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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry back
guess wont be able to do it all today
what was he thinking there
is he mad or what
how could he do this to himself
gosh that was harsh what arjun did man
arjun not everything can be in our hands
somethings are outta our control
how can you think you are responsible for it all
and that you should pay for it
thank god maan stopped him and told other about it
or they wouldnt have known what he did
please dont take blame of things you arent responsible for arjun
it will hurt your sister and the ones who love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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even i wanna know whats the big bad secret
its something horrible and dark for sure
or else those peeps wouldnt react this way and khushi remembering her past was no good too
what is maan upto now
they tried to make arjun understand but he wont listen
ahhh what beautiful song again
ahh am glad arjun stopped feeling guilty there
so the truth shall be out and soon
wait why is he so shocked when he saw the writing
hope all will be okay after the truth comes out
a lot depends on the truth it seems
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm. It was a nice suprise birthday for khushi. I hope it won't be a bad day for khushi because of villains.
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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 20:

khushi opened hers eyes first and mesomerised seeing her laadgovernor hugging her as if she will go away from him if he released her from his deadily grip.

khushi caressing his cheeck : did any one thought that ,this ASR will sleep like this with his mouth open like a child. ma u r son is really what u said he is hard for outside but when u look at him deeply we will know who soft he is.

with that thoughts she kissed his forehead lovingly but also his parted lips lightly thinking the devil is sleeping.

when arnav felt khushi stirr in his arms but he resisted to know what will his wife do now get the oppurtunity for which he waited.

arnav immediately rolled making khushi is under him in bed: so my wife is admiring me when I was sleeping.

khushi now understand that he is full awake and know what happened a while with blushing she said: ha though , I am ur wife na I have full rights to admire.

arnav: ha madam ,don't think it will be good when ur husband is awake na.

now khushi blush deepened arnav laughed seeing his wife and immediately steeped out from her make her confuse .

now arnav came with a packet to khusshi who was making her bed

arnav: khushi this is for u ,my first gift for u hope u like it.

khushi was fully excited and opened the gift while arnav chuckling seeing his wife's child like anxiety.

khushi now opened the pack there is this dress for her as a gift from him.

khushi's dress:

khushi's:




khushi liked it so well and hugged his husband murmuring a sweet thanks to him telling him she liked it very much.

but arnav didn't release her and said: don't u think u have to thank ur hubby properly

now poor khushi was confused seeing her like that arnav smriked and said: didn't get confuse sweet heart , u should just thank me like what u did when u thought I was sleeping

now poor khushi got what he want blushed more red thinking how shameless this laud governor is

arnav : khushi I am waiting

khushi: arnavji live me I have to go

arnav: not soon sweart heart.ok let me make it easy for u, I will take it my self with out troubling ,till u had guts to kiss the fully awaked husband.

now khushi being khushi trapped in his web not knowing it by saying: u think ,I have no guts and scared of u,then u were completely wrong mr.raizada.

arnav: oh then prove it .

now innocent brain of her lightened up and known she is trapped in lion's den.

khushi in thoughts : hai devimaya buaji is right she always scolds me to think before speaking with others, no what I can do devimayya save me please

today khushi's devimayya is at her side now whole family is now at their door saving her

arnav: don't think that u were escaped I will get it next time.

with that he release and went to open the door for others .Whole family is now at his door and wished him good morning and went in

after another round of wishes from family and showering her with their gifts all were seated

dadi by giving some baggages : arnav beta akash beta, pari, princess now u were going first time to our kingdom and adressing our people ,so this is the two attires from me that u should were for it for this day .please don't complain and wear it ,princess I know arnav beta gifted u saree so I am giving u only final attire u should wear at evening ceremony .

maan is constantly signalling arnav to say no but before he understood dadi caught him.

dadi: maan ,I know what u were doing behind my back, arnav beta is not like u he will listen to me and wear what I had given him .right na arnav beta?.

arnav known he is trapped said : ha dadi, I will.

dadi had also given dresses to the other youngsters to wear them at evening ceremony.

