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meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hi-Five!!! Wishing this story so so many more :)

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

congratulations for the new thread...

waiting for the update...

cheers...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Congratulations Sandy...🥳

This story and you deserve all the accolades that come its way!

Ab bas intezaar...

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luvbug

@luvbug

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congratulations on the new thread!

when is the next update?

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Waiting

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I won the game🥳

Just got back home Sandy, from the ordeal

And here I am trying to write a comment worthwhile of the chapter you wrote.

I am starting to love Nainital. Your descriptions are so lovelyI wish I could visit the place.

And the girls sleeping together and Khushi reminiscing over Christmas mornings in the Convent reminded me of my school days. The fun we had singing Christmas carols around the Christmas tree.

And then Khushi and Arnav in the greenhouse.

I love a jealous Arnav.

I really wish Sanjeev is there at the wedding.

I'd love to see Sanjeev and Khushi together, and Arnav eaten up with jealousy.

Arnav now knows Khushi was hurt by his words and thinks he forgot her.

Waiting now to see what he will do next.

And Sandy, I love your dress sense.

Loved Nani's saree and Khushi's dress.

Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

My spot!

Edit 1:

Oh my God Sandy...what an encounter...you did such a fab job of writing it down, my girl. 👏

Loved it super loved.

Morning time busy time...will be back to edit this further.

Haye this was too good. 😃

Edit 2:

Sandy no praise is enough to tell you how well you write...sachi mai you impress me very time (This seems to have become my opening line every time i comment on DND 😆)

You took me on a wonderful countryside walk in Nainital...the clear blue sky, the thanda thanda mist, the blue mountain and the sun shining though the trees i could see and feel all of it.

Loved the christmas feel that you gave in the opening scene...the convent educated girls quirks that you always write about has me nodding my head all the time. 😆

Needless to say i loved khushi's morning self conversation. For a 22 yr old beautiful girl khushi is very grounded she knows all the time how to conduct herself, with her friends and her elders.

I love the detailing that you always give to all your scenes...that early morning jog look of arnav, haye! 😳 U know honestly i would not want to be in khushi's shoes right now imagine having to control you emotion and feelings in front of this mr. hot and sexy no matter how angry you are with him. 😆 I think khushi held on to her ground very firmly to the best of her ability cause i know for a fact that i would have been a goner at "I didn't forget you"😆

Loved the brilliant face off encounter between arnav and khushi with both wanting the other to concede defeat. And i guess i don't have to tell you that my heart was doing a marathon run of dhak dhak at the whole stop her at the door and invade her personal space. 😳

Arnav is relentless in his pursuit of 'his girl' so does that mean that arnav has now changed his stance and that he believes in love and happy ever after...or is the green eyed monster making him do this.

Jo bhi ho a Jealous Arnav ...i love him baby! 😳And i shall continue doing this happy little dance waiting for the next close encounter...

Edited by kondhili - 11 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

~Edit~

Boy, this Khushi is something. That little line between strong willed and stubborn, she treads between the two and carefully so. With all her perfections and imperfections, I really like her spirit. Her excitement over Christmas, her warm relationship with Devyani, her concern for Payal.. so sweet. And there is no way I could resist Arnav's charms the way she did.. but I guess its a once bitten twice shy thing?

Arnav. Jogging. Uff ☺️ No, wait.. ☺️☺️☺️

Loved their confrontation, and as you know I always enjoy a jealous Arnav 😳 He is a man on a mission and I'd like to see how long Khushi can keep her distance. But yes, Arnav deserves to know the extent to which he hurt her first, before he can hope to have her in his life. But I loved how you gave us a peek into his mind, and his vulnerable heart.

Can't wait for more!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

much waited chapter...its out standing...sweet and intense one...

i love the way u started this chapter kushi and her thoughts...she is such sweetheart... for her every day is soo special and she can find happiness in that no matter where she is ...and the way she thinks about her last meeting with arnav it clearly shows how much she loves him...at her age its natural the way she rects and thinks about the kiss and her response...her feelings are very clear...

and later the way kushi thinks about her friend happiness,all that matters, i guess kushi is the one who will talk to mamiji regarding akash and payal mater...

Arnav...thank u thank u sandya for giving us arnav feelings regarding kushi...he won't agree now ,he loves kushi a lot...iam like this😃 while reading each part...his insecurities, and his fear of loosing kushi...raizada tu gaya...

finally the conversation...thank god they talked and went out everything about each other...
green house scene is written sooo well ,the way arnav closed door and their conversation...bravooo...now the game begins...u have to try hard raizada to get kushi...

thank u for the lovely chapter and pm sandya enjoyed reading... 🤗...
and one more thing nanital description simply superb...
cheers..

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago