ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Poojabugga

it was really cute !! :D Update soon and thanks for the PM!! :) :)

lovly update... 😊
pls update soon 😛

Chapter 23...

Zoya extremely upset with asad... for not saying anything about the
case...

zoya bashing asad... he just keep quiet... and voice is getting lower..

"Okay..Okay...I made a mistake. I am sorry for that. But please don't cry. I am not capable of handling a raining machine" Asad teased her.

he some how manage to get her melt down...but zoya not ready to let it go... she need some answers ... asad agree

asad came clean about the unknown girl and unknown feeling he had...

Asad dark past... and she knows .. how it effect her life..

and finally asad cleared ... that he is not in love with the girl...

Originally posted by: Ramlath

lovly update... 😊
pls update soon 😛

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 23...

Zoya extremely upset with asad... for not saying anything about the
case...

zoya bashing asad... he just keep quiet... and voice is getting lower..

"Okay..Okay...I made a mistake. I am sorry for that. But please don't cry. I am not capable of handling a raining machine" Asad teased her.

he some how manage to get her melt down...but zoya not ready to let it go... she need some answers ... asad agree

asad came clean about the unknown girl and unknown feeling he had...

Asad dark past... and she knows .. how it effect her life..

and finally asad cleared ... that he is not in love with the girl...

Originally posted by: swapno

[BR][DIV]Dear FaRz[/DIV][BR][DIV]You know what I loved your comment.[>:D<][/DIV][DIV]This is second time you commented here[/DIV][DIV]The first one also so good[/DIV][DIV]I feel really happy when anyone points out the scenes they liked in a chapter and you not only did it but also explained it..These simple things I wanted to give you all. I am very happy that you get it.[/DIV][BR][DIV]So I will try to update soon and Pm you..ha ha..ha glad to know that I don't disappoint you...[/DIV][DIV]Thank you so much dear[>:D<] [/DIV]

Really! You remember my first comment? The jail wala Asad right? Today you gat an airport wala Asad! Plenty of comments and still you remember? How touching! Made my day, sayang!

I wish I can comment as frequent as you update, you deserve it, for the amazing story and plot and and and most importantly ah-may-zing SCENES! Alas, I'm unable to do so through my phone for some reason, and can only comment when I'm on my pc.

Hope you smile while reading what is now my third comment! All the best, sayang!

FaRz

Originally posted by: swapno

[BR][DIV]Dear FaRz[/DIV][BR][DIV]You know what I loved your comment.[>:D<][/DIV][DIV]This is second time you commented here[/DIV][DIV]The first one also so good[/DIV][DIV]I feel really happy when anyone points out the scenes they liked in a chapter and you not only did it but also explained it..These simple things I wanted to give you all. I am very happy that you get it.[/DIV][BR][DIV]So I will try to update soon and Pm you..ha ha..ha glad to know that I don't disappoint you...[/DIV][DIV]Thank you so much dear[>:D<] [/DIV]

Really! You remember my first comment? The jail wala Asad right? Today you gat an airport wala Asad! Plenty of comments and still you remember? How touching! Made my day, sayang!

I wish I can comment as frequent as you update, you deserve it, for the amazing story and plot and and and most importantly ah-may-zing SCENES! Alas, I'm unable to do so through my phone for some reason, and can only comment when I'm on my pc or someone else's phone. Unfair, I know!

Hope you smile while reading what is now my third comment! All the best, sayang!

FaRz

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Really! You remember my first comment? The jail wala Asad right? Today you gat an airport wala Asad! Plenty of comments and still you remember? How touching! Made my day, sayang!

I wish I can comment as frequent as you update, you deserve it, for the amazing story and plot and and and most importantly ah-may-zing SCENES! Alas, I'm unable to do so through my phone for some reason, and can only comment when I'm on my pc.

Hope you smile while reading what is now my third comment! All the best, sayang!

FaRz

Originally posted by: swapno

Dear FaRz

You know what I loved your comment.🤗

This is second time you commented here

The first one also so good

I feel really happy when anyone points out the scenes they liked in a chapter and you not only did it but also explained it..These simple things I wanted to give you all. I am very happy that you get it.

So I will try to update soon and Pm you..ha ha..ha glad to know that I don't disappoint you...

Thank you so much dear🤗

Really! You remember my first comment? The jail wala Asad right? Today you gat an airport wala Asad! Plenty of comments and still you remember? How touching! Made my day, sayang!

I wish I can comment as frequent as you update, you deserve it, for the amazing story and plot and and and most importantly ah-may-zing SCENES! Alas, I'm unable to do so through my phone for some reason, and can only comment when I'm on my pc or someone else's phone. Unfair, I know!

Hope you smile while reading what is now my third comment! All the best, sayang!

FaRz

Hey Swapno!
that was amazing...
it was so cute when he thought she was gonna leave because of him!
and then how he held her hand & asked if she would come back to hin! 😳
...after that our Woh Actually Asad! 😆
He thought he would tell her his feelings...hahaha...our Asad will start stuttering after 'aap jaanti hain...hum doni kitne alag hain!' Just kidding, for sake of old times!
Oh yippee! He managed to come! It was so lovely...the airport scene! 😃


loved it! Waiting for the next update!
This separation is sure gonna make them realise how much they have started loving each other! 😃