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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeautyfulDesire

Eva is so adorable!!!! I love kids so much :) Great update!

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

i loved it yaar...
The armaan and eva bond was just osome...

Hahahah
aman seriously sound soo gudy from eva... HAye

mather daughter bond and ridhima even then thought of arman hahahah...

I just loved it...

Do continue super soonnn...

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Thank you guys so much. I really am glad that you like the update and are enjoying it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

amazing part dear

loved it
eva is so cute

Originally posted by: AR-kash

Very nice part
Eva is soo cute
finally thy found eva and brought her to ridhimma
She was si happy and armaan fulfil her wish
How sweat of him
Muskan and rahul soo cute
Cont sooon

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Jus loved this update 😳
Eva s damn cuteee 😊
Their convo was damn cutee 😊
M loving this story very much 😊
And d rahul-muskaan part was nice 😊
Waiting for the next part ⭐️

Originally posted by: jiyaa_m

nice part

awww poor muski but armaan is sooo sweet

update soon

Originally posted by: roofiya

Nice part dear...

Aww eva is soo cute...n I know that she'll get really close to her aman...
N here armaan planning to make daughter-mother his life...
Soo well written...
Continue super soon

Thank you guys for reading and commenting. I am really so grateful.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life

Nice update :)

Frustrated Muskaan is so funny
I miss her :(
I loved how Armaan's charm worked on Eva
I miss Rahul-Muskaan fights -- I loved their part especially the end
I hope nothing happens to Eva seeing that her 'real' dad is after her

Originally posted by: LilApple

cute eva and armaan
nice part

Originally posted by: sakshiksg

beautiful part.

I like every word of this part.
Muski and her condition...
Armaan and Eva's bond, how he handle her.
Riddhima and Eva's scene...
Armaan loves Riddhima as well as Eva...wow

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved Eva n Armaan scene...sweet...muski was Hilerious with Eva...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm


Thank you everyone. I'm glad u are liking Eva and Armaan.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Lovely update! Armaaan and Eva are getting close! Yayy this is getting better and better! Continue sooon Tashu! <33

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the Update
Awwiiee Armaan and Eva bond
so sweet
Poor Muskaan
Eva troubled her so much
That Rahul and Muskaan moment is cute
PLz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

Originally posted by: blessed4

That was an amazing part

PleSe continue soon

Thankz guys. I'm really happy to know that you all liked Armaan and Eva as well as RM.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GoldenSkies

No I haven't forgot to comment I'm just so lazy these days but I promise to comment very sooon cos I HAVE read it and I LOVEDDD it 😳

Thank you Kameeni Auntie for commenting. And please stop being lazy :| Also UPDATE!

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Okay this part was LOVEEE <3 He's acting as the daddy already, making Eva happy and getting all melty seeing the mom-daughter duo! And OMFG You put a lil bit of RM :') I LOVE RM. Like they were my second fave couple in DMG after AR <3 And Here they are sooo CUTE!

And OK, WHEN ARE THEY CONFESSINGGG
I Cant wait.
Love you <3

:O u didn't write in purple! I feel weird reading ur comment. Lol yes he is. practice. Well I had to give something to RM. I didn't want to leave them out. When will they confess well u will have to read to find out. ILY2<3
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As the sound of his vibrating phone echoed into his ears Armaan awoke grudgingly from his deep slumber. He had finally fallen asleep after being awake for most of the night as his mind had been preoccupied with thoughts of Riddhima and Eva. He opened his eyes partly to see his alarm clock blink back 4 am. Who was calling him at this hour? Why couldn't they let him sleep? Oh well better find out who it is he thought as he grabbed his phone from the side table. Now usually Armaan would check the caller Id before answering his phone but today he was in no mood.

"Hello!"

"He he!"

"Who is this?"

"BOOO!"

"Look whoever this is I don't have time for this okay. Goodbye!"

"...Aman."

"Eva? Sweetie is that you?"

"YAY!"

