....i want to talk to him

officer one-sure

the officer left the room to find james p williams contact

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in the usa

we see a lot of camra men takeing picters of a white fair man

reporter-sir...sir....how dose it feel to be the worlds richest man

the man replies

man-it feel great to be the worlds richest man after all iam james p williams

the man quickly leaves the crowed of reporters and then gets in to a limo

inside the limo

we see a white lady and a teenage girl about the age of 16 wearing very expencive clothes

girl-dad i need 40,000 dollors

james=j

j-why do you need that much money sheena

sheena=s

s-because i want to buy a dress for my friend angad's party

j-ok

james takes out a cheack book and writes a check of 40'000 dollors

s-thanks dad

james was the father of a beautiful sixteen year old daughter and had a wife. after james had left kripa's mom, he had gotten married to a beautiful lady in the usa by the name of nelly, sheena isnt his realy daughter but sheena calls him dad becuase she grew up calling her step dad, dad. sheena is a spoiled brat and dosnt care about any one but her self. Nelly on the other hand loves james a lot and knows nothing about his past life....she also dosnt know that james has another daughter.

we see the limo come to a stop in frount of a huge big house. we see sheena quickly get out of the limo and gose inside the big house then we see Nelly and james come out of the limo hand in hand and also start walking inside the big house.

inside the house. jame's phone starts to ring. james picks up the phone

j-hello

officer-hello are you james p williams

j-yes this is he

officer-iam a police officer from europe iam sorry to say but your wife died in london in frount of a dinner she worked in

j-what are you talking about but my wife is right here beside me

officer-iam talking about your first wife

james face fell...no one knows about that how do you know

officer-incase you didnt know but when you left your wife she was pregnet with your daughter

j-ya so

officer-after your wife passed away you are now responsible of miss. kripa williams

j-who is kripa?

officer-she is your daughter

j-WHAT!!!!

james sees Nelly looking at him so he quickly gose to another room and closed the door

j-what the **** iam not going to take care of kripa...i dont care if she is my daughter or not i will not take care of her

officer-then you can go to jail for getting married twice with out getting a devorce with your first wife

james was now getting realy pissed off but also scared because he dosnt know what he will tell his wife, that he has another daughter that is indian

j-FINE!!! i will take care of kripa(yelling in anger)i will send and privite jet for kripa today and she will be here in the usa by tonight, ok

officer-ok thats great

james hanges up the phone and desided that he should tell Nelly that his daughter is comeing to the usa. james leaves the room to fine Nelly siting in the liveing room watching TV

j-Nelly i need to talk to you

nelly closes the tv and dose up to james

n-what do you want to talk to me about

j-it involes the whole family, wheres sheena

n-she just left with angad, she said that she,angad and some other friends are going to a consert

j-nelly this is realy important

james voice became more and more scared now

n-what happend james are you ok

j-nelly i have lied to you about something

n-about what

j-remember the day when we had gotten married and you had asked me about my past life and i had said i realy didnt have a past life....well, i had lied. i did have a past life

n-what do you mean

j-i used to live in london and i had a wife and i was about to become a father but one week before the birth of my daughter i left my wife becuase back then i was realy young and i had gotten married at the age of 18 and i just wasnt ready to become a father so i just packed and left my family

nelly stated to get tears in her eyes

n-and why the hell are you telling me this now

j-becuase i just got a call from a police officer saying that my first wife passed away and that i have a 16 year old indian daughter. the officer asked me to take care of that girl

n-what is the girls name

j-kripa, but listen nelly. we dont have to take care of her. iam realy rich i can hire the best lawer in the world and get this case off are shoulder so we wont have to take care of that girl

n-how can you say that. that girl is your daughter and you will have to take care of her and if you dont take care of her then i will because iam not that bad of a person as you are. you ruined your first wife's life but getting married to her at such a young age and then leaveing her at the time she most needed you. you didnt just ruin one persons life but you also ruined a girls life before she was even born. how could you say we dont have to take care of kripa

j-look iam sorry i didnt mean it that way but....

n-no, dont say anything more we will send a plan to london and call kripa here to the usa

j-i already did that. she should be arriveing here in a few hours

n-when sheena comes home i will tell her about her haveing her a step sister. knowing her, she will probly bring the whole house down just by yelling in anger

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we see kripa in the air port drawing in a drawing book that the police officer bought for kripa. we see kripa drawing a picture of her mom. the drawing looked so beautiful and realy it looked like it was a real picture not a drawing.

as kripa waited for her flight to arrive we see the same police officer sit beside kripa

officer-ok kripa i hope you have a good flight and i hope you have a better life in the usa

k-thank you officer.....uuummm i was wondering do you know any thing about my father like who he is and every thing

officer- i dont know if iam the right person to tell you that i think that is up to your father to say

soon kripa hears the announce ment that her flight is ready. the officer takes kripa up to the gate way to the privte jet

k-how come there are no other people around here

officer-looks like your father sent a pravite jet for you

k-is my father rich?

officer-that is not for me to tell it is up to your father to say

the officer then takes kripa in side the jet and then leaves the plane before leaveing kripa thanks the officer and then waits for the flight to take off inside the flight she could tell that her father was realy rich but she had no idea how rich he realy was

