I thank everyone for the support and all ur comments and likes really did boost up my confidence level! Well here the story starts!

"MAAM money order avdooth kirlosker ke liye"said a postman handing over a crisp white envelope to kalindi
"aastha"she whispered taking the enevolope in her hand...hugging it tightly she cries out
"meri bacchii...kaha hein tu...apni ayi baaba ko chod kar kaha chali gayi"she weeped
Avdooth comes and seeing his wife's condition hugs her tight and consoles her...and the incident which took place 5 years ago started playing in his mind
FLASHBACK
A blue meru taxi suddenly comes to an halt before aastha's house followed by a movers packers truck...aastha's family is very confused and that is when a man steps out of the car and hands over his mobile to avdooth he takes the mobile still confused and answered it
"hello" he said
"baba"said aastha from the othr side
"aastha beta tu...yeh kyaa ho raha hein?"
"baba app pls abhi koyi sawal math kijiye aur pls vaise kijiye jaise mein kahu voh please kijiye...apko meri kasam...apke saamne mr shekhar khade hein aur app aaiyi aur aju ko lekar yeh sher chodne valle ho...aap paiso ki bilkul chinta math karo...bata nai abhi app sab sein kab milungi...par aap bilkul chinta math kijiye...aur meri kabhi taalash bhi math karna nai milungi mein apko...apna aur ayi aju ka khyaal rakhna...bye"said aastha in one breath and cutted the call
"aastha...AASTHA"shouted mr avdooth through the phone but in vain
FLASHBACK ENDS
A tear made its way down avdooth's cheek...it has been 5 long years and he has not heard an anything about his daughter other than the money order which came at the 1st of every month somewhere from delhi...but when they tried to search for aastha there...as she said voh nai mili!!!
1 pm new era school dubai
"how dare u kiss my sister u moron"shouted a small 5 year boy almost ready to punch a other boy
"cholo usskkoo bhaiyya lehnlne doo app"said a small very cute girl standing behind the guy
"angel said that ishh y alok ish leaving u ...got it"alok shouted on the other boy
"really mister alok...or elese what would u do huh?"came a voice from behind all the children turned back and to their surprice principal maam with her big spectacles hanging on her nose was sternly looking at alok
Alok slowly left the collar of the other child and gave him threatening look
"i want you in my office in 5min...do u get it mr ALOK"shouted the principal and left from there
PRINCIPAL CABIN
A lady dressed in a beautiful blue laced anarkali was sitting there...she was continually fiddling with the pen stand on the table and mistakenly it slips from her hands and falls down
She bends down to pick it up
"let it be Mrs agnihotri"said the principal who closed the door of her cabin and came and took her seat
"AASTHA KIRLOSKER"said the lady smiling
"sry..."said the principal
"AASTHA ...aastha kirloskar thats my name...alok's mumma" she said folding her hand in a namste!!
END
i'll update the 2nd part mstly 2day nly...or 2moro...!!
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