Armaan chuckled to himself as he heard his 4 am caller. How cute was this kid. She was calling him at 4 am. He had never expected that Eva would be able to make a phone call and that to at her age.

"Eva sweetie why are you awake?"

"No.Shleep. Pay!"

"Eva it's not time to play baby. It's time to sleep. You play in the morning. Okay."

"No! Eva pay Aman."

"Awww. Eva I would love to play with you sweetie but you have to ask your mommy first."

"Mommy? Otay. Eva ash."

Armaan was about to reply to Eva when he realized that she had put the phone down but had forgotten to hang up and because of that Armaan couldn't believe what he heard next.

"MOMMY! MOMMY! Pake up!"

Riddhima who had been in a deep sleep awoke as she felt Eva shaking her. She sat up and looked to see her daughter staring at her wide awake with a big smile and her little green eyes shinning with mischief.

"...Eva?"

"Mommy! Eva pay Aman pleesh?"

"Eva.I.Said.Later."

"NO! Pay now!"

"Eva. Later. Armaan. Sleep."

"No! Aman no shleep."

"What?"

"Aman pake up mommy."

"What?"

"Pait. Eva jet fone."

Eva who had dropped the phone on the bed crawled away from her mom to bring the phone back. Riddhima watched as her daughter crawled to retrieve the phone and handed it to her. She couldn't believe her daughter had called Armaan at 4 am. She felt so embarrassed. What must he be thinking? Well the only way to know that is by talking to him. And so taking a deep breath Riddhima placed the phone against her ear.

"Hello?"

"Fruit loop. Hi."

"Hi. Sorry. About. Eva."

"Oh it's okay. She didn't know."

"No.Still.Sorry."

"Don't worry about it Fruit loop. She's just a kid. And anyways I found it cute."

"Sure?"

"Yes I'm sure."

"Okay. Goodnight."

"Goodnight."

Hearing the dial tone ring into her ears Riddhima hung up the phone and smiled. He really was amazing she thought. Her daughter had woken him up at 4 am and instead of being mad about it he did the exact opposite. What he was made of she didn't know. But one thing she was sure about was that she loved him very much.

Armaan smiled as he hung up the phone. This kid was just too much. He had already fallen for her mom and now after this moment he had fallen even more for Eva.

God if you're listening please make them both mine ASAP and I promise never to annoy you again! Okay? Thankz!

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"Now this is going to be fun!"

It had been a long morning of running around and finally lunch time had arrived. Rahul who had finished his rounds early decided to have lunch with his best friend but little did he know that they would end up sitting across from each other at the table playing truth or dare. The pen that they had used to spin with had landed once again on Armaan indicating it was his turn. Rahul who loved to annoy his best friend got ready to do it once again.

"Go ahead. Ask me."

"Okay dude. Truth or Dare?"

Armaan thought for a moment trying to decide what he wanted and after a minute or two he made up his mind.

"Dare."

Rahul smirked at his friend. How he loved it when Armaan asked for a dare. It was the best thing to watch in the world. And now that he was getting anther opportunity to see Armaan in action Rahul wasn't going to let it go.

"Okay dude. Here it is. I Rahul your best friend dare you Armaan Mallik to...

"Will you get to the point dude? I don't have all day!"

"Okay. Here it is straight up. I dare you to tell Riddhima that you love her."

"WHAT!"

"Yup. You have to tell Riddhima that you love her."

"I can't do that. Change it!"

"No. Dare is a dare and you have to do it!"

"Rahul I'm not doing that!"

"Fine. Then face your punishment."

"Fine. What is it?"

"You have to tell Riddhima you love her."

"Have you gone INSANE?"

"No. I'm perfectly fine. Now are you going to do it or not?"

"No. I'm not."

"Okay then I'll tell her."

"YOU WON'T!"

"I WILL!"

"I'LL KILL YOU!"

"You can only kill me if you catch me!"

And before Armaan could do or say anything Rahul jumped from his seat and darted out the door.

Armaan whose brain was still trying to understand what had just happened finally caught up and without wasting another second he got up from his chair and ran for dear life.

