Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Aastha lost her memory... It is best part... Because now Shlok have work hard for her... he has o bring back her memories... Shlok working hard for Aastha will be awesome to read.. Thanks for PM...

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: dafla
Thanq nice update

thnx yaar😊

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Awesomeee updateee yaaar

thnx😊

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LuvStrk-001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Lovely update!!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!!!!

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ankita sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Lovely updt dear.
Finally shlok realised astha's importance in his life.
Btwn thanks for d pm.

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shruthi2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

the story is becoming interesting with each update.keep it up

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
the story is becoming interesting with each update.keep it up

thanks of your love and keep reading like always😊

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Prani08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

" sir if you want to do something for us then make this place able to live and we heard that you are a big man and you have so many school so can you please give us a favor in the form of our children education. We want to educate our children but we don't have huge money." The man said and Shlok felt shame on the system first time and being the part of this system. He never realized that in that type of area, there were also so many people who live in bad condition but still they have heart and still they have dream in their eyes

" offcourse why not I will surely help you people, let me see what can I do for your area but I assured you for your children free education" he put Aastha on back seat and made sure that she should be comfortable there. He thanked once again all of them and started the car to go.

Loved how you added humanity part...

Ashlok love potrayed in trance also..another plus point..

Again and again I say u have amazing writing skills to reality...

Good job..loved every bit.

👏⭐️❤️

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Prasai
" sir if you want to do something for us then make this place able to live and we heard that you are a big man and you have so many school so can you please give us a favor in the form of our children education. We want to educate our children but we don't have huge money." The man said and Shlok felt shame on the system first time and being the part of this system. He never realized that in that type of area, there were also so many people who live in bad condition but still they have heart and still they have dream in their eyes
" offcourse why not I will surely help you people, let me see what can I do for your area but I assured you for your children free education" he put Aastha on back seat and made sure that she should be comfortable there. He thanked once again all of them and started the car to go.

Loved how you added humanity part...
Ashlok love potrayed in trance also..another plus point..

Again and again I say u have amazing writing skills to reality...

Good job..loved every bit.

👏⭐️❤️

i wondered that none talked about that part

but i am happy now my dear Akka you consider that

i love u

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Prani08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: roshanii

i wondered that none talked about that part
but i am happy now my dear Akka you consider that
i love u

I see your heart remember the connection..love you dear..your thoughts I caught..hope to see along with AAstha and shlok in real show too the education for poor or scholarship..a message of your thoughts..