Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

aalooo aaloo everywhere😆

yeah even in there brain
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

yeah even in there brain

i give all of you a ups moment na😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love it... and dear lord! where is the next part.
p.s. Is that asi in ur dp? awie i love her...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LazyLad

i love it... and dear lord! where is the next part.
p.s. Is that asi in ur dp? awie i love her...

next part will be soon and yes that is Asi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Member,

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys here is part 2
first of all guys may be you want to throw shoes on me and may be you want to kill me after that but i wanted to give you some shock or different type of Story

so dont angry with me just read and comment and also have a hope for love

Part 2

"Why were you calling me here, don't you know I have so many important work rather than you" Shlok roared on her when he came to meet her on hill top area.

"I have to tell something" she replied calmly instead of him. He glared her and looks around the place.

"You could tell at home." he said bluntly while Aastha just smiled.

"Now what, tell me what do you want?" he again muttered on her

"I wrote two letters, one for my father and other one for court," Aastha told him when he saw her in confusion as he want ask "so what". He looked her in raged with so many question

"What the hell in that letters. What about that letters. I think you become insane after all the happenings." He laughed tauntingly.

"Yes you are right dear hubby. I really am insane after married to you but now I have a chance to give you back all your pains, which you gave me. I don't know if you will regret for this or maybe you are a really beast inside" Aastha told him and he felt something different in her tone. She was not the girl who scared from him all the time. He felt a peace in her voice, satisfaction in her eyes and happiness on her facial expression.

"Ok stop all these hide and seek drama. Tell what do you want clearly" He became little anxious and irritated on her tactics.

"So I was telling you about the letters. You trapped my father in your dirty clutch and I know very well you just want to show me down along with that. Am I right?" she asked him and saw him with eye-to-eye contact.

"Yup you are very intelligent," Shlok mocked with her. She smiled and asked

"And what if I will not be longer in your life anymore" Aastha looked his face. His facial expression changed. She could look easily raged lines on his face and his eyebrow became straight.

"Where you can go away from me. I will not let it happen easily dear wife" he put his hand inside his pockets and told her carelessly.

"There is also a one place in that world, and you cannot stop me to go there" Aastha smiled and chided him

"Oh really ok you show me how can you go your so called damn place" he instigated her

"By the way would you now like to tell me about that bogus letters" he asked smirk

"Yes why not" she said and took her step back towards the corner of a deep trench. She continuously took her systematic back. Shlok felt something very wrong and dangerous in her mind. He also took his step towards her but she was bit away from him.

"Aastha look at behind you, careful there is a trench Aastha. What are you trying to do idiot" Shlok was walking towards her and as well as talking to her. However, she did not seem to listen him.

He became furious at her.

"Are you nut, are you listening what I am tell u, stop please stop." He shouted loudly

" Shlok Agnihotri . Those are my suicide letters, I am going far away from you where you cannot touch me and bother me anymore. All my troubles will be finish with me but you will not also be spared after that. I want to punish you for your deeds and I know this is the best way to torture you. You will found guilty in front of everyone. Your reputation will be vanished with me today. I am very satisfied now. With me all problem of my father will be finish today," Aastha, laughed maniacally while Shlok was stunned. He never imagines that Aastha could go to this level ever but he misunderstood her.

"What is rubbish, stop all this craziness and come to me now," he shouted in fear

"No, not again Shlok. It is enough, you cannot win every time. This time I will be the winner" Aastha screamed and smiled slyly.

"This is madness Aastha. I will not let you do that" he tried to catch her but suddenly Aastha fall down in front of his eyes in deep valley.

He could not believe that. His hand was left hanging in the air. He could not catch Aastha in time.

" nooo" he shouted in disbelief

" Aasthaaa" he called her shouted but in vain. There was no sign of Aastha anymore. He went to fall on the floor and screamed repeatedly. His eyes were widened on this sudden happening

"You cannot do this" he came back in his senses and Went descends into the abyss. He searched madly for Aastha everywhere in dense forest in the valley but he could not find about Aastha.

He became mad. He was going here to there in that wilderness. He had a hope in his mind somewhere that it cannot be true. It was his bad dream but it was a hard and shill fact of the time.

"She must be here. She must be wounded, I have to found her any cost" he was talking himself and searching her. He was shocked and shattered on that situation.

"You are mad Aastha. Just meet me once and you will see what I do with you for this joke," he shouted angrily. Four to five hours gone by this and he searched her continuously without stop. His hope gone to down with each passed minute.

"No Aastha don't play with me like this. How could you do this with me...? You said you love me. It is your love please comes back to me. Your parents will be die Aastha please come back... Where are you damn it. "He screamed in pain

"Hey I will kill you if you not come back to me right now" he became pale and furious. His clothes were ripped from thorns in trench. He did not care about that. He became out of mind. He had just one thought that he has to save Aastha. Suddenly his mobile rang and he came back in senses.


next part will be update soon till then please dont mad with me🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...what astha did 😭 ...sooo emotional for me...but there is hope that everything will be OK...
Beautifully written amazing and superb update...waiting for next... 😛
Edited by meerab147 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dont mad with darling unress plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks sweety...
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nice update thank you, now I really want to know what happens next

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