ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32

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VeronicaWest

@VeronicaWest

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#991

omg
it was sooo romantic
i love this update
and how zoya finally accepted him
finally this day be the day when their souls and body were one
soo awesome

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#992

Awww Zoya finally admit that she loves him 😳

I just love this udapte thank you so much finally Their First kiss , their confession 🥳🤗

Seriously bubby thank you so much for this udapte i'm so happy i can not stop smilling 😃🤗

Continue soon please 😃

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Awesome update. She finally confessed. I loved the way he made her feel special. Trust me you did great with the romantic part. I know what you mean. I also find it very hard to write those types if scenes 😊

Keep up the good work.

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#994

awesome dear...
sorry.. cant type much!!
hats off..
👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome part loved it finally both confess their love
so happy to read it
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I am happy to make you happy.😳

I will try to update soon😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: manognasai
Nice update...AsYa's first kiss in a boat in the middle of the lake with lot of sky lanterns on the sky...❤️

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#997

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
This was absolutely beautiful. Just before you updated , I was catching up with the updates I missed. Wonderful this FF is.. great job!

And the last part was beautifully written and the best part of the chapter. Loved it! 😃

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I am relieved now😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#998

Originally posted by: rosamale
it was soo sweet and cute☺️

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

Awww...you are blushing...😳

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#999

Originally posted by: treasure11

PURPLE SARI BLACK SHIRT 😳
SOO VERY WELL WRITTEN SWAPNO ,SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!
AND YOU SAY U CANNOT WRITE SUCH SCENES 😳
ASAD'S REPLY BOUT THAT SHOPKEEPER WALA LINE 😆
AND THOSE BEAUTIFUL LANTERNS AND BOTH ALONE IN MIDDLE OF RIVER 😳
AND OFCOURSE THE KISSS!!!😳
THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!!!

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I am happy to make you happy.😳

Yes I loved that vegetable seller line...😆

I will try to update soon😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1000

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
It was cute !
And I loved the last part for sure !! 😳
Don't even think that you are not good in it !
because I found it so cute and romantic !!
and different when it comes to lanterns !!
I love those since I watched Tangled 😆
Anyways, update sooon !!

Thank you so much buddy🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I am happy to make you happy.😳

Well I love sky lanterns from my childhood. I have some christian friends and they invited me to the party In Christmas times..They are they all lit up those lanterns...it was a treat to watch...Then again I fell in love with these when I watched Tangled and I could not even remember how many times I saw that film.

I will try to update soon😊