nani: now all ready fast , chotte u will ready in akash room while payal will be ready in ur room as it will be help for both of them to ready fast helping others.

with that all went out arnav is last one to go but not before seeing khushi tounge out challenging him s that he now cannot get what he wanted making him see it to her what is to be challenge ASR and went out with sulky face.

when he went to akash room there is arjun,maan,nk with akash.

maan: now we have to ready fast as there is a message for us from our man who went yesterday to see what happening in our kingdom he mailed us the details so lets see it as the ladies will be late to get ready so we utilise so after 30 minutes we will be here .is it all ok.

to which others nodded and gotten to get ready .exactly ,after 30 minutes as planned they all assembled and maan opened his mail

and started reading.

sir, people there living like hell because of the malhotras there have to daily go to the work at sharp 5'0 clock and work hard upto 6pm and there salary is only 50 rupee for a day how hard they will work , if there were even 1 min late they were dead that day they have to get 500 beatings from korada and have to stand with only 1 leg support leaving other in air up the entire day upto 6'pm .they had only 3 days leave in whole month they had to work the entire 27 days even their health is worst if not they were not given any food and money for 2 whole months, no one had write to go to town they have to buy all theirs at malhothra bazar for what ever rate they told which is more price ,no one have a right to question them, no one had right to even get education here all the schools and colleges of urs were sealed by them, if any girl is good looking they have to bed the malhotra man if any one objected they will be spot dead,so the girls were painted black hiding their true grace so that they don't have to go ,they were so many of the acts which were even more brutal .please come son here I will try to get futher details .reading this message there stood raizada men ,agnihothri men fuming like caged lions .

the ever sweet man akash spoke first with the rage which is not at all suited for him but today he had: that bas***ds bhai they have to die in such away that even 1 piece of their cell will not be left with out hurt.

NK is no less , no one can believe this if this is same man who always makes fun seing his face now with had a pure rage : yes ,now we not only we have to take the revenge for our family but also for the poor thousand people

arnav who was burning like a fire : now our first strategy is finalised .Now our motive is to get our people from the torture, they have to live like normal people,they have to get educated, girls have to live life their with out any fear with their true identity.After that we will see those malhothras.

others agreed with him

arjun now smiled: didn't I saw u were apt for king arnav. My father always says to us in our childhood the king will be the king if he first thinks about his kingdom people's safety and their happiness. Now itself u proved by this arnav u were going to be good king.

arnav: hope so arjun ,u know me na. I was fearing, if not I may be a good king for them but I try to not at all degrade my mama's and dad's name.

maan: u will never we know it and trust u

with that these 5 men hugged each other promissing each others they were there for others and they will strive hard to achieve their like true like their bussiness men attitude.

maan: no arnav u were best .

arnav's out fit:


arjun:


maan:


akash:


nk:




note: thanks for comments friends, i also request u to please comment on charactersketch as i have done so much search to post it ,i know i didn't post pictures but there links .sorry for that inconvienience as i tried but i can't get how to post pics so i posted links .i think it will be good if u see the persons which were playing the role here. thanks once gain.

Edited by kb.mounika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

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even i wanna know whats the big bad secret
its something horrible and dark for sure
or else those peeps wouldnt react this way and khushi remembering her past was no good too
what is maan upto now
they tried to make arjun understand but he wont listen
ahhh what beautiful song again
ahh am glad arjun stopped feeling guilty there
so the truth shall be out and soon
wait why is he so shocked when he saw the writing
hope all will be okay after the truth comes out
a lot depends on the truth it seems

thank u so much for ur coments about every post ,waiting for futher chapters also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter..
want to see how these men are going to work to get the revenge..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wanjt to see how revenge saga plays out
Apeter thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
God I am waiting for the boy to take revenge...

The update was rocking like always

Next one sooon... I can't wait for it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update !!! so king is all set to free his people from clutches of evil.. but king lost his challenge to his queen.. CS is superb... loved the update..

thanks for pm

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