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"No! I pull mommy!"

"One. More. Spoon."

It had been a good 20 minutes since Riddhima had begun to feed Eva her lunch and she still wasn't done. Eva was the only kid in the world who would take her time eating. Most children her age scarfed down there food in seconds so they could get on with other things. But Eva. She was the opposite. She loved to enjoy her food.

"Nooo! Mommy! I pull!"

"Okay. Fine."

"YAY!"

Eva clapped her tiny hands together as she finally convinced her mom that she was done. She couldn't believe how easy it was. Her mommy really was too easy. Was her friend Aman like that too? Eva then wondered where Aman was. He was supposed to come and play with her? Eva then looked toward her mommy about to ask her about Aman's whereabouts when her attention was diverted towards their room's door as it flung open and in ran a panting Rahul trying to catch his breath with an equally out of breath Armaan standing beside him. Eva seeing her friend Aman began squealing in delight.

"AMAN!"

Riddhima who had been busy trying to clean up the mess Eva had made turned around hearing the door fling open.

"Are.You.Both.Okay?"

"Yeah were fine."

Rahul replied as he found his voice before Armaan could interrupt. He wanted to get the dare started before anything happened.

"Then.Why.Are.You.Out.Of.Breath.?"

"Oh because Armaan wanted to tell you something."

"Oh.What?"

"Yeah tell her Armaan. Tell her what you have been dying to say!"

Armaan who had been standing beside Rahul praying that he wouldn't open his mouth froze in horror. What the hell had just happened? How could Rahul do such a thing! He was so going to kill him!

"Me? No. I didn't have anything to say!"

"Oh come dude. Don't lie. Tell her."

"I'm telling you Rahul I have nothing to say!"

"Okay fine. Don't tell her. I will."

"NO! I'll tell her!"

"That's like a good boy. Now you tell her what you wanted to say and me and Eva will wait outside."

And with that Rahul walked towards Eva, picked her up and walked out of the room leaving Armaan and Riddhima alone.

Armaan stood in his spot trying to control himself from killing Rahul as he watched him leave the room. He couldn't believe Rahul had gotten him to do this. Why did he have to say dare! What was wrong with telling the truth? Stupid game! Stupid Rahul! Armaan could feel his heart and mind fighting with each other. His mind was telling him to make an excuse and run while his heart was telling him to face the music.

Oh god! What do I do now? She's staring at me waiting for me to answer. Why is this happening to me? I mean I knew a day like this would come sooner or later but I didn't think it would happen now! I guess I better just face it and tell her the truth. I have to face the music. I owe it to her. But what if she doesn't love me? What if she hates me? The only way you will know is if you ask her. I guess you're right. I'm just going to have to tell her and deal with the outcome.

And so taking a deep breath Armaan prepared himself for whatever came his way.

"Umm...Riddhima...I...I don't know how to say this but...I...I...I love...I love you."

He looked at her as he finished telling her the truth. She was still staring at him dead in the face with a blank expression that he couldn't figure out. He tried to look into her eye's hoping that he would find an answer but when he did he saw nothing. Her eyes were as blank as her face.

Why isn't she saying anything? Why is she looking at me like that? Omg! She doesn't love me. I just screwed everything up! I moved to fast for her liking. I told her my feelings way to fast. Dammit! I'm such an idiot! I should have known. I mean she's a single mom. She must have recently gotten divorced and I without even thinking jumped on her. Urgggh!!!! I hate myself! I better leave before I make things worse.

"I'm sorry Riddhima. I better go."

Armaan looked at her one last time and walked out of her room lest she saw past his tears that threatened to fall at anytime.

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Riddhima sat motionless as his words rung in her ears. Had she just heard him right? Had he just told her that he loved her?

