ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 27...

nice little romance... and confession...finally
both got closer for
a moment
asad wants to embrace... show her how much he
loves her... but zoya
got scared and faint.. thinking about her past...

poor zoya

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: swapno

I know...I tried but...😒
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POOR YOU !😔
SO NOW WHAT ????ONE THING YOU CAN DO ...

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Love how AsYa are building, how they are understanding each other. The confession was unique. Zoya's breakdown was beautifully written and the way Asad handled her so moving. Hopefully he can free her off her fears soon. Both their pasts have been heart wrenching, and love the characters the way you've written.

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Chapter 28...

Now in the room... see zoya nervous ... asad try to explain...
and finally zoya said it... he she needs to say something... important
when she try... asad explain he knows through
dilshad... and he is disappointed... she never share with him
asad comforting listening to her past...
he was angry... but right now zoya need him

so beautiful asad trying to make zoya understand
and to trust him... to change a bitter memory...
to beautiful ones...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: akaswan

Same here i try to take rest since yesterday but my hand hurt a lot

Hmmm... it is very difficult...😕

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
beautiful

thank you so much🤗

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 27...

nice little romance... and confession...finally
both got closer for
a moment
asad wants to embrace... show her how much he
loves her... but zoya
got scared and faint.. thinking about her past...

poor zoya

Thank you so much...🤗

Glad that you loved it...😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: treasure11

Yes I am...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
Love how AsYa are building, how they are understanding each other. The confession was unique. Zoya's breakdown was beautifully written and the way Asad handled her so moving. Hopefully he can free her off her fears soon. Both their pasts have been heart wrenching, and love the characters the way you've written.

Thank you so much🤗

Aww...I wanted it to be unique...😊

Glad that you liked it😃