Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LazyLad

nah i dont get angry on you dont wanna miss the fun reading your stuff and do send me the links to thread 2 of Beinteha...or else i will have to dig in my entire inbox...have been away for a while now!

why not dear
here is 2nd thread of Beintiha
first part of forever mine
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Posted: 11 years ago
shlok is really not worried of Aastha?!!sooo bad!
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Originally posted by: sreekailas

shlok is really not worried of Aastha?!!sooo bad!

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... really liked the part very much... thanks for the pm... i hope astha is alive...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: logambika

nice update... really liked the part very much... thanks for the pm... i hope astha is alive...

hope so😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 4:

He was in deep sleep when his phone rang. He did not notice first ring but when it was continuously rang then he woke up and picked the phone. Suddenly he jumped from the bed. Whoever on the other side gave him his life back? He smiled in surprise and thanked to god. It has been 2 months passed till Aastha missing or dead. In 2 months, he got the best news first time.

He gets up and got ready early. He wanted to reach as soon as possible there. He could not wait for the moment. He did not take her breakfast. Anjali became furious with him for this while Niranjan remained silent as like always. However, Shlok did not care much. He could not control himself.

He drove the car rashly and barely skipped from the accident many 2 or 3 times. However, he wanted to reach his destination so fast.

He reached where he want to come after 2 hours long drive. He entered in that place. There was so mess. He could even walk comfortably in those narrow streets. Anyone could understand in first glance that that was a slum area. However, Shlok did not have much time to think about the area. He just wanted to see what he wanted from two months.

Finally, he entered in the small door of a slum. He looked inside and became stunned to see her. She was his Aastha. He hated her most in the world but could not sleep peacefully from 2 months. He wanted to thrash her face but now he could speak properly in front of her. He went to near her and touched her, as he wanted to confirm that it was not a dream.

"How dare you, how dare you to do like that. I will not leave you so easily," he whispered at close to her face. He cupped her face and saw her constantly when someone broke the silence

"Sir I found her in forest when I went to collect the woods. She was critically wounded and she was not able to even tell her name so with the help of other people, I took her here and our local doctor treated her. She did not come in senses usually but whenever she came back in hr senses, she only asked about her name and where she was. We think she lost her memory, she cannot remember anything except one name" the man told him. Shlok looked him in trance

"What was that?" he asked, the man's wife replied quickly

"Shlok" Shlok remained shocked to listen it.

"Sir whenever she wakes up from her sleep, she just babbled about the name and tell every time that Shlok you can never win," she told him. Shlok clinch her fist in pain and asked

"What else she said" Woman looked in confusing way and told, "nothing apart from this she just try to remember herself and one more thing, she also keep pressing this thread in her fist tightly. We could not find out what is this but seems it is very valuable to her" she pointed her finger towards Aastha fist.

Shlok opened her fist after some struggle and saw the black thread which he tied around her neck in temple" he became speechless for moments.

"She loves me even in her unconsciousness but also hate me very much" he thought for a second. He gets up and asked from the man

"Why did you inform me so late...? I gave the missing advertisement since long time." He looked at him

"Sir we live here in slum and we cannot afford the paper and TV, yesterday I bought some food from the road outside and shopkeeper gave me the food rapped into the newspaper in which I looked the missing advertisement and after that I informed you quickly because we cannot care her properly due to our poor living. We also want that she must be reach at her right place" he explained everything. Shlok sighed in relief and said him

"Thank you very much, you did a big deed for me so if you need anything you can say to me, I am very grateful to you" he said politely

"Thank you sir but we don't have need anything, it was our duty as a human being so we did that" the man politely denied his offer.

"Sir may I asked you who is she of yours?" the woman asked curiously

"She is my wife" he touched Aastha face again

"You love her very much, I can see in your eyes," she said and shlok closed his eyes tightly after listened her words.

" did he love her for a second... no she is the one who loves him, he only hate her only hate" he thought and composed himself. He picked Aastha in his arm and came out from that room

"I took her with me, thank you so much to care her. I will come back and please do not deny taking anything from me. I know you are very self respected man but I want to do something for you because you saved my life" he walked out from that narrow street taking Aastha in the arms. She was unconscious and weak. Her face was fade. Her face turned yellow from pink. Shlok looked at her and remember her lively Aastha. She was so nave and childish but this Aastha looked too lost.

" sir if you want to do something for us then make this place able to live and we heard that you are a big man and you have so many school so can you please give us a favor in the form of our children education. We want to educate our children but we don't have huge money." The man said and Shlok felt shame on the system first time and being the part of this system. He never realized that in that type of area, there were also so many people who live in bad condition but still they have heart and still they have dream in their eyes

" offcourse why not I will surely help you people, let me see what can I do for your area but I assured you for your children free education" he put Aastha on back seat and made sure that she should be comfortable there. He thanked once again all of them and started the car to go.

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During the driving, he thought about Aastha. She loves him but what he gave to her in return of her love, he gave her so much pain and hate. Could someone call him human? Aastha was right he was demon. However, who made him demon, the woman made him demon. His mother made him demon, swati made him demon even Aastha made him demon. Yes, he was demon but he also had heart, which can feel pain, which can feel love and which can be soft for someone. Which became hard like stone but he was still the human. Who wanted to shout on his wounds, who wanted a shoulder of anyone who can understand him for console himself?

He was the reserve man. He could not open up with anyone so easily. He admired his father like a God. He wanted to become like him always. He worshiped him like a god and he could never bear his insult. But Aastha the tiny stupid girl insulted him very darely. She had to pay for this wrong deed so she paid. Shlok never accepted that he could be wrong with Aastha. He was not wrong. He did right thing. He took his revenge only. However, he could not realized ever that why he did not want to lose Aastha. Why he could not imagine her life without her. He thought that he hate her very much and he liked her pain so why he could not bear to see her critical condition now. Why did he affect so much from her drastic step? He should not be mad about this but he became lost. He left the entire world to search and he searched her insanely everywhere.

Now when he found her why he was so happy and satisfied. Was it only just for those letters, which she wrote against her? Yes, he was happy that she was alive and now he was also saved from the law but was it only single reason of his smile. She became suddenly important in his life. She became the part of his life. He was Shlok agnihotri who was very possessive even about his things and she was his wife. His name attached with her and he could not bear to lose her. She was the most valuable thing of his life.

"She has to be alright and she has to remember all the things, I need the answers of many questions and she has many things which are unpaid." He looked her in the mirror and thought.

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Posted: 11 years ago
eww what a screwed man this shlok is...good job!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aastha lost her memory.now shloky boy has to work hard to get back her memory and still he has some feelings for aastha.loved it .will be waiting for further updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update omg poor Astha I hope she gets well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

Aastha lost her memory.now shloky boy has to work hard to get back her memory and still he has some feelings for aastha.loved it .will be waiting for further updates

yeah it's sad but she will get well with Shlok's help

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