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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Congrats on the new thread!

Waiting for the update.

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Nishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Congrats on the new thread...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Updated the chapter on page 4.

IF is giving me some serious formatting issues. I did not write Arnav's thoughts in bold but IF has decided to post it that way for me. I have tried correcting but it just isn't working. Apologies for poor formatting.

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Sandhya

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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fortuna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Congratulations on the new thread dear...read all the chapters in one go 😃.

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fortuna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Chapter 22--------loved it AGAIN 👏

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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Oh God he only told her fo find someone unlike him.now what happen?he can't think about it.then admit man you love her😆.simple I think for me but for this people it's complicated.thanks for the early update

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I have a new name for you, Sandhya. It'll be the Queen of Detailing. Right from the start DND has been thoughtfully written, as if each scene, each dialogue and each emotion was there in your head before you started writing this. You may have improvised upon the initial storyline but I can easily bet that you know exactly what you want to make the reader feel with each gesture the characters make, each thought that flits through their minds and each setting you so effortlessly weave.

What I am trying to say is, it is hard to write about a complex character, a layered character like Arnav. He doesn't give away much, so that adds to his mysterious aura but he gives us enough to stay interested, you know?

I do get Arnav's logic, actually because when Khushi and Arnav's thoughts are juxtaposed then it is anybody's guess who would be the one to get hurt the most. Let's see how Arnav plans to 'not over' things between the both of them. Ah, that'd be exciting! ;-)

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

congrats fr the new thread..
i agree with khusi..it's not easy for her to accept this attraction..love..feeling whatever it is
..neither she can ignore it...
thank u fr pm
update soon

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Hey Sandhya...

That was another lovely ...much awaited update,...

Though Arnav does feel that Khushi would be the only girl to enter his hear n mind or take place in his life...is he really ready fir that...? The reasons which made him get out of the train almost all still exist...then why is he he'll bent to make Khushi confess her feelings for him...? Did the way Khushi responded to his kiss tell him anything...? Once she is completely into him again...will he not suddenly realize again that Khushi deserves someone else nicer ...and vanish from her life again...? Is this pursuit just to satisfy his ego that she could. Not move on from him...or found anyone who made her feel like he could...? He did realise Khushis self preservation n gaurd ... Then unless he is ready to take out all her insecurities... What is the purpose behind all this verbal arguments ?

I'm proud of restraint Khushi showed here...especially the last few statements she made... Though She longs for his sight n her heart always betrays her by reacting to him ...she is not giving up without a fight or let him walk all over her again...

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Currently this FF is undoubtedly the most intense love story of Khushi and Arnav .

When it comes to the matter of stubbornness both Khushi and Arnav are similar. But as you mentioned in the FF, Khushi is optimistic while Arnav is too cautious in love related matters.

I like the self talk of both Khushi and Arnav. The intensity of Arshi scene mesmerized me.

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