NEW ASHLOK FF NEW MOON part 7 NEW UPDATE!21 PG - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyyaaahhh evry1 this is Tanya and I am back with the introduction of my ff...this is the intro chappy...and my ff's revolves around aastha...{ofcurse shlok is a part} bt still more of aastha atleast in the first few part...!!!!
I thank everyone for the support and all ur comments and likes really did boost up my confidence level! Well here the story starts!
Ooty 8:am

"MAAM money order avdooth kirlosker ke liye"said a postman handing over a crisp white envelope to kalindi

"aastha"she whispered taking the enevolope in her hand...hugging it tightly she cries out

"meri bacchii...kaha hein tu...apni ayi baaba ko chod kar kaha chali gayi"she weeped

Avdooth comes and seeing his wife's condition hugs her tight and consoles her...and the incident which took place 5 years ago started playing in his mind

FLASHBACK

A blue meru taxi suddenly comes to an halt before aastha's house followed by a movers packers truck...aastha's family is very confused and that is when a man steps out of the car and hands over his mobile to avdooth he takes the mobile still confused and answered it

"hello" he said

"baba"said aastha from the othr side

"aastha beta tu...yeh kyaa ho raha hein?"

"baba app pls abhi koyi sawal math kijiye aur pls vaise kijiye jaise mein kahu voh please kijiye...apko meri kasam...apke saamne mr shekhar khade hein aur app aaiyi aur aju ko lekar yeh sher chodne valle ho...aap paiso ki bilkul chinta math karo...bata nai abhi app sab sein kab milungi...par aap bilkul chinta math kijiye...aur meri kabhi taalash bhi math karna nai milungi mein apko...apna aur ayi aju ka khyaal rakhna...bye"said aastha in one breath and cutted the call

"aastha...AASTHA"shouted mr avdooth through the phone but in vain

FLASHBACK ENDS

A tear made its way down avdooth's cheek...it has been 5 long years and he has not heard an anything about his daughter other than the money order which came at the 1st of every month somewhere from delhi...but when they tried to search for aastha there...as she said voh nai mili!!!

1 pm new era school dubai

"how dare u kiss my sister u moron"shouted a small 5 year boy almost ready to punch a other boy

"cholo usskkoo bhaiyya lehnlne doo app"said a small very cute girl standing behind the guy

"angel said that ishh y alok ish leaving u ...got it"alok shouted on the other boy

"really mister alok...or elese what would u do huh?"came a voice from behind all the children turned back and to their surprice principal maam with her big spectacles hanging on her nose was sternly looking at alok

Alok slowly left the collar of the other child and gave him threatening look

"i want you in my office in 5min...do u get it mr ALOK"shouted the principal and left from there

PRINCIPAL CABIN

A lady dressed in a beautiful blue laced anarkali was sitting there...she was continually fiddling with the pen stand on the table and mistakenly it slips from her hands and falls down

She bends down to pick it up

"let it be Mrs agnihotri"said the principal who closed the door of her cabin and came and took her seat

"AASTHA KIRLOSKER"said the lady smiling

"sry..."said the principal

"AASTHA ...aastha kirloskar thats my name...alok's mumma" she said folding her hand in a namste!!

END

i'll update the 2nd part mstly 2day nly...or 2moro...!!
hw abt this part?

u guys lyk it?

pls guys let me knw who all are reading my stuff...by a like cummnt or even criticisms will do...thank you!!!

Edited by chaichil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update!! Want to know what happened 5 years ago...update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue. Really liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
thank youuu sooo much every 1!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story, I wonder what happend to Astha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely... matlub kahani flashback mai ptaa chalegi... ki 5 saal pehle jya hua tha.. and aastha had a boy..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazygul

lovely... matlub kahani flashback mai ptaa chalegi... ki 5 saal pehle jya hua tha.. and aastha had a boy..

thku
ummm aastha had a boy?can bappa be so unfair?😛
chk out my new banner mayb u will get some clue 😉
Edited by chaichil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
waiting to know hw much shlok has changed in these five years
and hw did astha escape
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Awesome start. Great going :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start. ...
keep it up

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