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Posted: 11 years ago
amzing story
read all 11 chapters
asad is trying to get his life back
but still he shuld get it easily...after what all he did
loved how neha n mihika were joining the dots
can't wait for the next update
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

when is the update...

i'l update it today itself by 4 to 6 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

amzing story

read all 11 chapters
asad is trying to get his life back
but still he shuld get it easily...after what all he did
loved how neha n mihika were joining the dots
can't wait for the next update
plz update soon

thnx thnx dear, ur cments make me write
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12- section A

Asad and zoya freed each other. They were embraced of each others presence.
Zoya: "ya allah, no batery, hw wil i inform ayan to take me frm here" she said looking at her phone.
Asad immediately took hands in hs pockect to take phone, bt couldnt find it. It looks he mised it on site.

Asad: "i think we should look for a taxi" zoya griped hs hands as he turned to wave hand to call taxi..
His arm was bleeding.
Zoya: "ya alah, its bleeding" she exclaimed nd looked at hm.
Asad: "u wil nw tore ur palu, rght" he smiled making her feel light.
Zoya: "i m nt gng to spoil my saree for u" she turned showing her anger.
Asad: "its paining aa."he tried to grap her atention.
Zoya turned to hm, tore her palu. And tied around hs arm. Zoya: "look its nt my cncern, bt i hv left with no other option" to which asad silently hummed.

KHAN VILLA
It was 7 pm nw..
Dilshad: "humaira, its late na, zoya used to be at 5 pm" she cnfirmed frm humaira who was in kitchen.
Humaira:"ya ammi, try her number" she said by cmng out.
Dilshad: she called her, " humaira its switched of" dilshad imediately made call to office frm where she cme to knw that zoya will be bck by mrng, it was biswas who tried to cntrol the matter till mrng.
Asad: "zoya, i think we must go n search for sm hotel" he turned and looked to zoya who was resting on milestone.
Zoya: "no need. I'l go home, "she left leaving hm behind.
Asad folowed her.

Zoya walked abt a mile nd it was dark.. She got scared.
Zoya: "ya alah, i m stupid why i left hm, i m idiot. Please save hm alah" she said to herself.

Asad:" so nw cn i join u" to which zoya got scared, she was hapy and sad at the same time. Mixed emotions made her look more preatier. It was 1st time he was admiring her.
Asad: "cn we go nw"zoya simply noded in yes.
They searched many hotels, bt no 1 was vacant with seperate room.

Now there was last hotel that was visible to them

Asad inquired: "is there two rooms vacant" he askd at reception.
Receptionalist informed that only single room is vacant.

Asad looked at zoya and she gve her aproval as it was nw 9.45 pm..
Asad paid at reception and went to room along with zoya.

As they entered.
Zoya: "i'l nt share the bed" she placed her on bed and fakely slept.
Asad was forced to sleep on floor.
After sm time without seeing hm zoya threw blanket and pilow to hm..
Asad was rejoiced that she cares.

KHAN VILLA
Humaira slept with zyaad, bt sleep was away frm dilshad as she knew smthng is wrng

NT YET CMPLETED CHECK BELOW
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12- section B
.In the morning.

. Because of his injuries asad was unable to wake up.
.Asad: "aaa..aa" he tried to get up.. After fight sleeping was floor was like dieing. Bt he did for zoya..

. Zoya: "r u ok?" she said looking hm, she has seen hm strugling to get up.
. Asad: "ya, i m" he got up.
He went to wash room..
.Zoya: "zyaad, all wil be worying fr me." she said to herself.
. Zoya took her phone,: "what a fish, no battery".
.Asad came of washroom.

.Asad:"zoya, wat hpnd u need smthng" he could feel that she is upset.
.Zoya:"nthng, i m ok, lets go zyaad wil be waiting for me." she made her steps to door.
.Asad: "dnt u want to fresh" he askd pointing washrum.
.Zoya: "no i dnt want, shall we leave nw" asad noded n went with her.

KHAN VILLA.
.All were waiting for zoya.
.Dilshad:"office boy hd said that she'l be bck til mrng, alah where s she" she was worid.
Humaira:" ami, zyaad is abt to wake up. He must be hungry, u knw na in mrng he dint take botle milk." she said being upset.
Dilshad: "humaira, u go n check n plz dnt let hm wake nw" humaira left.
Ayan: "ami, dnt wry bhabhi is grown up, she'l be bck, najma lets go we r gtng late"he calmed dilshad n took najma vth hm.

Asad and zoya were waiting on road for sm taxi..
Suddenly a taxi cme.
Asad stopd the taxi.
Asad: "zoya lets go" he directed zoya to bck door.
Zoya simply sat beside asad.

They silently sat in car, in half an hour they reached khan villa. Zoya silently got out of car and entered. Asad then took car to his apartment.

KHAN VILLA
Zoya: "phoophi, where s zyaad" dilshad turned to her.
Dilshad:"where were u, i askd frm ur ofice, they just said u'l be back till mrng"zoya dint want to clear.
Zoya: "nthng much phophi, sm important ofice work" she left to zyaad as she dint wana face her.

In room.
Humaira: "bhabhi, cm he is hungry" humaira handed zyaad to zoya.
Zoya: "ok, humaira please prepare tea for me, i m suposd to go nw" humaira noded.


In office
Asad was in his cabin.
Biswas: "sir. Still we r unable to discover who sent the goons" asad turned.
Asad: "u should find it"

Zoya: "neha, yesterday u reached safely na" zoya askd neha taking her seat.
Neha: "ya yr, bt where were u.." zoya got embrace to answer.
Zoya: "leave it lets start the work" neha left for sm for sm work.

After an hour
Asad cme out of cabin, nd was mesmerised to see zoya.
She was sleeping placing her head on desk. He knew she couldnt sleep whole night.
He went to her. Placed hs hand on her head that made zoya wake.
. Zoya: "u, wat u want" she said with low tone.
Asad: "go home n take rest" zoya was too tried that she couldnt even initiate to say thnks. She simply took her bag and left.
Asad's body was too paining badly. Bt then to he was here to find out who did this to hm


Zoya's room
She simply placed herself beside zyaad nd was asleep in few minutes.

drawing area
Humaira: "ami, bhabhi hd cme n she is asleep".
Dilshad: "i m sure, smthng s wrng which she is hiding" she said with concern
najma: "i think we r worying without any reason" she said taking evening tea.

At night
Asad's apartment
Asad:" why i m thinking abt her? What is this feeling.. Allah i m cnfused help me" he said to hmself.
Asad: "i need to talk to zoya abt zyaad, bt nw" he finalised to meet her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part but short one
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
plzzz try to give long update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
asad s worried for zoya and zyaad
hope he loves them
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU FOR UR PM
WHY CANT HE JUST ACCEPT THAT HE LOVES HER
HE'S SOO STUBBORN
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update😊
so asad is beginning to have feelings😳
looking forward to romance in the next update..
plzz update soon..

Maha
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it ...as always...happy that asad feeling is changing nw towards zoya

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