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kripa reached the usa around 11:00pm and wasnt expecting her father to come to the airport to pick her up but to her suprise when she came out of the flight she saw a fairly tall man out side of the jet gate waiting for kripa beside the man was a beautiful lady with a soft smile on her lips while the man just had a pissed off look on his face. kripa went up to the couple that were the only people around

n-hello are you kripa

kripa noded her head not know who the lady was to her

n-hi iam nelly and this is your father

nelly kind of tugs on james shirt warning him to be nice

j-hello kripa

kripa didnt know what to do. was she suposed to be formal or hug or what. but in the end james and kripa just shook hands

k-hello uummm....dad

j-hello kripa

james then turned around and started to walk away while nelly and kripa were left behind

n-dont mind him hes just a little stressed out

k-uumm....iam not trying to be rude or anything but who are you

n-i dont know how to put this but i would be your step mom

kripas face fell a little

k-oh

kripa being indian and all her mother had always said to be respectful to elders

k-you dont mind if i call you mom do you

n-not at all, after all i consider you to be my own daughter. if you ever need anything just ask me

k-thank you for welcomeing me so well

nelly saw in kripas had a drawing book

n-you like to draw

k-yes. i want to be a human artist but i can never aford to take classes

n-well how about when we get home you can show me some of your drawing and i can tell you about every one in the family

kripa smiles at the last comment

k-deal

nelly and kripa leave the airport to the limo waiting outside. inside the limo james was waiting for kripa and nelly

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inside the limo

j-nelly did you tell sheena about kripa

n-no she didnt come home yet from the consert

j-oh

k-who is sheena

n-your sister

j-your step sister

kripa was kind of up set with her fathers rudeness but what upset her the most was that her step mom was giveing her more love then her own blood father was

soon the limo stoped at a huge house made out of white mable. kripas mouth drouped open in shock because all kripas life she grew up in a poor house in a poor school in a poor life but by looking at the huge house kripa felt that her life will never be the same again

k-is this a hotle

nelly laughed a little

n-no this is are house

k-but it is so big, the house is probly 50 billion times bigger then the apartment me and my mom lived in

n-come inside kripa you will love it, i spent all day getting your room ready for you

k-thank you

kripa was realy touch on how she was getting treated at such a new place

n-this house is your as much as it is mine

nelly kripa and james go inside the house

j-iam going to sleep

with out saying good night to know james just left for the room down stairs on the right

n-come kripa i will show you your room

nelly takes kripa upstairs to a room upstairs where there was a window where you can see all of the frount yard and every one that entered the house

n-this will be your room. this room used to be a guest room but i got it make to a realy room with its own bathroom and every thing i hope you like it

k-it is lovely

and kripa wasnt lieing when she said that. the room was realy pretty and wonderful all the furnetur was made out of white marble matching the outside of the house

n-iam glad that you like the room. uuummm kripa, sheena still dosnt know about you and i will tell her tommrow in the moring if that is ok with you

k-that is fine

n-ok now one this i would like to see your drawings. remember you promised to show me them

kripa smiled and then showed nelly her drawing book. nelly opened the art book and was shocked to see kripas drawing

n-omg

k-you dont like it(in a upseting tone)

n-no its not that...your drawings they have such passion.

we see a drawing of a guy and a girl kissing but the drawing didnt seem wrong but beautiful. it was like it had meaning to it. it was like it was real

n-your drawing is wonderful i have never seen such a beautiful drawing in my life. do you know what tommrow you and i will go to regrister for school sence it is sunday tommrow you can start school with sheena on monday. the school is realy big and they have a realy good art progam you will love it

k-thanks for makeing me feel right at home

n-well iam going down stairs to get some shut eye and you get some sleep to we have a big day ahead of us tommrow

k-ok iam going to go to sleep in a few hours iam not that tired right now

n-ok

nelly leaves the room saying good night and then kripa gose up to the window and starts drawing the frount lawn

k-(thinking)mom i miss you so much....the people i didnt expect love from i got and the person i expect love from is not with me.....i miss you so much

a tear rolls down kripas cheeks and then kripa contines drawing the frount lawn.after about 2 hours later kripa finished drawing the frount lawn but when she was about to get up from the window she sees a car come up past the gates

k-(thinking)this must be sheena

kripa continues looking out the window and she sees a beautiful girl come out of a red sports car and then from a driver seat a handsome tall guy how looked indian. the guy seemed realy stroung he had dark brown hair and was wearing a red shirt and blue jeans but it was hard to see the guys face because of the darkness

k-(thinking)i wonder who the guy is

kripa opens up the window a little to hear what sheena and the guy were talking about

guy-come on sheena do you have to go home now

s-ya angad....i have to go i got like 50 million calls from mom say to come home early

k-(thinking)angad must be sheenas boyfriend

a-but sheena...

s-come on angad,be a good friend and let me go

a-ya ya what ever i will see you on monday ok

k-(thinking)so angad isnt sheenas boyfriend he is just a friend

kripa then sees angad go in his car and drive away and the sheena go inside the house. after seeing this kripa closed the window and went to sleep thinking about who the guy angad was wondering how he looked like because she never saw his face

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up entry of angad in kripas life
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok every one next part comeing in a few mins
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww poor kripa her own da doesn't care about her i feel bad for her
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was such a good part and long plz make the next part also long like before I cant wait till Angad and Kripa meet plz hurry.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

awww poor kripa her own da doesn't care about her i feel bad for her

dont worrie in the next part her dad will stand up for her

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'm glad tat u decided to write again.

Once again da storyline is so different and unique. Da first two parts were great. It's sad to know tat Kripa's step-mom luvs her buh own dad doesn't care about her. 😡 I can't wait for Angad's entry in Kripa's lyfe.

Keep up da good work..and continue soon

Nida

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