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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Amazing and brilliant update,

So Arnav was definitely affected by Khushi going on a date,

It was so sad as Khushi thought he might stop her but he didn't as he just told her to be careful,

So khushi's date went well and she got on really well with Amar,

Wow Arnav actually waited up and the conversation between them was quite awkward especially the question Khushi asked and it's such a shame Arnav did not reply.

So Garima knows the truth and has asked Khushi about Arnav, I'm very surprised but I'm glad.

Will we get another update before Christmas, I don't think I will survive with that cliff hanger till next year, lol.

Thanking you in advance for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Merry Christmas and a happy new year xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Wow Nidhi, I didn't know you started a new SS!! 😳

The only good thing about this is that I get to read all 3 chapters without the wait 😆

Anyways, I loved the setting of the SS, Chicago and the family of doctors and Khushi being averse to medicine 😉 The thing about running out of tissue papers, had that recently 😆

Oh where do I start, I have so many things to say about Arnav but I'm afraid I wont frame them properly He loves her, she loves him, why o why he is afraid to take the plunge?? He knows how much Khushi loves him but then his insecurities, keeping the status quo intact weighs more than her love

My heart just feels for Khushi!! I'm glad Garima had an inkling about it and confronted Khushi but will this help?? The person who needs to be confronted is Arnav, no? But then Arnav has tightly guarded his feelings towards Khushi so even Garima doesn't know!!

I'm not sure what to make of Arnav at this point. He has placed Khushi & her family at such a high regard that he wont even give her a chance even knowing how much she wants it, in turn ends up hurting her & himself

Another emotionally intense, fine writing Nidhi dear 👏 But I can't see Khushi suffering, please do something😉

Cheers

(Please email me whenever you write a new story, just the first chapter, after that I dont need, will just stalk the thread 😊)

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#383

hi nidhi,

loved the emotions shown by both arnav and khushi. What a challenge to let go of your love every time knowing that the person actually loves you back.

I didn't get the last line by garima, "you can't spend your life ...love some one..." the first bit if fine but what does last few words mean?

thanks for the update

sri

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: cocoamob
Whether Arnav realizes that he loves Khushi or not, I think he is hurting a lot to see Khushi go out with Amar. The bond between mothers and daughters is always special! Once the daughter grows up, a mother can be her best and truest friend. Garima and Khushi's conversation is an example of that.
I really liked the Krish - Khushi conversation too - his protective instincts towards his younger sister and his naughty teasing :-)

Is this a new style of writing when you switch the tense? I didn't expect it and it seemed a little wierd at first and then I got used to the flow.

I was trying something different with the tenses but I think I'm making a mess of it. Let me know if it breaks the flow of the chapter.

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Just came across this story!!

Beautiful n brilliant!! Her mom knows too

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Wow... Amazing SS... 😃

Khushi so loves him and he does too... But he doesn't just want to lose relationships in his life something that has come to mean so much to him... Garima knows abt Khushi loving Arnav... 😲 Hope she helps her in some way...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

I was trying something different with the tenses but I think I'm making a mess of it. Let me know if it breaks the flow of the chapter.

Nidhi even I was thinking when I read it as to why the tense switching, My first thought was Nidhi's english is very good, why this sudden blunder!!!! But now I know you tried something different. It does feel a little wierd when you read it the first time.

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

your story stirred up way to many emotions in me!! awesome story line..Arnav and KHushi you break my heart and make me proud at the same time...and last update..her mom's word were just too much to bear...a mother knows her daughter well...was she intentionally trying to instigate Arnav to confess or see Khushi's reaction at the table when she asked Arnav to introduce KHushi to Samar?

Can't wait to read more! amazing writing!

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: roseycheek
your story stirred up way to many emotions in me!! awesome story line..Arnav and KHushi you break my heart and make me proud at the same time...and last update..her mom's word were just too much to bear...a mother knows her daughter well...was she intentionally trying to instigate Arnav to confess or see Khushi's reaction at the table when she asked Arnav to introduce KHushi to Samar?
Can't wait to read more! amazing writing!

I have read the update N no of times but after reading your commets, I feel Garima's doubts were confirmed on dining table when Arnav said he will introduce Amar..thats why she is sad now as she feels Arnav wont reciprocate Kushi's love..

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#390

"Is that all you want Arnav ?"
My heart tugged at that question and it pained at his reaction ...
I really love all the emotions runing all over the place for Arnav n Khushi ..,,, of curse he wasn't drunk .. He just stayed back to see when she comes back n mostly to know about her date
Very very nice
I didn't receive email plz plz e mail me next update at : archi629@gmail.com
Thanks a lot for wonderful story n sharing it with us

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