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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

awsm updt
wow rey remember evry thng
taani y dnt she tell him
so bad he us so confused wit her
arghh rahul y he always poke in his nose
idiot pata nai ab aage kya karega
precap is amzng
updt sn


Thanks dear...Thank u so much! I am glad u liked it..will update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

Firstly a big thank u for dedicating d ch to me
i m at cloud nine r8 now
u actually made me feel sooo special
n before i write anything else i just wanna correct u
my name is KRITI n not kirti
90% ppl get my name wrong n i can't help but correct them
anyways coming to d updt
it was simply fab
spl d line wer rey said dat he knows taani is supressing her feelings n it really hurts him
i love d way rey is always der for taani
i m so happy d way he threatened rahul dat if he eyes taani he'll be dead
also maya smirking in d end was nyc
i m sure she totally understands d chemistry our taarey share
now coming to d precap part
i was sooo damn happy wen i read that coz i clearly remebered u said this part was somewhere near tr confession
n i hav been waiting for tr confession since sooo long
now all i can say is i m very eagerly waiting for d upcoming updates
plz plz updt soon


Oppsss...Kriti... sorry! I didn't realize... Ya... I got confused! Extremly sorry... And, Thanks a lot for such a wonderful comment! Thanks a lot...

Wow...@Bold: You remembered it..Very few ppl know it.. Anyway!

Thanks again.. will update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

soo fab updat dr

its awsm


Thanks Chand.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamanbk

Fantastic update

Taarey scenes were so intense
Precap is interesting
I hope Taani confesses
Please update soon and pm me


Thanks sweetie...Thank u so much! Will update soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

WOW! lovely updt...

rey is tryng to remember last night 's incident...his room is total mess...
finally he remember everythng...
taani is so nervous to face rey after last night...she want run from there...
taarey convo is emotional...it's so painful for both of them...
maya took both them for dinner...uurrgghhh that rahul...what that creep now doing there...rey's reaction is lovely...
precap seems interstng...plzzz updt soon


Thanks dear...Thank u so much! I am glad u liked it...will update soon..Thanks for such a lovely comment! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

res
unres
first of all ish it was superb and awesome
the confrontation of taarey after both knowing the truth and taani denying and rey trying to find out the cause of the deniylll was depicted beautifully
loved it so much
and now the part where u played with words to show their mental state...


"You don't hate me." Rey said. Taani walked by him, she closed her eyes tightly and opened it. "Aisa kuch nahi hua.. Aap-" But, before she could say, Rey was in front of her. The distance between them was so much less. She just wanted to flung her arms around him and hug him. She was tired, mentally, physically, emotionally. But, she shook her head mentally. She looked down on the ground.

"If you don't hate me. Then, why did you say, you did?" Rey asked. Taani could feel the hurt, the way his voice became low. She gulped. She didn't answer.

Rey was frustratingly waiting for her answer. "Answer me." He demanded. But, she didn't say. She didn't.

If she don't hate me. If I affect her last time... I am missing something. Rey thought.

"Taani...last night.."He was about to say something. But, she stopped him.

"Last night?? That was a mistake Rey. Just a mistake. Nothing happened. Just forget it." How much she tried to stay with the firm face. Her voice was betraying her. It was low sounded like she was about to cry.

"What? Forget? Taani. What happened between us was NOTHING. ? Mistake?" Rey asked her with disbelief.

"Yes. It was a mistake." Taani said. She didn't look at him. "It can't be nothing Taani, we-" Rey was about to say, but Taani glared at him.

"We what?? You know what Rey, I am disgusted with you." Taani hissed. Rey's eyes narrowed on her. Hurt was evident on his face. Taani herself was shocked. She wanted to take those words back.

"Really??" Rey asked. Taani looked away. Rey took two steps back, facing his back to her. Taani bite her lips. In another moment, Rey turned and stood mere inches from her.

