ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
congrats on new thread!!!
awesome update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Nice part hope zoya come back soon
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

Hey Swapno!
that was amazing...
it was so cute when he thought she was gonna leave because of him!
and then how he held her hand & asked if she would come back to hin! 😳
...after that our Woh Actually Asad! 😆
He thought he would tell her his feelings...hahaha...our Asad will start stuttering after 'aap jaanti hain...hum doni kitne alag hain!' Just kidding, for sake of old times!
Oh yippee! He managed to come! It was so lovely...the airport scene! 😃


loved it! Waiting for the next update!
This separation is sure gonna make them realise how much they have started loving each other! 😃


Hey Preety

Thank you so much
glad that you loved it
Ha ha ha...actually I missed those days so much...that's why I used this as backdrop
I will try to update soon
Yes they will feel it again...
Next part am gonna write about it ...I think...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: grad2011

congrats on new thread!!!

awesome update :)



Thank you so much🤗
Glad that you loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Nice part hope zoya come back soon
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon



Thank you so much🤗
Glad that you loved it😃
I will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh sayang! I'm really very sorry for the multiple posts of the same comment! I have no idea what happened! I seem to be doing that a lot. I guess no more 4th and 5th comment! What do I do to delete the comment?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: swapno



Hey Preety

Thank you so much
glad that you loved it
Ha ha ha...actually I missed those days so much...that's why I used this as backdrop
I will try to update soon
Yes they will feel it again...
Next part am gonna write about it ...I think...😆




you mean you're gpnna write now?
That's a hreat news dear!
I miss the old days to! :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swapno



Hey Preety

Thank you so much
glad that you loved it
Ha ha ha...actually I missed those days so much...that's why I used this as backdrop
I will try to update soon
Yes they will feel it again...
Next part am gonna write about it ...I think...😆




you mean you're gonna write now?
That's a great news dear!
I miss the old days to! :(
Edited by PreetiASYArocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
nice update
asad was so nervous in his lie
he got so scared when zoya says
she needs to leave for new york he
though she was leaving him.so glad he
reached to the airport b4 she left the
goodbye was cute...she flung herself into
his arms and he pulled her back and whispered
in her ear ...wow
continue soon
absence make the heart go flounder ...I think

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Chapter 24...

so funny went dilshad ask ... their coming back .. stammer and lie...

zoya went asad ... crying face... asad so scared..
went she mention... that she is going back to NY... asad cant manage...
he did everything right... why is she leaving...

asad ... trying to convince not to go... but zoya keep going on... that
she needs to leave...

but asad in horror... what in the past days... and how he came alive
and the changes happen... he determine not going to let go...

Fools... in love this is what happen .. went you dont confess
😆

"No!" His voice was so low; it was almost like a growl 😭

"Stop this nonsense Zoya, you are not leaving and that's final."😡 😡

Zoya studied his face for a long moment 😕 😕 with confusion. She could not understand what he was saying. 😕 Why he was denying her wish?😲

"Mr. Khan woh...Aapi...is very sick... She is in the hospital there. There is no one who can take care of her. Jeeju is also busy and he cannot do it alone. I need to go there at their sides." She again cleared her stance. 😕

Asad jerked his head to stare at her as he replayed her words.😲

"Aapi? Hospital?" 😲 He ran his hand through his hair. "Wait. You want to go there for your Aapi? 😲

"Yes." Zoya raised her eyebrows. 😕 "Mr. Khan, are you alright? 😕 Why are you repeating me? 😕 What did you think I meant?"

He massaged his temple. "I...I, actually...woh, I mean..😳😳


for a moment he taught he lost her...
he confirm with her that she is coming back... and she will come back...

she was alone .. at the airport... only person in her mind is asad...
asad stuck with meeting... he want meet zoya before leaving...


"You came. 😊 You came for me" 😃 She exclaimed placing her head on his shoulder.🤗

"Yes. I am here for you." 😃 He moved his head down to nuzzle her hair. 😳 🤗

"Thank you. I could not go without saying you Good Bye" 😊 😳 Zoya said after breaking the hug. 😳 Color started creeping up her cheeks. ☺️ She lowered her head to hide the blush. ☺️

Second announcement was made and Zoya sighed. Time to go. She waved her hand at him but he tugged it and made her flush against him.😳 😳 She looked up, confused.😕

"Come back soon, Mrs. Khan. 😳 😳 I will be waiting for you." 😳 He whispered in her ear and she shuddered. ☺️ Asad kissed her forehead ☺️ and stepped back enjoying her uneasiness. 😳

"Good bye, Zoya" ❤️ he whispered again. ❤️ It was hard for him to let her go.

"Good bye, Mr. Khan. 😊 Take care of yourself and the family. 😊 I will try to come back soon" Zoya waved at him and left. 😃


Beautiful update... i hope this is temporary ...
bring them back soon... 👏 👏





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