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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Dev is an intresting character, quite realistic
amazing dr
i just hope it will be swaron in end
awsum do continue
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awesome part..

loved it..

feel bad for dev even i hate constant comparison n won't do any thing if any1 compares me with other on purpose n do wat i like.. felt bad for him n his hatred for swayam s justifiable .. but dev trying to destroy swayam's happiness i won't spare him... n looks like it starts from sharon n if he hurts any1 of them am sure ll kill him..

waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Dev had a evil smile on his face. His decision of entering college later than Swayam worked.
"Swayam, the great person. Tch Tch who fights from such a hot girl?" He laughed. "If I would not been here, I would missed this secret of my perfect bro."I need to know that girl. If bro is not giving her attention I can try her out."

The way they were fighting Dev could sense some fishy n big between them. This was the only thing he wanted. A chance to show Swayam his place in hell. He could see the deep feelings on Swayam's face for that girl n in an instance he knew what he has do. There was no back out. He could go to any level to destroy Swayam's life.

"Let's start my plan of destroying Swayam by using this girl called Sharon," he thought. For that I need to become friendly with his so called "Gang" and Sharon. Time to get introduced to them by Swayam.

Swayam was walking towards the canteen, when Dev called him " hey bro".

Surprised by who called him like that, Swayam looked behind and saw Dev standing there.

"Hey Dev, what r u doing here"? I thought you wanted to rest because you were tired of jetlag." asked Swayam.

Well I was tired at that time , but I was really excited abt joining my new clg , so sleep never came...hence I thought it would be better to explore the clg which I will be joining from tomorrow, Dev said.

Ah ! well its good your excited abt your new clg . Don't worry you will love it here. C'mon , I am going to the Canteen ..Let me introduce to my Friends.

Yeah ok bro! thanx for taking care of me !,Dev told Swayam

It's my pleasure, plus you're my brother .it's my duty to take care of you, now c'mon lets go! Said Swayam while walking inside the canteen.

Dev in his thoughts "Exactly, I promise to take real good care of you as well Swayam" with a evil smirk.

Swayam led him to a small crowd sitting together and discussing within themselves.

"Hey guys! "Swayam says to his friends.

Everyone said hi! Back ...and suddenly Swayam's and Sharon's eyes get locked with each other.

Both of them stare each other in their eyes, trying to find out what really both wanted from each other by heart.

Dev was noticing this eye contact of both of them with a malicious grin on his face. "Brother Swayam looks like you really have quite a deep feeling for this girl ,I am gonna have so much fun tearing your heart apart , that you will even forget you ever had a heart in yourself.

Rey's voice broke their stare, and Swayam asked "What did you say Rey"?

"I asked Swayam who is this guy with you?"Rey said to Swayam.

Oh yeah! Guys meet Dev , he is my cousin brother ,who lived in London . He is to attend our college from tomorrow onwards.

Dev says "hi" to everyone. "Hey guys, I really heard a lot about you all from uncle and Swayam.

"Hey I am Rey "Rey said to dev and extended his hand in front of him for a handshake."They are Vicky, Nilesh, Bharat, Amar" He said pointing towards gang. "And they are Kriya, Simmi, Rinni n Sha..."

(but he was interrupted by Dev)

"Ah ! You must be Sharon Raiprakash ...right?" Dev extended his hand towards her.

She shook his hands with a confused look.."Yes, I am ..but how did you know "...??

"Well my lady , (Dev perfectly imitating a gentleman's personality) , your beauty and the aura around you is far more than the rumors I am listening since I have entered the college." I must say your beauty simply magical. If there is a guy in your life, I must say he must be even lucky then the angels present in the heaven"...He held her hand as if it was one of the most precious thing in this world ...

Sharon actually blushed a little after hearing such compliments for her..Normally a girl would have reached the top the skies after hearing such things. Yet she didn't feel anything in her heart coz she knew she actually wanted to hear those lines from Swayam and no one else. Only Swayam s compliments were actually felt by her heart.

Coming out of her thoughts about Swayam , she looked towards Swayam and saw his expressions. It looked like someone just slapped his face hard.

