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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Nidhi nidhi you just keep getting better and better every time.

I thought 'You are the one" was one of your best works but looks like this one will surpass even that in terms of your writing skills.

I love the way you portray khushi in all your stories. She is definitely a woman of today with all the right values and beliefs in place. At the same time she has her weakness and insecurities which make you identify with her so easily.

I can understand arnav's predicament here poor guy will not want to hurt his adopted family in any way. 'What if' questions have troubled him and stopped him from exploring things between khushi and himself. All i can do is feel sorry for him and khushi.

I am sure Garima knows something is cooking maybe throwing Amar into the equation was her way of stirring things up a little. :)

Looking forward to reading the next part Nids...Curious to see how you are going to take it ahead.

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sarb

@sarb

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Itz quit awesum start and like the ss very much...

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

This whole concept is coming out such beautifully. Firstly i'd loved the way each relation had been blended the way Arnav has always been a part of the family!
You potray it so well!
The yearning in Khushi's heart and the distance that Arnav wants to maintain, which would be good for both of them!

True, if even a single thing goes Wrong in their relationship there is too much at stake for Arnav, the family he had for most of his life and the bonds he shared with all of them would be strained!

So setting up with Amar?.. Arnav didn't look good and Khushi obviously cudn't be happy, but Garima was adamant, is she cooking something? Does she know? Afterall she is a mother to both Khushi and Arnav too..

Beautiful update di, waiting for the next one!

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Awesome update..!!

So they finally talk and well her mom wants to set her up with someone who happens to be known to Arnav...sigh..

So Khushi agrees to meet Arnav and I am actually surprised to see Arnav hesitating about Aman..ahem..

Would love to see what happens next..!!

Cont soon please!

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MissChaos

@MissChaos

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Interesting story. Has the potential to become very beautiful and romantic. I am sure you will make it so ...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Hey Nidhi...All your stories are so emotional and adorable...it makes me feel a part of it. He is scared that he would lose her family...so that's why Arnav is avoiding Khushi and her love for him...but I am happy to see that he did have some feelings for Khushi...and Khushi is also aware of it. But my thinking is how long they are going to pretend. You can't hide your feelings when you are in love with somebody...wonderful chapter...eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

awesome update..initially i was worried that why arnav was dating with othr gals to keep distance from kushi and that made her hurt..but now i understood that what was the real reason behind that...so they were loving each other but started pretending as they were friends..arnav was helpless n lonely and same with kushi for diffrnt reason..arnav doesnt hav family whereas kushi has..and kushi's thought to pretend for various reasons concerning arnav was lil disappointing..why cant her family see what was going on in arnav n kushi's mind..why were they distancing arnav...and how cud she also think abt 'if brokeup'..precautionary warning eh?!loved the update dear..waiting for the next..

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Hi, I just stumbled on this story and found it interesting. Arnav doesn't want to spoil the relationship he has with Khushi's family and if that means not giving in to his feelings, so be it. But he's breaking her heart anyway - he needs to make a leap of faith here and not dwell on what-if scenarios. Poor Khushi!

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