ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Will there a lemon in this story?

Will Reeta be a prominent character?

In your story a jealous Asad won't make sense because Zoya's proximity issues but I like jealous Asad better than Zoya.

Nice chapter, I would love to see Zoya's first day but it would have been too stretched if you showed it like that. Love your pace 😊

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Awesome update... Love jealous Zoya
Fear is slowly decreasing Continue soon

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

awesome update
jealous zoya, oh najran s also there
why in every story cell phone disturbs romance of leads
i hate cell phones for this 😉

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Wonderful update lovd it, thnks for pm cntinue soon 👏

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c...

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@Zola029

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

amazing update ! najma and imran convo was so a cute ! i love jealous zoya ! 😆 finally she's coming over her fear . it must be hard for both of them ! i hate That phone for disturbing their mitwa moment ! 😡😆 thank you for the pm and continue soon (: