NEW ASHLOK FF NEW MOON part 7 NEW UPDATE!21 PG - Page 4

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hi tanya, welcome to you dear and all the best for your exams, me to new to the forum like u, but regular now, ur story is real good and hope to hear from u soon, some more interesting on our ashlok, guess we all luv them so much and hope they dont disappear from the screen, a real treat, dont u agree.

wow, another great story line, well written,,,i'm so excited...cant wait to see more updates

Very interesting start...pls update soon!

awesome update
want to know what happened in these 5yrs and before
how did she escape from shlok
continue soon

So astha had twins. ?.she's hiding in dubai...shlokie sey bachke aastha kahaan jaaogi

hey everyone Tanya is back...I really hope you people are enjoying my story though I know I am a bit weakling types in writing out stuffs but let me tell I don't know why but I really love writing and imagining all kind of love story I almost follow every couple in Hindi soaps
well I am a 17 year old teenager...or rather silly teenager who very much believes in fairy tales and that prince charming walla concept so if u rily see something utterly teenagish crap in my ff please do forgive me...and I guess I should end my blabbering and here is the second part

PART 2

"i am aastha kirloskar...alok's mumma"she said folding her hands in namste

"but...said the principal looking down at a file...ALOK AGNIHOTRI? She asked looking up

"yeaah dad's surname...well why did u call me?"asked aastha suppressing the topic

"ohhh yeah mrs agni...ohh i mean aastha i guess u should change ur daughters school or alok's school...cause alok cant stand any1 near his sister...nd if some one ever dared to interact with angel specially a guy...then u will find that boy in the hospital next moment...!said theprincipal with a total freaked out expression

"yeh pagla apne baap ke upar q jaa raha hein...voh baba baba karthe the aur yeh angel" murmered aastha{why is this mad showing his dads traits..he used to be behind his baba and alok is behind his sister angel}

"ahh kuch nai...i mean nuthng maam i am really sorry from alok's side...but actually i guess i need to change both of their school as i am moving to USA after a week...as i have got a very big event over there and i plan to shift my basis over there maam...so i guess u need nt worry abt them..thank you...!aastha replied smiling

Aastha took her leave from principal maam and walked towards the stairs to pick up her kids frm their classes thats when her best friend and partner Lidia calls her...!!

"hey Lidia babbyy...ssup?"asked aastha

"aastha yaaarr tune india ka offer q mana kiya...cummon USA sein zyada scope event planning ke liye india hein na idiot...!{aastha how can you drop the offer for going to india...india has more scope than USA for event planning na idiot}

what hmmm nw?"asked Lidia

"Lidia yaaar INDIA I can't go please"

"but why aastha"

"shlo..she was about to say something when she lost her balance and fell down on the stairs

India

"AASSSTHHHAAA"

"shlok beta"

"baaba"

"kya huva mere bacche...tum theek toh ho na?"asked neeranjan patting shlok on his head{what happened my child...everything is fine ryt?}

"haan baba mujhein kya hoga" said shlok straitening himself{yup dad what will happen to me?}

"nai tum aastha ka naam le rahe the shayad"said his baba staring him hard{no I guess you just took aastha's name ryt nw?"}

DUBAI

"mummaaa"

Aastha heard the faint calls of her kids...she slowly opened her eyes and saw a blurr image...but she identified Lidia and her kids sitting beside her...she struggled to open her eyes

"angel alok...she said touching their head

"sorry muuma" said alok crying and hugging aastha

"mere vajah shein apko school ana pada mere vajah sein apko voh stairs sein gire sab kuch mere vajah sein ...mumma par aap tnsn math lo meine voh stairs ko bohut maara...agar mumma k kuch ho jatha toh mein usein zinda nahi chodtha"said alok in btwn his sobs bt still angry on that stupid stair which made his mumma fall'

Aastha was shocked a scene replayed

{shlok held a goon which was initially hired by abhay from his collar and shouted "agar aastha ko kuch ho jata toh mein tumhein zinda nai chodtha...haeeinn!!!"}

Aastha kaha kho gayi kya huva tujhein asked Lidia shaking her hands b4 aastha's eyes

"kuch nai yaar Alok dekha tum q mumma ko pareshan karthe ho bola tha meine apna gussa control mein rakho lekin nai tumhein toh bas prove karna hein kit um us rakshas ki beta ho"sAid aastha turning her head to the other side

"voh big boo walla rakshaz mumma"asked angel

"nai ekdum prince walle rakshas"said aastha and stromed out of the room angrily

"plinchhee walle lakshaz hotha hein bhaiyya"asked angel looking at alok with wide eyes

"tum aur tumhari fairytales mujhein kya patha"replyed alok shrugging his shoulder

"bhaiyya bhukku lagi hein"said angel patting her stomach

"MUMMA KHAANNAAA"shouted alok and took angels hand and both went to change

And here inside the kitchen aastha took a very big red bell pepper in her hand and was day dreaming about shlok all their moments till her leaving the agnihotri mansion started flashing in her mind...she was grateful to a person there who let her escape that concentration camp known as agnihotri mansion

She took the bell pepper and started chopping it as if it was shlok's head

"i hate u shlok agnihotri"she said spitting hatred

"but voh capsicum hein shlok nai"said Lidia and took away the knife from aastha

"Lidiya alok ko dekh kar mujhein dar lag raha ki voh bhi us ghatiya insaan ki tarah insensitive aur manipulative na bane"said aastha

"aastha alok insensitive nai over sensitive hein, and manipulative nai possessive hein...shayad shlok bhi..."

"nai Lidia shlok kya hein yeh mujhsein acha kaun jantha hein" aastha shouted...she breathed hard

"mumma" came a voice from behind and they turned to find angel standing there in a pink Barbie night gown and her hairs open and in a mess and she was holding a puppy in her hands

"go honey go and play"she said to the puppy and left it on the ground

And then she runs to her mumma and hugs her " mumma ual angly on me?"she asked

Aastha took her daughter in her arms

"nai toh meri pari...mumma ap sein gussa q hongi?"

"fil alok shein?"angel asked

"alok?bhaiyya hein na voh tumhare?"asked aastha

"pal voh bash mele shein 2 mins bada hein mumma"

"bada toh hein na bacha mere"she said kissing angel on her forehead

"mumma bhuku"said angel

"alle han meri princess ne toh khana nai khaya na jao hath mu dholo and bhaiyya ke saath dining table par jao mumma ne apki favourite chicken and bhaiyya ke liye noodles banaya hein

"chickennn"shouted angel and started clapping her hands happily she slipped down from her mother's hold

"honey mumma made chicken fol ush"she shouted in glee and ran towards the dining table aastha could not help but smile seeing her daughter

"aastha teri packing hogayi kya tu sach mein USA jana chahti hein? "asked lidiya

"haan yaaar kabki ab bas jane ki deri hein"said aastha smiling and garnishing the noodles

Meanwhile in india

"Shlok teri packing hogayi kya" asked varad going through a file which he intended to sign

"haan yaar ab baz jane ki deri hein"said shlok who was busy working on his laptop

"kaha ja rahe ho chachu"came a voice from behind

Shlok turned to find a very beautiful girl of 12 standing there

"kavya?tum yahan"asked shlok

"han baba sein baat karni thi aap batao kaha ja rahe ho?"

"USA"replied shlok

END

I came across this FF coincidentally and totally hooked to it... please do continue... I love the story of the twins...

ok so alok is like shlok in terms of anger

wow dear nice update
loved it.
plz update soon