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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

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oh no she didnt man
sheesh peeps she has taken so many sleeping pills
this is bad
what were you thinking khushi
suicide will not solve anything dear
it will make things worse
why did she do that
oh god arnie i hope to god you arent too late
or else you will lose her this time
and i dont want that

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

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ahhh so geet is here too
thats cool
mami anj really now is not the time to bring that up
not when she is dying
oh my this isnt good
will their hubby understand them i hope they do
what they sang through the song well hope it makes a difference to them both
i should think that it will haunt them]
after all khushi has taken the sleeping pills
wow what a beautiful song though
will she make it or not

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

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no khushi you cant leave him
and he didnt really mean it
if you go away from his life he wont be able to live dear
dude snap outta it take her to some hospital
wait whats PKSA hospital
and how can they take her there
if its only for the owners
well guess shall find out when we get there naa
wow arnie and payal both were going crazy
but of course they were after all khushi is important to them
well not only them but rest of the family too
no nothing can happen to khushi man
wait who is this new entries and why are they so worried for khushi

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

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who are they
and how are they related to payal and khushi
wait payal dadi hain this is getting more and more interesting
seems they are pretty affluent peeps then
okay seems nani and mama mami know these people
wow this is getting more and more mysterious
but its arnie whom am worried about
it seems he has become a statue
dude snap outta it please
what the what was that in the end
arnie dont do anything stupid please dude

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

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okay nothing too dangerous phew
only praying to DM it seems
wow who would have thought this day would come
ASR agreeing that he isnt the one who wrote his own fate
and begging DM to give him his khushi back
man thats touching for sure
hmm am sure DM will give him his khushi back
what is he doing dude dont do that
somebody stop him please
oh good seems payal is gonna stop him
well am glad someone is gonna to stop this man
what was he thinking

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

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chalo good she slapped him and made him see sense someone did at least
oh my didnt see this side of payal before
she sure was mad as hell on that nurse
but then cant really blame her now can we
sheesh she sure scared the nurse didnt she loved this side of payal
seems arjun and maan have seen this side before of her
ahhh she is right in what she said
you have to stop doing this to yourself you hurt yourself and your family when you do such things
and am glad he listened to payal too
teddy cute name for geet
ahhh she met her bhabhis and like this sad that
i know geet only payal could have done this]
even i wanna know how they are related to payal and khushi
wait why are the elders so tensed whats going on
what they are their brothers
hain when how where why what

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

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what the past sure is complicated
but sure is interesting for sure
so the introductions
dadi brothers and what not
awww that was cute what payal said about maan and what maan said about payal regarding the nurse she scared
wait is arjun hiding something seems like it
wow these guys are affluent and rich more than raizadas it seems
oh goodie she is okay now
thank god for that
wait princess he also called khushi princess interesting
ahhh she is coming around but is in pain
wait what was tormenting khushi so much
what was that about
what did he forget that now she remembers

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

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okay so didnt see this coming
her past seems to be dark too
hmmm she sure has suffered a lot
and now he shall know of her past
which they think arnie wont be able to take
but what happened i wonder
guess will know and soon
man this was very emotional update for sure
will be back soon for more

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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Sri

@..Sri..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

I can say this ff is really nice one... i enjoyed it through out... but one suggestion. please make sure about the sentence formations and please make sure of using full stop ( . ), cama ( , ) and all. and about the relations, try to mention the relation " bhai " khushi and payal are calling thier brothers by name. i'm lil bit not accepting it... but its really nice ff... i really liked the song from the movie "Hitler" nice situational song. do PM me...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

hey it was amazing story.. read all parts in one go.. loved it.. do continue soon want to see how raja arnav singh raizada take revenge from malhotras for their past.. best wishes and happy writing.. 😃

thanks for scrap.. do continue sending me pm.. 😊

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