The jealousy was written all over his face. Sharon felt bad for him. She was uncomfortable with Dev's flirting.

Swayam was trying to behave normal. Dev was enjoying their reactions. For him this game was getting much more entertaining than he thought.
Sharon remove her hand from Dev's hand. Swayam was relieved. Even if he didn't claim Sharon to be his but he wasn't able to control his feelings.

The bell rang, all proceeded to the class. Dev was finding a chance to come closer to Sharon. The first stage of his plan was completed he was confirmed that what could totally break Swayam. Now he just need to win Sharon's trust on him n all the obstacles will be clear.

"So guys, we need to fasten our preparations for annual function" Sharon said after the class got over gaining everyone's attention.

"Sharon have u finalized the couple dance pair?" Kriya asked
"No not yet but I'll soon finalize it" Sharon said eyeing Swayam which didn't go unnoticed by Dev.

"Can I help u guys in this annual function?" Dev asked.

"Yeah why not one more dancer will improve our performance" Swayam encouraged him n others supported his decision.

Dev said in mind "You will regret this decision forever bro"

They started the rehearsals. Dev was trying his best to come closer to Sharon.

"Guys if u all dont mind can we perform some steps of my dancing style from London? It will be new n refreshing. What Say?"

"Yeah we dont mind at all" Rey replied.
"Toh I'll show u some steps" Saying this Dev proceeded towards Sharon n asked "May I"


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Edited by ikki215 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Thank you to all readers who give this SS a chance to read. We hope that u'll continue to support this SS till end.
There was less Swaron today but this chapter was much needed to connect the storyline.

Add Swaron_PMs for pm for this SS.
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
mine😳

Heyya i just realised that i have to comment on both 2nd and 3rd update😲
starting with second update...
"Learn something from ur brother"
ok so as this is the most repeated line...i would say after this i cant completely blame dev for his evilness😳
but i still hate him for hating swayam😡it wasnt his mistake after all
and i cant believe dat idiot dev was eavesdropping when swaron were talking😡😡

now coming to third update...
bechara swayam is completely oblivious to his brother's intentions😒
and i hate the way dev is flirting with sharon taking advantage of their situation...
i just hope u make swayam realise it soon😉😛




Edited by -Chaitra- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
res
promise to take ages to unres
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
coolness
this dev---he's exciting----i mean bad guy---but i'm hoping he'll do some good inadvertently to swaron..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Chapter 2
Vilan ke bina koi lovestroy poori nahi hoti 😈
He he he 😆
Love the update🤗
Can't wait to see what is Mr.Dev Shekhawat upto 😉
Because chahe Swayam, Sharon se kitna bhi khafa ho, at the end jab koi unke beech main aaye toh Swayam thodi na Sharon/Sharon thodi na Swayam ko dur jaane dega/Degi.. Hai ke nahi?? 😉
Can't wait to read ahead
Please update soon and do PM me 😃

P.S Thanks for sharing the link 🤗

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Firstly the concept is just new and something different..Though i am not follower of D3 anymore But i like the trio,which makes story damm interesting..I like the negative character of Dev..And i can easily symphathyize with him..Becoz comparision is really very bad to spoil such brains..So Amazing plot here..Now dev is in mumbai to destroy swayam..Sharon part was well described..I loved it as she is now doing such a great efforts to win him back...So i am just waiting looking forward to read Swayam,sharon and Dev equation..As story is damm interesting..

I forget to mention..The banner is really beautifull..TanHa in it..Thanx..
Do update
Prateek
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazingg update
watever sympathy i had for the character dev
vanished into thin air after reading your update
seeing his antics to hurt swayam emotionally is really disgusting 😡
as a writer yu guys are not leaving ny stone unturned
this is wat i like in a plot where you can see the brilliance 👏
coming from the writers side
on a very well formed plot
where you hate as well as understand the different layers in a character
coming to ur update
dev is sumone to watch for as he has already taken the road
for destroying swayam
n indirectly will hurt sharon too
the small portion where sharon thinks about swayam was very subtlely put
all in all i m excited wat yu guys gonna do next
do update soon
looking forward to ur update 🤗


Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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