Did he just tell me that he loved me? Omg! I can't believe this! He just told me he loves me and what did I do? NOTHING! I sat here and stared at him like a dummy and didn't say a word. I can't believe I just did that to him. I broke his heart completely. I'm such an idiot! He has done so much for me in these past months and instead of telling him that I love him too I go into silent mode. Nice one Riddhima. You're amazing. You should get an award for this. But what do I do now? I need to make it up to him. I have to tell him that I love him too. But how... I know. The next time I see him I'm just going to tell him everything. I'm not going to stay silent. Yeah. That's a good idea. Now all I have to do is pray that he will still want to see me and doesn't hate me.

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Posted: 11 years ago

August 17th 2011

Today will go down as one of the worst days of my life. I should have never listened to Rahul. I should have never told Riddhima that I love her. Yeah that's right. I told her I love her and what did she say...nothing. She said absolutely nothing and you know why. Because she doesn't love me. I ruined everything. This is all my fault. Why did I have to take that chance? Why did I have to listen to my heart? What must she be thinking about me now? She must think I'm just some desperate love seeking guy. She probably doesn't even want to see me anymore. And why would she? I mean I made a complete fool out of myself in front of her. I didn't even stop when Rahul tried to ask me what was wrong. God why couldn't this all be just a bad dream. I finally fall in love and I ruin it. I lost her. But the worst part is I'm still her doctor. I still have to see her. I'm just going to have to keep my distance. I don't know how I'm going to do that but I guess I will just have to try. I'm sorry Riddhima. I'm sorry Eva. I'm really sorry.

He closed his eyes shut as his vision began to blur. How could life be so cruel? What had he done to anyone to deserve such a pain? Was this the result of falling in love? Because if that was the case then he didn't want any part of it. He didn't need her. He was better off alone. A lone tear escaped his eye and before he knew it Armaan had buried his face into his palms and broke down into sobs. Reality had finally sunk in and he had no choice but to accept it. He had lost her. He had lost his first love.

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"Come Armaan! Answer the phone!"

Rahul said impatiently for the umpteenth time in the past 1 hour. He had been trying to get a hold of Armaan ever since he had walked out of Riddhima's room without saying a word or for that matter even glancing at him. Rahul had figured out from looking at Armaan's hurt face that something had gone horribly wrong. He had tired calling out to Armaan but his voice had fallen on deaf ears. And now for the past 1 hour Rahul had been calling Armaan constantly hoping he would answer the phone and he would be able to comfort his friend. Finally as his voice mail went off Rahul hung up the phone. He was getting worried. He hoped Armaan was alright and hadn't done anything drastic.

This is all my fault! Why did I have to dare him! I'm such an idiot! Muski is right. My brain is the size of a pea. I just don't think! And now all because of my stupidity my best friend is heartbroken. Well now it's up to me to fix this. Armaan I'm coming over.

And with that, grabbing his car key's Rahul walked out of his front door to comfort his best friend come brother.

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Hearing the constant ringing of his door bell. Armaan reluctantly climbed out of his bed. Who was here now? He wondered as he grudgingly dragged himself towards his front door. He was already having a terrible day and now someone had come to visit. Just great! Now I have to deal with company. He thought bitterly as he placed his hand on the door knob and turned it. Opening the door towards him he opened it to see Rahul standing in front of him with a worried yet apologetic face.

"What do you want?"

"Dude! I've been trying to get a hold of you for the past 1 hour! Where the hell have you been?"

"I'm sorry! But I'm in no mood to talk to anyone so can you please leave me the hell alone!"

"No. I'm not leaving until you talk to me."

Armaan could see that Rahul wasn't going to budge and seeing the determined look on his face he knew he meant business. And so unwillingly he let Rahul in.

"Fine you want to talk let's talk. Let's talk about how you dared me to tell Riddhima how I felt about her! Let's talk about the fact that I made a fool out of myself in front of her! Let's talk about the fact that she doesn't love me! Let's talk about the fact that this is my entire fault that I listened to you! Let's talk about the fact that I don't know how I'm going to face her! And you know what...this is all because of YOU!"

Rahul watched and listened quietly as Armaan fired accusation after accusation at him. He felt terrible knowing that he had caused this to happen but he also knew that deep down he was only trying to help his best friend. He hadn't meant for things to get out of hand. He had only wanted Armaan and Riddhima to be together but all because of his stupid idea his friend had ended up heartbroken.

