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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

Ok i'l manage to update it til 7 pm.. Just fr u guys



go and rest... your health is important...
christene thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz update the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow what a story
it was very sad so we have zoya who is married to asad
but he never accept her bcuz he is in love wit his dead wife
at times I wanted to strangle asad like move on she is dead
like when he left after the birth of his son no heart u were living for a dead
person the living one have no place in ur heart
I was pretty upset u killed zyaad but I guess it was the only way to wake asad
up out of his memoryland.
so now zoya only learn abt her in laws she still have to learn abt shama and zyaad
guess u r gonna make her get back her memory somehow and she will leave asad
make him suffer now for losing his now said love...haha hoping.
continue soon and plz pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 11sinal

emotional part17

and loved the part18

keep reading dear thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

wow what a story
it was very sad so we have zoya who is married to asad
but he never accept her bcuz he is in love wit his dead wife
at times I wanted to strangle asad like move on she is dead
like when he left after the birth of his son no heart u were living for a dead
person the living one have no place in ur heart
I was pretty upset u killed zyaad but I guess it was the only way to wake asad
up out of his memoryland.
so now zoya only learn abt her in laws she still have to learn abt shama and zyaad
guess u r gonna make her get back her memory somehow and she will leave asad
make him suffer now for losing his now said love...haha hoping.
continue soon and plz pm

thnx dear keep qeading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: christene

plzzz update the next part

today by 3 or 4 pm keep reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



go and rest... your health is important...

i hv nw dischargd.. Nw i'l update as when i'l nt depresd abt ksg.. Oh god its very dificult to write without inspiration.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
finally asad accepted zoya.
feeling bad about zyaad.
i didnt get pm this time tooo😭
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19- section A
Guys this part has bang surprise of twist in section B

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Asad approached to zoya, he cme close to her.
He hooked her blouse, he touched her bck.
He turned her, he wanted to kiss her bt just then asad's phone rang, it was ayan,
Zoya moved out.
Asad: "couldnt u call later" he blamed hm for destroying their loving moment.
Ayan: "bhaijan, i caled u tell that plz cme fast we r waiting" he cut the call.
Asad and zoya went to khan villa.
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Asad: "ami," he huged dilshad.
All share their bonds.
Nikhat: "bhabhi hw r u nw " she huged zoya.
Zoya noded in positive.
Humaira, najma, nikhat and zoya were busy chating.
Ayan asad farhan convo.
Asad: ayan, today i want to tell zoya, everythng abt her.
Ayan: "bhaijan, wat ? Wont it be harmful for her." he said with concern.
Farhan: "i think bhaijan is ri8, its gud if bhabhi knew abt her son".
Asad stood up and went to zoya: "i want to talk to u, its urgent" zoya simply went with hm.
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Asad took her to terace.
Asad narated her everythng abt shama, zyaad and abt past..
She sat on floor, and cried loud: "aa.. I lost zyaad, my son" asad was unable to cntrol her, it luks she nly heard that 1 thing, that zyaad is no mre.
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she was facing hard time.
Asad cuped her face: "i love u zoya" she ignored everythng n ran out of khan villa.
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Asad told every1 what hpnd.
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NT YET CMPLETD CHECK BELOW
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19- section B
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Zoya went to asad's apartment.
Dilshad: "asad, wat u did? You knw na hw cn she react." she said woridly.
Asad: "ami, nw wen i realised that i love her i cnt keep her in dark." he turned to her.
Dilshad: "asad, nw go," she told hm to leave.
Asad went
. Humaira: "ami, wat wil hpn nw" she tensely askd.
Dilshad: "dnt wry alah vl help her" she blinkd to humaira.
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Asad's apartment
Asad found zoya on terace, she was quiet.
asad: "zoya, i.." she dint let hm speak and huged hm.
Zoya: "i tried to undrstnd wat u said , bt mr. Khan i m nt remembering any thing. I dnt wana knw who was shama bt 1 thing wil bother me,.. My zyaad i lost hm" she huged hm crying hard.
asad's heavy heart was relieved nw, she nw hd aceptd hm with all hs wrngs and rights.
Asad: "so, mrs. Khan still sad" he said after 5 minutes of hug.
Zoya: she saw hm, nd noded in no.
Asad: "zoya, its too cold plz lets go in" zoya and asad went to their bedroom.
as they entered zoya lied on bed.
Asad: "helo, its nt hpng, i need u today" zoya stood up in haste.
Zoya was shockd to hear such words frm hm: "wat? Mr. Khan.."she shyly smiled.
Asad sat beside her: "zoya, shy.. Ohho" he teasd her.
Zoya: "mr. Khan nt today" she threw hm and ruged herself in blanket.
Asad: "zoya, please" he huged her frm the blanket.
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in mrng.
Asad was sleeping, zoya cme after bath. She thought of iritating hm.
She went to hm with bucket of water, as she was to splash on hm, asad hold her hand and made her fall on hm. Water scatered on them.
Zoya: "mr. Khan i just nw took bath" she sighed.
Asad: "oho.. And i dint bath u want me to bath." he smirked.
Asad brought her close to hm, zoya: "mr..." she was drawning.
Asad waved hs hands on her bare bck of blouse.
She moaned and closed her eyes.
Asad kised her cheeks, he droped her pallu, which made zoya bck in her sense.
She got up and threw hm away..
Zoya: "mr. Khan its mrng, u dnt even see time" she tucked her pallu.
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Asad's cell rang. He picked up.
Asad: "helo, mrng".
man: "u want to see ur son alive, then sacrifice ur wife, zoya" asad was shocked. He dint believe wat he said "son" which son.
Asad remained silent, he couldnt believe wat he heard.
Man: "dnt be shockd i m talking abt ur only son, zyaad asad ahmad khan," asad's eyes brimed, the man cntinued, " u remember wat hpnd that day in hospital. It was nt fault, i cut the lights. And ya ur son is f9.. U remember that day u dint take hr body adviced by doctor for zoya, i bribed hm. I did all, ha ha ha.. U knw wat u r very stupid, hw could child die just out of pneumonia.." asad was still unable to believe.
Asad: "wat r u saying" he was crying. Zoya heard hs sobs.
Zoya: "wat hpnd mr. Khan" she cuped hs face.
The man heard wat zoya said: "oh, zoya is here, asad i need her at cost of her son" asad clenched hs jaws in anger.
asad: "i'l kil u, tel me where s zyaad" zoya was dumpstruck hearing this.
Zoya: "mr. Khan my zyaad is..." asad sidely huged her.
The man cut the call.
Asad narated everythng to zoya.
Zoya: "mr. Khan may be sm1 is playing with our flngs." zoya sobed.
Asad: "i'l cnfirm frm hospital wats dat" zoya agreed.
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HOSPITAL
Asad: "cn i hv list of 2 mnth babies who died a mnth bck" he said to reception.
Receptionist: "sir, we cnt its cnfidentional" she denied.
Asad: "i'l case on ur hospital my child is kidnaped frm here".
Receptionist being scared she showed hm, there were no records abt zyaad.
He got angry, he colided with sm1 it was that doc. Asad grapd hs colar: "u lied, tel me where s my son" doc got feared.
Doc: "mr. Khan, look i cn xplain" asad draged hm out.
Sm 1 hit asad's head, he fainted.
till then doctor ran frm there.
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KHAN VILLA
asad informed abt the cal, all dint knew hw to react bt atleast they were happy that he is alive bt they were shockd who he could be.
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. guys dnt think i m heartless, hope u liked the update, so here is wat u wanted.
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