Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77 - Page 34

Originally posted by: Prasai

I see your heart remember the connection..love you dear..your thoughts I caught..hope to see along with AAstha and shlok in real show too the education for poor or scholarship..a message of your thoughts..

I quickly read the 4th part and I simply loved it! I am going to take some more time to read from the beginning and then comment in detail. Keep up the good work. Am so happy there are so many writers coming up with new themes everyday in our forum. Great work buddy! 👏

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

I quickly read the 4th part and I simply loved it! I am going to take some more time to read from the beginning and then comment in detail. Keep up the good work. Am so happy there are so many writers coming up with new themes everyday in our forum. Great work buddy! 👏

nice update though sad one...
continue soon...

Sorry tosh I busy week will all on the week end

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen

very nice:)

thanks love ya

Part 5:

Shlok took Aastha to the hospital. Doctors immediately came in action because she was Mrs. Shlok Agnihotri. Shlok was restless but somehow he had a hope that she will be fine soon. Shlok called top neurosurgeon for Aastha. He did not want to leave any stone in Aastha treatment. It had been already delay in her case. She was being like this from 2 months and he could not do anything. Now he wanted to do sure, that she comes towards her life as before as soon as possible.

He did not inform to anyone. He was waiting for her come back in senses. He was sweating with tension. He was daze. He walked around the corridor continuously. His face was pale now but somewhere he was happy and satisfied to see her alive.

It was very difficult to tell that he was happier or he was more tensed now. He was swing in both situations. After some time the Doctor called him. He wanted to see Aastha first but Doctor called him first. He became anxious for something horrible. He made himself ready to face anything.

"Mr. Agnihotri, your wife is fine. We have done so many test and we found her mind is working properly. Once she will regain her senses then we can tell about the situation more clearly. Till now we have to wait," Doctor explained about Aastha's health. Shlok sighed in relief.

"May I see her once?" he asked to doctor. Doc nodded his head yes. Shlok quickly moved towards Aastha's room. She lied unconscious on the hospital bed. Suddenly something, break in Shlok heart to see her in this stage. He did not want anything like this.

He came and sits beside her. He caressed her face and gazed her constantly. He holds her hand and scolded her in polite way. He had mixed expression in his voice. He was confused. He was angry but he could not speak anything harsh to her.

"Open your eyes please open your eyes. I cannot wait to listen your blubbering nonstop. Please come back in your senses soon. I want to listen your shout. I want to see your fury... I want to see your fierce eyes, I miss your stupid antics and I want to see your angelic smile... I miss you terribly... I do not know what happen to me but I am extremely happy to found you back in my life. I became addicted of you. You became my habit and you know I am Shlok Agnihotri and I am very possessive for everything related to me... you are mine and you will be always mine... Got it..." He said all the feelings of him to her face. After that, he sits silently and looked her continuously.

His phone rang and he came back in real world. He moved out from the room and picked the call. It was Varad who worried for him. He sighed to listen his caring tone

"I am in Hospital... do you come here now" he asked while Varad remain shocked

"Are you alright... What happen... why you are in hospital...?" He impatiently asked so many question in just without breathe.

"Call her parents... I found her ... She is alive...my Aastha alive" Shlok shivered to tell this. He could not hide his happiness in his voice.

Varad was remain confuse and shocked "is it true really" he asked in same happy yet disbelief tone.

"Yes she is alive in front of my eyes... You just come here fast ... I told you everything..."he told and cut the call.

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Everyone run towards the hospital. No one could believe on that. Kalindi and Avdhoot became numb now they heard about her. Niranjan and Anjali looked each other in disbelief. They saw Aastha unconscious and weak body and they had to accept the fact. Kalindi and Avdhoot got their life back when they saw her. Kalindi kissed her check , her forehead. She wanted to confirm that it was not their dream.

She came to Shlok who had tears in his eyes to saw the emotional love of mother for her daughter. she folded her hands in front of Shlok

"Forgive us beta. We all accepted the fact that she left us but it was only you who denied it properly and you searched her everywhere. May be our love is weak than yours that why your love win and our believe lost against your strong will. I admit the thing in deep of my heart that you love her most then us. She is very fortunate that she got you as a husband as a soul mate. I thank to my god for this" she fall down on her knees in happiness. Shlok was surprised to listen her words. He took her on her feet and said

"I don't know about the deepness of my love but I took the oath that I will save her until seven births so it is my duty as a husband" he said and turned towards Aastha. He looked her face and sit near to her on the bad. He took her hand in his rough hand

"Everyone believes that I love you but is it really true. If it is true then wake up and tell me right now that it is true... I love you or not it depends on you now if you will not open your eyes right now. It will be proved that I can not be in your love ever." He said to her all that in his mind.

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It became dark outside when he felt some moment from Aastha's side. He called the Doctor immediately. Aastha was coming in her sense. She opened her eyes slowly and saw the room. She looked around the room and tried hard to recognize the everything.

Shlok looked at her maybe she identify her but she looked at him with cold unknown eyes. There was no sign of Old acquaintance. She saw him with so many question filled in her eyes. Shlok could not see her long. He turned his face against her. Kalindi ran towards her and hugged her tight

"Aastha bacche how are you now..." he caressed her face with both of her hands while Aastha jerked her "who are you and why you called me Aastha? Who is she?" she pants with suffocation.

Doctor came to her and asked Kalindi to leave her for some time. Shlok stood near the door while kalindi moved out from the room with full of tears in her eyes. Shlok sensed some unexpected. Doctor checked Aastha's pluses and BP. He asked her

"So Mrs. Agnihotri how are you feeling now?" she looked at Doctor in confusing way

"Who is she?" she asked with empty eyes. Shlok clinched his fists in helplessness. He could not do anything until Aastha will be able to recognize them.

"You are Mrs. Aastha Agnihotri. Do you remember any other thing or name? Would you like to share with us?" Doctor asked to her in clam and polite way when she suddenly whispered

"Shlok... Shlok... I remember the name Shlok..." She said and Shlok turned his head towards her in surprise.

"So do you remember him that who is Shlok" doctor again asked

"No I cannot remember him who is he but whenever I am trying to remember anything it is the name which come on my lips again and again" doctor sighed while Shlok stood dumbstruck. He could not understand anything. Doctor signaled him to come in his cabin. Everybody was waiting outside for Shlok called. Kalindi was broke down after see Aastha situation.

Shlok looked to Aastha. She was also looking at him. He felt her intense gaze on him. He went to close her and sit "do you know everybody is waiting for you" he said when she asked

"Please tell me who are you and what connection between us is" Shlok hold her hand and told

" Shlok Agnihotri ...your husband and you are Aastha Agnihotri my wife..." he said while her eyes became widened with shock. she repeated her name on her lips

" Shlok..." she looked him stunned.

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yay yay got the frst place
wow loved it
astha forgot about her past this is awsm i wanted smthing like that

hope she is nt feigning .
now i want to see a astha who will be like tit for tat fr shlok
he need sm lesson that to hard vn frm astha
make him suffer like astha

Originally posted by: pt311288

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