"Well? What do you have to say for your self?"

"I'm sorry. I'm sorry I tried to help you. I'm sorry I failed as a friend. I'm sorry I caused your heartbreak. I'm sorry I dared you. I'm really really sorry. I was only trying to help. I didn't mean for things to get out of hand. I wish there was something I could do to fix this but I can't. Look if you want to hate me hate me. I won't blame you."

Armaan could feel his heartbreak into pieces as he heard Rahul's words. He instantly felt guilty. How could he have blamed him for trying to help him. Rahul wasn't just his best friend he was his brother. Rahul had always been there for Armaan for as long as he could remember. Rahul had seen Armaan at his lowest points in life and here he had just yelled at him for trying to bring him and Riddhima together.

"No I'm sorry Rahul. I shouldn't have yelled at you. I mean you were only trying to help me and I just snapped at you for no reason. And one more thing. I can NEVER hate you. You're my brother."

Rahul didn't have words to express how he felt hearing Armaan address him as his brother and so he simply got up from his seat and hugged him. He hugged him hoping he would understand how much his friendship meant to him.

"Okay. Enough. If someone catches us like this they'll get the wrong message."

"Ha ha ha. Very funny. But seriously I'm really sorry."

"It's okay man."

"So. What are you going to do now?"

"What is there to do? I'm just going to keep my distance and eventually I will get over her."

"Are you serious?"

"Yeah Rahul. I'm serious."

"What ever happened to maybe..Oh..I don't know...Talking to her. Maybe straightening things out?"

"There is nothing to straighten out dude. It's over."

"Are you sure? Cause I don't think it is!"

"And how do you know? You don't even know what happened!"

"Well maybe if you told me I can figure something out!"

"Fine. You want to know then listen. I tell her that I love her and she just sits there and doesn't even say a word. Now you tell me is it over or not?"

"Omg! You're such a moron!"

"Excuse me?"

"Dude! She was in shock! That's why she didn't say anything and because you didn't stay long enough she didn't get a chance to answer you which is why you thought she doesn't love you."

"Oooh."

"Now don't just sit here! Get off your *** and go talk to her!"

"Now?"

"No next year! Of course NOW!"

"What if I mess up again?"

"Will you shut up and go!"

"Okay. I'm going."

"Best of luck!"

"Thanks man."

As he got up from his seat Armaan felt a weight lift off of him. He felt a lot better after talking to Rahul. And now that he knew what had gone wrong he was ready to fix it. He was ready to face her one more time.

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It had been a strange day to say the least for Riddhima. She had never imaged that she would have behaved the way she had with Armaan today. He had taken a big step and told her how he felt and she had done nothing in return. She hadn't even said a word. But it wasn't her fault. She had been taken off guard with his proclamation and she didn't know how to react. After all it wasn't everyday that someone came up to her and said that they loved her. Oh well better get some sleep and hopefully in the morning I'll be able to fix everything. And with that Riddhima lay down beside Eva and was about to close her eyes when the creaking sound of the door opened. She lifted her head up from the pillow and saw the one person she had been waiting to see ever since he had walk out of her room's door. Armaan.

"Umm...Hi."


So that was part 1 of this chapter. It was getting to be too long so I had to break it up. And as you can see it didn't fit in one post. Hence there will be a part 2 and if need be a part 3. Just wanted to let you all know.Anyways I hope you all enjoy and let me know how it was. PM and Index are on page:1.

Okies bye.

-Tashu-

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Armaan confessed :O Can't wait to read the rest :) Amazing update as always.
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Awesome part
Loved it soo much
Finally armaan confessed and he didnt wait for ridhimma to say
Eva is so cute she called armaan at 4 am in mor aww
Hope ridhimma confess soon
Cont soon
Cant wait
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Amazingly written...
Finally armaan confessed...
Haa waiting for ridhima's answer...
Awww armaan n eva...soo cute they both r...
Continue super soon please...

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