#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Seats hi reserve ki ya kuch pda bhi? i ma dying to know your views... i have ten files on my table and leaving them all i am waiting for your views...

ok go and read dear...😳

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: meerab147
mindblowing update dear👏...beautifully written👏...

loved each and every singal line❤️❤️❤️...

what a couple yaar❤️...how much they care for each other...shooo cute and romantic😳😳😳...
song u used was tooo good complimenting their beautiful moments...
nice to see how astha is making him to wait...well thats good for us...more she will make him wait ...more we will get their romance...

hugs and kissies for u jeenia dear🤗❤️....
tooo good update...aur kya kahoon...ab tu aadat si hogayi hai aisi awesomeee updates pardhney ki...
❤️❤️❤️
love u dear...🤗❤️
GOD bless u⭐️

Awe... Thanks a lot dear. how hard work you put in pasting these pics??????OMG... atleast i can't...
YA, they are too much in love...
and song was just one of my all time favorite romantic songs...
Thnaks a lot once again...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice happy chapter:)

Thanks a lot dear... this was one of my longest chapters and loved your long feedback...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: meerab147
ok go and read dear...😳

Thanks a lot ..so sweet of you...

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Tum ho saath mere paas mere ho tum yoon

Jeetna mehsoos karu tumko utna hi paa bhi loon...

Omg what a romantic date, they r madly love with inch other. ...soo cute they are..haaye kisi ki nazar na lage...and karva chauth again...1 year ho bhi gaya...good...now shlok has another plan to confess aastha...😆 Shlok ya to master planer hai ya fir love guru...har baat k liye plan hota hai uss k paas...now I will wait and watch...how will he do...amazing update jeenia...lovely...

Arz kia hai...

Bas ek choti si haan kar do

Hamare naam iss tarah sara jahan kar do

Wo mohobbat jo tumhare dil me hai

Unn ko zuban per lao or bayan kar do

Apne dil me iss tarah chupalo mujko

Rahoon humesha iss me aisa mera makan kar do...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Awe... Thanks a lot dear. how hard work you put in pasting these pics??????OMG... atleast i can't...
YA, they are too much in love...
and song was just one of my all time favorite romantic songs...
Thnaks a lot once again...

welcome dear...

these pics are here becuse i want to show the love we have for ur work...just try to convey how beautiful is your work...and how much we like it...so its just a small try...to appreciate one's nice work...😳

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

hey my laptop got stuck suddenly
I'm not able comment frommy phone that long
I'msorry
I'm trying comment cannot
Will comment soon sorry

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maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

hmmm karwa chauth ...
grt going jeenia lovin it...
but u didnt pm me yaar..
shlok and aastha are so sadistic,
but i just love the way they share deir relationshp...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Tum ho saath mere paas mere ho tum yoon
Jeetna mehsoos karu tumko utna hi paa bhi loon...

Omg what a romantic date, they r madly love with inch other. ...soo cute they are..haaye kisi ki nazar na lage...and karva chauth again...1 year ho bhi gaya...good...now shlok has another plan to confess aastha...😆 Shlok ya to master planer hai ya fir love guru...har baat k liye plan hota hai uss k paas...now I will wait and watch...how will he do...amazing update jeenia...lovely...

Arz kia hai...

Bas ek choti si haan kar do
Hamare naam iss tarah sara jahan kar do
Wo mohobbat jo tumhare dil me hai
Unn ko zuban per lao or bayan kar do
Apne dil me iss tarah chupalo mujko
Rahoon humesha iss me aisa mera makan kar do...

Wow...
Thnaks a lot dear...ya ...ek saal ho bhi gya...look we had Last karwa chauth, then diwali..then Panchgani..semester break... then third sem starting and Swati case., its their third semester near end...

Yaar i am counting the time properly as it will work in future very much...will be much needed...you will find in future updates...
Ultimate ultimate words...really suit for shlok who is dying to listen that yes from her...
Will she , will she not?
Wait... but i promise, you will get what you have not read anywhere else...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: niki795
hey my laptop got stuck suddenly
I'm not able comment frommy phone that long
I'msorry
I'm trying comment cannot
Will comment soon sorry

don't worry dear...i will wait...