"Is that so Taani? Then, why didn't you push me?? Why didn't you slap me? I was the one who was drunk. So??" He title his head and glared down at her. Taani gulped a lump in her throat.

He just nodded at her. "Come on. Go and file a sexual harassment case on me. Come on.."


again now i am feeling u will move the story towards confession in your own stye coz ur lines like

"How much you try Taani, you can't hide your emotions from me. I don't know why, you are doing it. But, it's too much to bear." Rey murmured, still not facing her.

now rey is totally sure that taani loves him from heart but not accepting due to some reason and rey will obviously try to find out the reason behind it

also loved the place where taani has only the capacity to cool down rey in his famous anger her mere one touch can make rey forget every thing...

Taani kept a hand on Rey's back. Rey relaxed. But, his glare stayed on Rahul.

"I will kill you." Rey hissed. Rahul galred at Rey. " I mean it Rahul, you dare to look at her once, your death is in my hands."

he is so protective for taani but taani has enourmous effect on him and on the other hand u have shown that taani's heart is crying for rey she so wants to go near him hugg him and confess her love for him

She just wanted to flung her arms around him and hug him. She was tired, mentally, physically, emotionally. But, she shook her head mentally. She looked down on the ground.



precap is awesome coz i will love ur confession chapter coz it will come after so much mental delema and inner turmoil

and i know my sweet sis will do justice while writing it and waiting for the next
with lots of love
priyanka diii



Thanks di...Thank u so much! I have no words... You are the best sis... Thanks again! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

All scenes r amazing...👍🏼

Precap is intresting look like conffession is coming soon...😉

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😊


Thanks dear...Thank u so much!

@Bold: You got it right... ;)

Will update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Tooo fab update.precap is more interstng update soon



Thanks sweetie...Thank u so much! will update soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samruddhi

omg... such a warm welcome😃u r truly a sweetheart...means abhi toh i guess 2 weeks bhi nahi huye hai india forums join kiye huye n u ... u...dedicate a whole update to me...😉 thnq thnq thnq sooo much frm d bottom of my heart...i read it around 7:30 n tabse i m just smiling...n itna zyada smiling ki mummy bhi puch rahi thi ki aaj kya ho gaya hai tujhe????😳 n mai toh tumhare post ki first line padhke hi flat ho gayi thi ...that d update is dedicated to me... u made my day gurl...😳

n now abt d update: ur writing is improving day by day...with each update u r raising the bar higher n higher..."RESPECT"...n itna faadu update tha yaar ... taarey ki yaad aa gayi...aaj toh rula hi diya yaar tumne...that "mistake" word n all...errrggghhh i am loving it more n more😊
loved d update to d core... n yeah this is my favourite update... d reasons r obvious😊😊
n yeah last me i read d precap n kuch kuch similar sa laga(i have a good memory😃😳)...so confession is on the cards for taarey hmmm...😆😉
Maya is turning out to be positive...n loved when rey held that bad guy's(he who shouldn't be named😛)collar... loving this rey...aur taani bhi yaar ...she is hell confused rather scared that coz of her rey shouldn't get into any kind of trouble...so she's running away from him...this is very difficult fr both of them...but finally she's gonna open up in next few "EPISODES"😊😆
aur zyada bore nahi karungi... but again thanku thanku thanku fr dedicating this chapter to me...n thanku fr d update as well n waiting eagerly fr next updates😳😳😳... bless u😊


It's fine dear... Thanks a lot sweetie... Thank u so much! Your not boring me.. lol... Thanks again! Will update soon! :)

@Bold: You got there... 😆 Yep, confession is coming! :)
Edited by Ish_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update

as usual it was written superbly

just wanted to read more n more

i was also sad while reading as i could feel their pain

awesome yar

precap is super awesome

as last part was nearer to confession as i remember

update next part asap

❤️


Aimen...My sweet... Thank you so much..Thanks a lot! Will update soon...Yes, you remember right! It's confession! ;) Will update soon.. :)

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